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 Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 8:38 pm
Hi, this is my first post in this guild and I'm hoping I get a lot of critique and help better my art. Anything and everything that may help me do that is welcome in here.
This is my very first time using prisma colored pencils (and just for the record it looked much better in real life-my scanner isn't the best.)
Thank you!
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Posted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 6:33 am
Something about her mouth looks small in comparison to the rest of the face, and her midrift might be a little too slender,
but this is really nice. : D
You did a wonderful job on her top, in particular.
The design is gorgeous, it looks like something straight out of a Madeline's Daughter dress shop.
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Posted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 7:42 am
Sign-up Free Something about her mouth looks small in comparison to the rest of the face, and her midrift might be a little too slender,
but this is really nice. : D
You did a wonderful job on her top, in particular.
The design is gorgeous, it looks like something straight out of a Madeline's Daughter dress shop.
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Posted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 10:32 am
This is very good, I really like the design of the top, you did a wonderful job on it.
But the hand kinda bugs me, it needs to be a bit bigger, unless it's behind her hair, then you need to add a bit more shading and shadows to show that it is.
But never the less, awesome pic! ^_^
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Posted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 11:10 am
Juffie Eve This is very good, I really like the design of the top, you did a wonderful job on it.
But the hand kinda bugs me, it needs to be a bit bigger, unless it's behind her hair, then you need to add a bit more shading and shadows to show that it is.
But never the less, awesome pic! ^_^
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Posted: Sat Aug 05, 2006 7:31 pm
Is there anything else wrong with my piece? I want to know before I start a new work with prisma colors.
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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 1:24 pm
Yeah scanners suck a**.
The colouring is beautiful.
I can't tell, is the crown supposed to be too small for her head??
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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 1:47 pm
Very good! I love the pattern on the top!
But, the crown/hat bothers me, so does her slightly misshapen nose and small lips. Plus her eyes are looking in slightly different directions (I always have trouble with that too).
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