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Posted: Fri Nov 03, 2006 11:35 pm
We close our eyes while we look to the sky. What holds up the stars begins to shake. We smile and laugh as they begin to fall.
I look at you, in tears, and wonder why. What do I have to do? What will it take? This isn't fair, it makes no sense at all.
The pain is gone now, I no longer cry. I haven't looked back, you were only a fake. I'll always walk, and never crawl.
The pain came back, I mourned your loss. Why can't we find pleasure? Is the world only pain? I just have to ask; why are people so unkind?
It took me awhile, but I know I'm the boss. I'm the only loon in a world of the sane. So I accept my kingdom, made up of the blind.
I'm sorry you read this to your own loss, but my faith in what's real is beggining to wane. This is a pointless lament on the loss of my mind.
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 9:34 am
Aw... that's sad. I'll be sane with you... I can make cookies... sweatdrop
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 10:18 am
I liked that, especially the style it was written in. Very nice.
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 10:57 pm
Thanks. It was a spur of the moment kind of thing, so I didn't expect anyone to like it.
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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 1:48 pm
I liked ti a ton.
And got it, too.
Have a cookie. *tosses cookies*
AND OMG I HAVE HALLOWEEN CANDY LEFT! *runsawaytoscarfdownendlessmindnumbingsugar*
GASP!
I love the poem.
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