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Xahmen
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 7:00 pm


[ This is another part of my release. Originally this was the second thing I did in this guild. ]

Well, now I see we have another classic.
The fire apears to have gone out, so huddle close to each other; as the cold outside can only be matched by the cold in my head.

Right, enough of that.
The story we have now is more of a poem;
I want you to hold your breath when you read it, and don't let it out until it's over.


Infinity

The Bones. break in their arm.
You just Shatter.ed the elbow of the person in front of you.
You scream.
They scream louder.
Why.?

I live in all of you.
I am you.
Tell them you Did.nt do it, tell them I did it.
If you're lucky, they won't put you away in prison.
If you're lucky enough they'll call you insane.
Between you and me though, they're the mental ones.
They're the ones that hide behind masks and pass judgment.
I live in them too, so I would know.
I live in everyone.
I hide underneath the surface of You.r face.
When your girlfriend cheats on you. Do. it.
When your boyfriend dumps you. Do It.?
I wait for you; for your clarity, for your calm objectiveness.

The moment.
The moment You. let go.
The moment you Can't. hold it any longer.

The bones break.
I see red.

Don't Deny. the true nature of man.
I am enlightenment.
Me.!
I. Sit.
I stew.
What Am. I?
I am life in itself.
I represent everything that Gandhi stood against.
The Rage. in the heart of everyone.

I. close the doors to rationality.
All that you despise, is all that I am.
When all is over, I Am. God to you.
You thank me for being there.
I care about you.
I'll always be here.
For Infinity.
PostPosted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 7:35 pm


What I love most is that which isn't seen, or stated directly anyways.

Bones shatter. Why did you do it? You can't deny me. Am Rage. I am infinity. (by the way was there supposed to be an I before "am rage?" just wondering.

[ In Nomine Satanas ]


Xahmen
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 7:49 pm


[ In Nomine Satanas ]
What I love most is that which isn't seen, or stated directly anyways.

Bones shatter. Why did you do it? You can't deny me. Am Rage. I am infinity. (by the way was there supposed to be an I before "am rage?" just wondering.

Nope.
Read the way it is.
Just sounds weird.
PostPosted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 7:54 pm


nevertheless, it sounds good.

[ In Nomine Satanas ]


lidless_i

PostPosted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 9:57 pm


Nice, specially what the words in bold say...It's sort of ominous sweatdrop
PostPosted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 8:36 pm


*pants*

I can't hold my breath that long!

*huffhuffhuff*

I think I just got a whole lot more pink and a whole lot less fluffy O.o

KirbyVictorious

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