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PostPosted: Fri Dec 13, 2013 8:03 pm



Kekkei Genaki Name: N/A
Clan's Name: The Star Clan
Head/Elder (none)
Symbol:
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Clan Village: (Scattered across the Ninja World)
Clan Description:
The Star Clan was an infamous family of ninjas who were descended from a long line of assassins. It is reputed that they would do anything for money, making them enemies in numerous places. Eventually, this led to them taking the Path of Darkness, as they became ever more obsessed with power. The Main group contained ten members, this included two parents and their very young son. So far the rest of the members remain unknown but it appears that each member bears a Star mark either on their clothes or body. However, the entire clan was exterminated by a combined Team of two of the most Elite ANBU from each of the 5 Great Nations sixteen years ago due to their actions. The youngest member of the clan was taken by one of the ANBU and was thrown as an outcast somewhere in the Ninja World left to die. That ninja eventually went to his own village, and started their new life there. It is unknown that if there were other members prior to the eradication of the Main group, but it is assumed that the rest of the members eventually died.

Clan's signature Jutsu: Kon'i [Soul Menace]
Rank: A
Element: Null
Classification: Taijutsu
Description: This Technique starts with an elbow strike to stun the enemy, then a powerful punch which sends a large amount of chakra through the opponent's body.

The technique is a form of self resonance which is only known to be usable by a select number of individuals. By resonating with one's own chakra with the target's, the user can forcefully drive their own chakra directly into an opponent's body through a physical strike on them. The incompatible Wavelength can cause strong direct and internal damage capable of breaking bones and severely damaging Internal Organs. It is even capable of damaging someone who is being protected by Prestigious Armor.

► Kage Bushin no Jutsu

Advantages/Special Abilities:
[Physical Strength]
Members are naturally stronger and quicker than the average Ninja at their Rank due to their Training and inheritance to a Ninja Clan made purely of Assassins.
[Stealth]
Members of the Star Clan have studied the art of assassination so much that they've grown adapted to it and are born with expert assassin skills. When they are serious about a situation, they can often take advantage of their opponents blind spots.
[Adaptability]
Members of the Star Clan have shown the ability to come up with new fighting styles to respond to their opponents if their own fighting style isn't working.
[Mastery of Kenjutsu/Bukijutsu]
The Star Clan takes much pride in their use of Kenjutsu, it being a key part of their arsenal. They are worthy of being called Kenjutsu Masters, being faster and generally stronger than those familiar in the Kenjutsu arts. They are also able to manipulate swords very precisely. This, puts them on par with those more proficient with swords and weaponry. Members carry many weapons around with them. Instead of just one Ninja Pouch, and Kunai Holster, they carry four of each. The number of weapons they can carry are extremely impressive.
[Elemental Specialty]
Members can be very diverse and have complete Mastery over a chosen Element. So much Mastery, that they can perform Jutsu of that Element with only one hand. Not only that, but their speed when using their Jutsu is above Average. They are so proficient in those arts that Jutsu from that element have their Rank increased by one.

Disadvantages: Members are so focus in only Taijutsu, Kenjutsu, and Weaponry, that they aren't as proficient in Ninjutsu as other Ninja. They can only learn Techniques up to A-Rank from their main element, and Techniques up to B-Rank from any other Element.
Kekkei Genkai/Clan owners: Noisy Noivern
Is it open for everyone: No. Only if you contact me asking to Join.





☆ Other Clan Techniques ☆

Jutsu Name: Supīdo☆Sutā [Speed☆Star]
Rank: B-Rank [Passive]
Element: Null
Classification: Nin/Taijutsu
Description: The user is able to move at extremely high speeds to the point where even his movements can't be seen, allowing them to perform both rapid attacks and defensive evasions. This grants the user the advantages of being able to not only approach and attack either an enemy's blind or weak spot, but to also allow him to better engage and fight in close combat.
However, this ability does have a weakness in that it must be preformed upon a surface that can produce a good amount of grip. If the surface does not have the required friction, the user is likely to trip, even ground made slippery by recent rain is enough to produce this reaction.

