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The Fire's Destruction

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]Impetigo[

PostPosted: Sat Oct 21, 2006 5:32 pm


Ash floating through the air
Resembling snow in all but color
Smoky smell lingers here
Decrepitated house,
Frowning, crying
Battered Broken Bruised
Burnt
The sound of silence had been shattered by screams
Screaming destruction, death,
Dire consequences to follow
The austere autumn air
Makes one shiver
Yet the chill breeze isn’t the only thing
Giving me the shakes
Ruined things lie on the ground
All with a blackish tinge
A blackened leaf snaps off the old oak
And falls at my feet
Black flakes dancing in the wind
Resembling the snow that will come, and smother all.


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Based on something that happened in real life. Don't worry, it didn't happen to me! Still...it effected me enough that I had to write about it.

Feedback appreciated.
PostPosted: Sat Oct 21, 2006 8:30 pm


*steals to put in book*

Mwahaha, ninja

KirbyVictorious


]Impetigo[

PostPosted: Sun Oct 22, 2006 4:13 pm


KirbyVictorious
*steals to put in book*

Mwahaha, ninja

So, I take it you like it? neutral
PostPosted: Sun Oct 22, 2006 6:24 pm


Wow, I like it!

*Applauds*

Ablepsy


Oukow

PostPosted: Tue Oct 24, 2006 8:06 am


*also applauds*
PostPosted: Tue Oct 24, 2006 1:17 pm


Very nice.

[ In Nomine Satanas ]


Gomenroia

PostPosted: Tue Oct 24, 2006 6:21 pm


I like it! It's sad though... was everyone alright?
PostPosted: Tue Oct 24, 2006 6:29 pm


NO.... of course I didn't like it.


Okay, evil Kirby gone.

I love it, of course. Which is why I'm moving it to the poetry subforum. *moves*

>.> <.< *steals*

KirbyVictorious

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