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Topaz Quasar

PostPosted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 3:39 pm


So, I drew this one when I should have been studying for an exam... razz Took about 30 minutes. (Yes, I'm slow.) It's of Crono_Leonhart, which may or may not join this guild... razz

Now, before you judge this pic, keep in mind that my scanner isn't working, so this is a picture of it, taken with my camera. I tried to dissolve the flash by angling the picture, and photoshopping it darker. It looks much better on paper. (Maybe Tawney can lend me her scanner... biggrin )

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One other thing. I'll fix the ear. razz
PostPosted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 3:44 pm


There isn't an underscore in my name mad

Crono Leonhart
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KotariZythynn

PostPosted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 5:29 pm


Sweet :p If you want And since you have photoshop, you can adjust the levels
(image > adjustments > levels) and drag the little sliders and it should bring out the lines a little better. :p (or duplicate the layer and click multiply) there are many ways.. you just gotta tinker with it xD

As for critique:
I think the ear is a little too small. Thats the biggest thing that sticks out for me.
PostPosted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 6:44 pm


Hmm... I say the hat needs a little more structure. It just looks like a burlap bag, right now. His face shape, depending on what you were going for, is a little chubby.

Kit ~ Invader of Dreams


Apeiron King of Light

PostPosted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 8:58 pm


Like stated above, a few simple buttons in photoshop can give you a clearer picture. (or...like some do, just use the sketch as a refrence to draw over in photoshop for lineart)

Well for starters, I really like the work on the eyes ^^ And ya, to me the ear just really stands out...I think due to perspective we see the character, it should be bigger.

Also the next seems a bit think, but it's hard to really say with out the shoulders atleast to see it.

Other then that, it looks pretty nice...and I really like how you did the hat, since that one is pretty difficult for me ^^;;
PostPosted: Sat Jun 24, 2006 1:40 am


I think it's great, maybe moving the ear down abit would help.

I don't know much about making lines darker and such.. but lets just hope your scanner gets fixed soo, yaar?

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Pixel is Too Perfect

PostPosted: Sun Jun 25, 2006 5:03 pm


Puh-lease, I take all my pictures with a camrea and they are the foshizzle'.

But that's very cute either way.
PostPosted: Tue Jun 27, 2006 9:29 pm


I like the drawing as it is. Nice work.
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