Jutsu Name: Torappu☆Sutā [Trap☆Star]
Rank: A-Ranked [Passive]
Element: Null
Classification: Ninjutsu/Bukijutsu
Description: The user traps the opponent by forming the shape of a five-point star slightly above the ground with the Chain of Blackness so that anything that enters the area will by instantly sensed by the user and bound in the chains before they can escape. The user's ability to sense an opponent even extends to the area underground, by using the vibrations travelling on the Chain of Blackness to sense his opponent's Chakra.
• This Jutsu can only be used when the Chain of Blackness is used

Jutsu Name: Shīrudo☆Sutā [Shield☆Star]
Rank: B-Ranked
Element: Null
Classification: Ninjutsu/Bukijutsu
Description: The user creates a shield in the shape of a golden star with the Chain of Blackness' chains for defense. This Jutsu blocks any B-Ranked technique and lower, and can be used up to Three Times before disappearing. If this Jutsu makes contact with any A-Ranked or higher Technique, the shield will Block the Technique for a brief moment, but ultimately break apart.
• This Jutsu can only be used when the Chain of Blackness is used

Jutsu Name: Kahō [Addition]
Rank: B-Ranked
Element: Null
Classification: Ninjutsu/Kenjutsu
Description: After a powerful swing of a single Katana connects, the user releases the used blade and before the enemy can recover from the cut, the user then makes a hand seal as another Katana immediately appears in their hand. Immediately afterwards, the user strikes the target again, but before the target recovers from the stun, the user makes a hand sign as another blade appears in their hand. This process is then repeated several additional times in quick succession, from various angles and positions around the victim, ultimately leaving a total of twelve swords attached to their body. The extent of the injuries caused as a result of this technique, could be minor to fatal, depending on how much damage the user decides to inflict upon the target.

Jutsu Name: Jōhō [Multiplication]
Rank: A-Ranked
Element: Null
Classification: Ninjutsu/Kenjutsu
Description: With this Jutsu, the user is able to Multiply the Katana in their Possession by simply making one hand sign while the Katana is in hand. The Multiplied Katana appear in the air, and fall straight into the ground, piercing it and anything beneath the blades.
• This Technique Multiplies the blades [100] times.

Jutsu Name: Tōga [Sword Fang]
Rank: D-Ranked
Element: Null
Classification: Kenjutsu
Description: After positioning three swords so that they're parallel to each other in the ground, the user makes a quick swing to the hilts of the swords impaled in the ground with the current sword in their hand causing the blades to come up from the ground and quickly slash upwards. Members of the Star Clan are able to throw the blades up and have them land precisely parallel to each other wherever the user chooses to position them.

Jutsu Name: Suichoku no Narabi [Vertical Line]
Rank: D-Ranked
Element: Null
Classification: Kenjutsu
Description: Immediately following the use of Sword Fang, and while all three swords are in the air, the user strikes the swords with the current one in their possession. Each of the three blades are struck separately and in such a manner that they are launched directly towards the target in a linear trajectory, with a tremendous amount of force, meaning they act as long projectiles. As a result of The User's considerable skill and precise accuracy, the attack itself is extremely difficult to avoid without incurring some damage, due to the tightly grouped blades leaving hardly any room for the opponent to conduct a successful parry.

Jutsu Name: Ranritsu no Narabi [Disorderly Line]
Rank: B-Ranked
Element: Null
Classification: Kenjutsu
Description: The user swings their currently held sword in a circular motion, causing all of the blades in the area to be propelled upwards. By then utilizing the collisions between the swords to keep them aloft, the user is able to ensure that they're continually surrounded by a large quantity of blades regardless of their movements. Due to the close proximity and number of the involved swords, the user can unleash the full potential of their expert swordsmanship to then bombard the enemy with an unrelenting stream of attacks from all directions.

