Welcome to Gaia! ::

Infinite possibilities-A writer's guild

Back to Guilds

This is a writer's guild where all can gather for feedback and advice on all mediums of writing. Plus it's a great place for conversation. 

Tags: Writing, Writer, Writer's Block, Critiques, Friends 

Reply Poetry and Lyricism
Hate

Quick Reply

Enter both words below, separated by a space:

Can't read the text? Click here

Submit

We learned to change
  but did we change to learn?
View Results

Spastic waffles
Captain

PostPosted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 6:59 pm


HOMG WAFFLES WROTE A NEW POEM!!!

Actually, I wrote three. This is the first.

Such a happy title, no? Anyway, on to the important part.


DON'T speak to me.
Shouldn't be too hard, you haven't in two weeks anyway.
If ever you're in my proximity,
Don't even look in my general direction.
Go somewhere I can't see.
I never want to look at your face again.
I'm done wasting my energy
On trying to figure out what I did wrong.
You know, it's funny.
You managed to make me blame myself...for what you did.
It took me WAY too long to finally
Realize it was too good to be true.
It went from something heavenly
To me seeing the jackass you are.
My life was a movie.
I was finally going to get that fairy-tale ending.
You made me believe.
And then, you shattered my dream. Thanks.
Don't even TRY to say sorry.
That constitutes talking, remember?
Just leave me be.
I. Hate. You.



Eh, it's a bit colloquial for poetry, and in this poem I decided not to believe in any sort of beat or flow, but in my defense there is a rhyme scheme.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 8:30 pm


I WANT to quote this at a certain person in my confirmation class...

oh good, now instead of kicking his a** I can just think about this. Thanks, Capitana!

KirbyVictorious


Spastic waffles
Captain

PostPosted: Mon Oct 30, 2006 6:01 pm


KirbyVictorious
I WANT to quote this at a certain person in my confirmation class...

oh good, now instead of kicking his a** I can just think about this. Thanks, Capitana!
De nada.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 03, 2006 7:03 am


heart

KirbyVictorious


Gomenroia

PostPosted: Fri Nov 03, 2006 8:53 am


hmm


You need cookies!

Eat them before Hawk gets here...
PostPosted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 10:19 am


Woo!

Xahmen
Vice Captain

Reply
Poetry and Lyricism

 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum