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Quicksilver the Archangel

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 17, 2013 7:45 pm


Name: Alejandro Carlos Cervantes

Nickname: Ace

Age: 10

Birthday: May 7

Sign: Taurus

Gemstone: Emerald

Blood Type: AB-

Fav. Food: Nachos--crunchy, cheesy, delicious!

Hated Food: Oatmeal--it looks like old lady vomit!

School: Knightside Elementary

Hobbies:

Modeling -- Some might equate this hobby to the negative images left from "Toddlers and Tiaras," but Alejandro pays them no mind. He gets to dress up, he gets to beat other people at their own game, and he gets to earn cash for college. All of these make the hobby win-win for him! He has taken a few top prizes, particularly for his head shots, but they are not publicized outside of the competitive modeling circle. From his modeling, he has gained a good sense of balance, coordination, and the ability to multi-task.

Impressions -- If he sees someone with a cool voice or a funny walk, then Alejandro wants to copy it and ultimately perfect it. His impressions began as a way to mock teachers (still one of his most frequently revisted roles) and to get his classmates to laugh. Now, however, he seeks more challenging roles. He does this patially to get better at his modeling and partially to entertain himself and others.

Video Games -- Like many kids, Alejandro can be found with his fingers glued to buttons and eyes squarely focused on a bright screen. In the arcade, he favors dancing games or fighting games where he can compete against others. At home, he loves Pokemon, Super Smash Brothers, and Mario Party. (Yes, he is totally a Nintendo kid!)

Swimming -- Alejandro is pretty good at swimming and desperately wants to join a competitive swim team. Like all sports, though, his Mom bans him from them lest he get injured and unable to model. So, all of his swimming is just for fun. He loves pool parties and games that involve getting in the water!

Virtues:

Kind -- Alejandro's a good kid, at heart. He doesn't like to see people getting hurt and generally wants to help make things better. He'll call out bullies or report things to the teacher if he can't take care of it himself. He'll make funny faces or tell jokes if he thinks it'll make someone feel better. His attempts may not always be successful, but he's going to try all the same.

Independent -- He may be the youngest of his brothers, but Alejandro's no baby. He is capable of caring for and entertaining himself and does not need constant supervision. While he may seek comfort when hurt, he does not need to be coddled every time he gets a booboo or gets into a fight. He can look at situations, weigh the pros and cons, and make his own decisions. (They may not always be the best decisions, but by gum they're his!)

Hard-Working -- No one can accuse Alejandro of being lazy. He needs little convincing to do his chore completely or do his best on all homework and tests. Any hobby he pursues he gives 300%. He may not always come out on top, but it's not for lack of trying!

Flaws:

Competitive -- Anything you can do, Alejandro can do better. He's fiercely competitive in all of his chosen hobbies and in any activity in general. Even the most mundane task can become a competition if he feels the need to beat someone. Example: "I can eat my lunch faster than you!" People may think interacting with Alejandro is all in good fun, but this kid doesn't think losing is fun. His competitive nature may affect his ability to form and to retain relationships.

Crude -- Alejandro's sense of humor and choices of insults are not as refined as he may appear in some of his headshots. Farts and nutshots are hilarious! That girl has cooties--ew! That creepy old man's got a shriveled pee-pee! Try and tell him he's wrong? Well, then you're a fart face! Or a buttlicker. Or a poop brain. His choice of vocabulary can get him into trouble and leave a bad first impression.

Rebellious -- Alejandro has a hard time accepting authority from anyone other than his parents and grandparents. Teachers are mostly lame and boring. His brothers are either idiots or bullies. Higher level Senshi just start barking orders without introducing themselves? As if he's going to listen to them just because they say so! This initial desire to balk at orders can get him into trouble.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Prominent, Pink Iris
Hair: Pink, Medium, Layered, Pony-tail with Simple, One-colored hair tie.
Face: Round, Slightly Chubby-cheeked, Average ears.
Clothes: Knightside Elementary Uniform


Senshi: Syrinx of Cacti

Challenge: I thirst for justice!

Fuku Colour:
Main Color: Brown
Secondary Colors: Yellow and Pink

Fuku:

Collar --CC, keeping in mind first stage/sphere
Bow -- CC, keeping in mind first stage/sphere
Bodice -- CC, keeping in mind first stage/sphere
Sleeves -- CC, keeping in mind first stage/sphere
Brooch -- CC, keeping in mind first stage/sphere
Bottoms -- CC, keeping in mind first stage/sphere
Tiara -- CC, keeping in mind first stage/sphere
Choker -- CC, keeping in mind first stage/sphere
Shoes -- CC, keeping in mind first stage/sphere
Gloves -- CC, keeping in mind first stage/sphere; only stipulation is that there should always be only ONE glove
Accessories -- CC, keeping in mind first stage/sphere

Attacks:

Sailor Scout Attack: Syrinx Cactus Bloom

A lucious cactus bloom appears in Syrinx's hands. He or one other Order character can devour it for minor healing. "Minor" healing would encompass scrapped knees, small bruises, pain relief from larger injuries, small fatigue, etc.

How it Works.
Range. 1 person
Duration. Instant (Power upon consumption)
Damage Summary. Minor healing of consumer of flower
Weaknesses. Only works on one person; No effect on Chaos character

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Syrinx Cactus Pear

A succulent cactus pear appears in Syrinx's hands. He or one
other Order character can devour it for medium healing. "Medium" healing would encompass small puncture wounds, larger bruises, greater fatigue, etc.

How it Works.
Range. 1 person
Duration. Instant (Power upon consumption)
Damage Summary. Medium healing of consumer of fruit
Weaknesses. Only works on one person; No effect on Chaos character

Eternal Sailor Attack: Syrinx Shooting Spines

A ball of cactus spines appears in Syrinx's single, gloved hand. He tosses the ball into the air, and the spines shoot out in a circle. All Order characters within the radius of the attack will feel the pain of the p***k but afterwards recieve medium healing. "Medium" healing would encompass small puncture wounds, larger bruises, greater fatigue, etc. Any spines that do not hit a human/cat target will disappear upon hitting the ground.

How it Works.
Range. 2-3 feet diameter
Duration. Instant (Power upon contact); Disappear if hit ground
Damage Summary. Medium healing for all Order characters within radius
Weaknesses. Unpredictable as to how many people and which people will be affected; No effect on Chaos characters
PostPosted: Tue Jul 23, 2013 7:31 pm


Hey, Quick!

Congratulations on your boy, he is super cute! His civilian profile looks good to me!

His attacks mostly look good, but I think his eternal especially might be a little strong for a chibi ):

I had one question for his basic and super, and that was, if a chaos person eats the fruit, does it have any healing effect or does it do nothing?

For his eternal attack, while this is written to have a really small range, I think it has too much going on for a chibi's attack. I don't think a chibi should be able to do major healing on multiple targets, especially when coupled with an attack that can do even just a bit of offensive damage.

I think it would be okay if you wanted to keep the range and the pricking for anyone, but I don't think healing should exceed medium healing (though I think it would be okay to say that it can partially heal larger attacks, but it won't heal them completely?). I also am not sure if you mention it, but I also think a target should only be able to heal from one spine (instead of, say, five spines piercing one person and all five healing them). I think the other spines could pierce and cause a p***k, but I think healing should be limited to one spine per attack!

Also a few questions about the spines, I just wanted to check on a few things! It says that spines that do not hit a target will disappear upon hitting the ground but it has a duration of 15-30 seconds on the ground? If someone steps on the spines at this point in time, do they still give healing affect? And, how deep can these spines pierce someone? Is it just the sensation of being pricked (and they disappear instantly so that they cause no real lasting damage)? I just want to ask because this could be really dangerous if a chibi has the power to shoot out actual spines that might get into someone's eye! Also, is there an estimate of how many spines are produced per attack? (Just to give an idea!)

Quote me when you make any changes! <3


Orangeish Sherbert


Lonely


Quicksilver the Archangel

Beloved Seraph

PostPosted: Wed Jul 24, 2013 7:57 pm


Orangeish Sherbert


Hery OS!

I editted the attacks a little bit:

1. For the basic and super, I indicated that it does nothing on Chaos folk. If they eat it, they get a tasty snack and nothing else.

2. For the eternal attack, I didn't think giving a certain number of spines would be the way to go since it's a sphere-shape? So, I decided to just make it to where it affects those in the area. I also fixed the spines to actually disappearing on the ground (they shouldn't linger at all) and not affecting Chaos folk.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 25, 2013 4:35 am


Your changes look good! 8D

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I'll have a GM come over right away to give you a full stamp!


Orangeish Sherbert


Lonely



Kyuseisha no Hikari

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 25, 2013 12:29 pm


Quicksilver the Archangel


He looks good to me! I'm going to drop a stamp now; enjoy playing him! <3

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