Jutsu Name: Mugen [Infinity]
Rank: A-Ranked [Passive]
Element: Null
Classification: Ninjutsu/Kenjutsu
Description: Through the manipulation of the large black scarf that Masamune gives the user, the user is capable of generating a significant number of hardened swords [5], composed from the same black shadow-like substance as the Pitch Black Scarf. If used offensively, the Blades can be launched and they are able to pierce through most substances with relative ease, just like the original Masamune could. The Shadow Blades can also take turns slicing the target after the real blade, Masamune, has made its strike. This results in the swords creating a vicious slicing motion that can cut the target into Multiple Pieces, giving the target an enormous amount of wounds. The Shadow Blades only stop the onslaught of cuts when the original, Masamune, has come to a rest. Once that happens, the blades do not disappear, but hover around the user.
• Can only be used while Masamune is in use


Clan Head: (none)
Clan Owner: Noisy Noivern

Requirements:
• Your RPC must have a "☆Star" in their Name
• Your RPC must be Skilled in Kenjutsu before anything else

Allowed members in Clan: [3]

Current Users
• Noisy Noivern




- Clan Weapons -
► Special Summoning Scroll Arm Wraps
Description: Members have special seals on their hand wraps that allow them to summon and use Multiple weapons at their Disposal by using D-Ranked chakra. The weapons are as Listed, and can be used in many different ways by having their own Techniques that go with them.
Chain of Blackness
This is a powerful offensive/defensive weapon. It surrounds the user in a circle of Black chains, which serve to parry and protect them from incoming attacks. However, this form also has two sword sized blades in which the user can hold onto, allowing them to wield, parry, and attack. Users could also can throw these weapons, and manipulate the trajectory of the attack mid-flight by using the Black chains.
Leaf of the Moonlit Night
This weapon contains a lot of special maneuvers within it, giving the user extreme amounts of versatility. First off, as a shuriken, it can be thrown long distances, and is said to cut through almost any substance. The user also has the ability to wear it by inserting their hand through the center hole. While it is being worn, it creates a black gauntlet around the user's hand. It also spins constantly around their arm, granting them incredible cutting power, and can be used as a shield to block attacks. It also seems to produce wind while spinning, dissipating smoke, and kicking up dust.
Masamune
Masamune is a katana, and also takes away the user's Shadow and shapes it in the form of a Scarf. The user's Shadow rises up to the them, and acts as a Pitch Black Scarf. The scarf can't be destroyed due to it being purely made out of Shadow.

PostPosted: Sun Dec 15, 2013 12:18 am


Noisy Noivern

Man, I'm sorry but I doubt that somebody would just leave somebody, that they worked so hard to capture, in some random nation.

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 15, 2013 3:29 pm


*Ready to be Checked! biggrin
PostPosted: Sun Dec 15, 2013 4:47 pm


Noisy Noivern
*Ready to be Checked! biggrin

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Unless you can make it not a copy of Black Star from Soul Eater.

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 15, 2013 4:58 pm


Can someone else Check my Clan?
PostPosted: Mon Dec 16, 2013 3:16 pm


Noisy Noivern
Can someone else Check my Clan?

I'm pretty sure if someone checks it you'll just get the same result.

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 16, 2013 6:28 pm


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Noisy Noivern
Can someone else Check my Clan?

I'm pretty sure if someone checks it you'll just get the same result.


Then check it for me?
Why can't I incorporate Soul Eater in a Naruto Guild?

You guys barely even gave me a chance and assume I'm going to make an exact copy of Black Star as my RPC for this Clan.

I don't see the problem.
Get the Captain in here so we all can discuss it.
PostPosted: Mon Dec 16, 2013 6:30 pm


Noisy Noivern
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Noisy Noivern
Can someone else Check my Clan?

I'm pretty sure if someone checks it you'll just get the same result.


Then check it for me?
Why can't I incorporate Soul Eater in a Naruto Guild?

You guys barely even gave me a chance and assume I'm going to make an exact copy of Black Star as my RPC for this Clan.

I don't see the problem.
Get the Captain in here so we all can discuss it.


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PostPosted: Mon Dec 16, 2013 7:00 pm


Archlord Ayperos
Are you sure there isn't anything that can change your mind about this? Before you get mad and think I'm taking sides explain to me what is wrong about this clan besides the fact that it is nearly identical to the black star clan of soul eater? If I listen to your reasoning maybe we can come up with a solution to meet the needs of both people if this just won't cut it.
PostPosted: Mon Dec 16, 2013 9:18 pm


I'm sorry but the state in which your clan is at now just won't cut it. Right now it seems as though it won't be approved since it does greatly resemble black star's clan from the anime. However if you could manage to change some of the techniques and the history to make it your own as well as make it strongly unrecognizable you may have a shot at getting it approved.

I know you must have worked hard on this but I can't just do anything if the vote is against my odds. Right now the problem seems to be that it is frowned upon since I guess it lacks creativity.

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 16, 2013 9:49 pm


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I'm sorry but the state in which your clan is at now just won't cut it. Right now it seems as though it won't be approved since it does greatly resemble black star's clan from the anime. However if you could manage to change some of the techniques and the history to make it your own as well as make it strongly unrecognizable you may have a shot at getting it approved.

I know you must have worked hard on this but I can't just do anything if the vote is against my odds. Right now the problem seems to be that it is frowned upon since I guess it lacks creativity.


-_-

Edit: So? Why can't I format Black Star's Clan into Naruto Format and use him? I mean, he is also a Ninja, and I want to use his Clan's Abilities, so what's the problem? Is that the only reason I can't use it? Why does it resembling Black Star's Clan even matter if it could be approved or not?

All I'm hearing is that, "It can't be approved 'cause it looks like BlackStar's Clan from Soul Eater"... Which doesn't justify why I can't use it.

Edit II: What about Forest Release? He got that Icon and the whole Kekkei Genkai off of Naruto Fanon, which is stealing from user-made content -- not to mention Hashirama already has a similar Kekkei Genkai [Wood Release]. So If I can't get this approved, and if you guys decide to approve what he has, and he stole the Icon and the whole Kekkei Genkai off of someone else's hard work, then I call BS.

Look, he even copied the Jutsu, but re-worded them to make it look like he was created by himself, which is a bluff. >Click<
PostPosted: Mon Dec 16, 2013 10:06 pm


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*Curse of Hatred was a sharingan and brain issued caused in an Uchiha saw their loved ones die, unlocking the mangekyo sharingan.
*How would a child who was separated from his clan have all of those advantages?
* Allot of his jutsu are shadow released mixed with spacetime and swift.
*Jōhō, is a space time jutsu that multiples swords. This is a rip off of a technique of the character 'God' from souleater.
*Masamune, basically shadow release
*Leaf of the Moonlit Night makes no sense

*Chain of Blackness, it sounds like a chain surrounding the user...

*Absolute Shadow, How would a tool give the person the speed like that. If you think if it, doesn't that seem like a swift release?
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 16, 2013 10:19 pm


Archlord Ayperos


*Curse of Hatred was a sharingan and brain issued caused in an Uchiha saw their loved ones die, unlocking the mangekyo sharingan.
*How would a child who was separated from his clan have all of those advantages?
* Allot of his jutsu are shadow released mixed with spacetime and swift.
*Jōhō, is a space time jutsu that multiples swords. This is a rip off of a technique of the character 'God' from souleater.
*Masamune, basically shadow release
*Leaf of the Moonlit Night makes no sense

*Chain of Blackness, it sounds like a chain surrounding the user...

*Absolute Shadow, How would a tool give the person the speed like that. If you think if it, doesn't that seem like a swift release?


Okay, that's all you had to say.
All you had to do was point out the weapons and flaws.

