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 Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 7:40 pm
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Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 8:17 pm
I really like the first two (in color more than grey, I think) and the fourth one. Did you ink it with a brush? I love the way it's drawn! The pose of the girl in the second drawing is great. Her face is probably my favorite part, though. But she's got an... interestingly shaped hip/belly area... which would probably be less weird if there wasn't such a huge and also very thin gap between her breasts and her belly button. Her arms are definitely too short to match up with her torso, in any case. And with the way her legs are drawn/placed, it looks like you'd still be able to see some crotch under that belt.
The last drawing is cute, but the fingers showing on her hip are bugging me because they're giant. Unless she's wearing a glove! It kind of looks like a glove.
I also think that I like these better than the last stuff you've posted. Not that I didn't like your other stuff! I just like this more, either because it's better or because it's different or both.
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Posted: Thu May 18, 2006 2:31 am
iperhaps it's more pertaining to stuff yoou used to do, but i never quite understood why people always accused your art of being too anime.
anyway, i think the torso's are looking a bit elongatd, and the arms a bit too short. but it's usually not very distracting.
I do really like the inkwashes on nora's picture, the colors ones.
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Posted: Thu May 18, 2006 3:52 pm
Be honest about the Scorpina pic.
Is the elongated torso really distracting? As much as I've been looking at it, I never really noticed until something was mentioned.
Mm...it'll be something to consider in my next project.
More power to the Portfolio!!!
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Posted: Thu May 18, 2006 4:36 pm
Well... If I hadn't found it distracting, I wouldn't have mentioned it. So honestly, yes, it does distract me. If other people don't find it distracting, then... they don't? I was just pointing it out because it sticks out at me as something that could be worked on when I look at it. If you don't think so, then that's fine. Either way, I'd be interested in seeing it finished, if you ever do more with it.
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Posted: Thu May 18, 2006 4:40 pm
The first two are amazing, I really love the way you portray ice gaunlets. The third is alright, but her waist and chest seem out of proportion to her bum and thighs. Her left arm seems to be skinnier than her other too.
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Posted: Thu May 18, 2006 5:29 pm
I like 'em. I have to agree that the third girl, although a**-kicking and with an excellent expression, looks like she has been given someone else's hips. The ribcage is just too far from the top of the pelvis, even in tall, skinny girls it's only 3 fingers between. (This can obviously be exaggerated because I think you pull it off in the top 2 pictures, however she has got broader shoulders and less of a ribcage/pelvis size difference)
I must also say I'm not too keen on the way you have drawn her floating boob in the last picture. It looks wrong. I love the V's though, you got a really great hand position just there, slightly tilted back.
I like the second picture best, jubbly colours. The fourth looks...hairy xd
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