*The Curse of Hatred was just an Ideal passed down from Elder Son. This Clan could inherit a similar trait, but if it bothers you that much, I'll change it.
*He was separated form his clan at a young age. He could have been 10, and had already trained before he was separated from his clan. Think.
*Joho is basically a weapon Shadow Clone Jutsu. Try Harder.
>Shuriken Shadow Clone
► There you would see you can make Shadow Clones of a desired Weapon. No where does it state that this is a Space-Time Jutsu.
*Okay, I can just put that the the user's Shadow comes up from the ground into the shape of a Scarf until he uses the Masamune Technique.
*If you'd read it, you'd know that Moonlit Night does make sense.
*I can remove Absolute Shadow. I didn't get how a weapon gave BlackStar that kind of Speed in the first place.
PostPosted: Mon Dec 16, 2013 10:48 pm


Noisy Noivern
Archlord Ayperos


*Curse of Hatred was a sharingan and brain issued caused in an Uchiha saw their loved ones die, unlocking the mangekyo sharingan.
*How would a child who was separated from his clan have all of those advantages?
* Allot of his jutsu are shadow released mixed with spacetime and swift.
*Jōhō, is a space time jutsu that multiples swords. This is a rip off of a technique of the character 'God' from souleater.
*Masamune, basically shadow release
*Leaf of the Moonlit Night makes no sense

*Chain of Blackness, it sounds like a chain surrounding the user...

*Absolute Shadow, How would a tool give the person the speed like that. If you think if it, doesn't that seem like a swift release?


Okay, that's all you had to say.
All you had to do was point out the weapons and flaws.

*The Curse of Hatred was just an Ideal passed down from Elder Son. This Clan could inherit a similar trait, but if it bothers you that much, I'll change it.
*He was separated form his clan at a young age. He could have been 10, and had already trained before he was separated from his clan. Think.
*Joho is basically a weapon Shadow Clone Jutsu. Try Harder.
>Shuriken Shadow Clone
► There you would see you can make Shadow Clones of a desired Weapon. No where does it state that this is a Space-Time Jutsu.
*Okay, I can just put that the the user's Shadow comes up from the ground into the shape of a Scarf until he uses the Masamune Technique.
*If you'd read it, you'd know that Moonlit Night does make sense.
*I can remove Absolute Shadow. I didn't get how a weapon gave BlackStar that kind of Speed in the first place.


*It was released that chakra is released from their brains and mods the sharingan into the mangekyo sharingan.
*You wrote 'Very Young Age," most would assume that to be 5 or lower. And again, why would they go through all that work just to not kill the child, for an anbu that would make no sense. Anbu just don't assume, like Itachi and all the others, they act. Also, most shinobi who are trained in combat would know better then to just assume.
*I had no idea that was possible.... Odd.
*So they'd always be using Shadow release?
*No it does not make sense, how could a weapon physically change like that? Maybe if you used a working picture and described just how it changes then it would be acceptable.

*Also, it needs to not be a copy clan and character, a character named anything then a star symbol and have a picture of black star with everything else like him won't be approved. 3 Crew members and up feel the same as I about this. We also don't allow copy characters. And before you bring up Ashido Kano, I just used his name and nothing else... Far to lazy to make up a name that day.


I'm sorry for the inn

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 17, 2013 4:28 am


Archlord Ayperos


*Are you seriously complaining about me calling the wrong path "The Curse of Hatred"? I could change it if you'd like.

*You're assuming that the ANBU know better than to Assume. They killed the whole clan off and left that one ninja there because maybe they probably felt sorry for him? I don't like how you're complaining about the ANBU not killing off that one child. Maybe one of them felt pity and left him out there to die? You're making that one part seem like it matters to you personally or something.
Ex. Itachi couldn't kill Sasuke?

*No. They wouldn't. Just like any other special sword that uses a different Element, this one gives the user control over their own Shadow and shapes it into a Scarf until it's used offensively, which then it turns into Multiple Blades made out of Shadow. This is basically the same thing as a Lightning Blade that can shoot Lightning out of the Katana, but with a different Element.

*Right here, the user's hand can fit in the circle and wear the Shuriken. He even has it rotate at the bottom left panel.
>Click<

*Okay, so what if I have a picture of BlackStar as the Symbol? What does that mean? I was originally going to make it a star, but have yet to find a Star to put as the clan's symbol. I found a Star Symbol and put it there.
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