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 Posted: Mon Jul 08, 2013 12:11 pm
- Username: Vaan_hatake
- Character Name: Lucifer
- Pronunciation of the Name: Lew-Si-Fur
- Affiliation: Espada, himself mostly
- Character Number/Rank: El Quarta Espada
- Espada Of: Solitude
- Sexuality Heterosexual
- Character Personality Lucifer is a very polite young man, speaking very little, but always showing respect to everyone. Like most of his race, he's a bit power-hungry, and wishes to ascend to the top rank of the Espada. However, Lucifer is an incredibly intelligent person, and realizes it'll be years before he'll be strong enough to tackle the Tercera, then the Segunda, then the Primera, etc. Generally, Lucifer speaks very quietly, and almost never raises his voice, for any reason. He's a little aloof and arrogant, but he's certainly earned the right to be, as he's battled his way to the top.
- Character Likes: Fighting, training, killing, being alone.
- Character Dislikes: Loud people, his overly bloodthirsty race, rude or obnoxious people.
- Character Age:
[Human Appearance] 21-ish
[Arrancar Age] About 7,000 years as a rotting soul in Hell, about 1000 as a Hollow, and only 313 as an Arrancar.
- Character Birthday: June 6th
- Character Zodiac Sign: Gemini
- Character Blood Type: O
- Bio: Lucifer has been rotting in hell for as long as anyone can remember. Originally intended to remain there for eternity, he was unintentionally set free by the weakening of the Gates of Hell,caused by a massive explosion. Confused, and extremely weak, Lucifer found himself in the middle of Hueco Mundo, reborn as a hollow. For ten years he simply scrounged around, killing what he could and running from what he couldn't.
In time, he began to learn of the current world. Emboldened by his meetings with other Hollows, and hungry for power, Lucifer began to train, restlessly eating hollows and souls for the next 140 years. In time, he even ripped off most of his mask, becoming an Arrancar. However, even then, Lucifer was an extremely weak Arrancar, compared to the Espada or even some of the higher ranked fraccion.
For 313 more years he trained as an Arrancar, killing absolutely anything that he came across, eating their bodies and growing stronger, until he managed to kill the Quarta, taking his place, where he currently remains.
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Posted: Mon Jul 08, 2013 12:17 pm
Lucifer, Godkiller - Character Skin Color/Ethnicity: White
- Character Height: 6 foot 3 inches
- Character Hair Color: Lucifer's hair is a slick black, almost shiny. He frets over it constantly, making sure that not even a single hair is out of place.
- Character Hair Length/ Style He keeps it relatively long, styling it so it stays out of his face.
- Character Eye Color: Lucifer's pupils are actually an extremely light color, seemingly pinkish.
- Character Description: Lucifer has flawless white skin, complete with very elegant, otherworldly features. He has no visible scars, standing tall and lean. While he isn't ridiculously muscular, he has almost no fat, and is very lanky.
- Character Hollow Hole Location: Stomach
- Character Number Location: A "4" is inscribed on his left forearm.
- Character Attire: Lucifer is known for his trademark black suit, which he owns several of. It has a high collar, with a matching black tie, and a dark grey shirt. When he trains, he generally just wears the white hakama, and goes shirtless.
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Posted: Mon Jul 08, 2013 4:32 pm
- Zanpakutō Resurrección Name: Satanas (Satan)
- Zanpakutō Sealed Form: Satanas is a very average looking katana, measuring about 75 centimeters in length.
- Zanpakutō Resurrección Activation Statement: Deceive, Satanas!
- Zanpakutō Resurrección Appearance Satanas is a tall demon, measuring almost nine feet in height. His skin is bare, yet his Hierro is extremely strong. His shoulders are warped into small spikes, with much larger spikes extending from his back and neck. His head in encased in a black helmet that seems to be fused to his skin, however he can retract it back, showing his face. He is covered in plate armor below his torso, and a massive, tattered cloak hangs around his back. Glowing tattoos are on each arm, inscribed with powerful abilities. In one hand, he can summon balls of pure darkness energy, and in the other, he wields a claymore, measuring about six feet, sharpened on both edges.
- Zanpakutō Resurrección Abilities
Not an ability: Satanas gives Lucifer passive control of darkness, giving him the ability to manipulate it as he wishes. In addition, his hierro is almost doubled, making it extremely resilient. Finally, each of his tattoos is a sealed Cero, and he can unleash all of them at once, creating a barrage of Ceros, twenty in total. Obviously someone can dodge this.
Sombra Esfera, or Shadow Sphere. Lucifer creates a sphere of darkness in his left hand, and can either run up to an opponent, imploding it by crushing the ball in his fist, or fire it at long range, squeezing it until it bursts, sending out a thick beam of darkness at his opponent. Can be dodged, a bit harder to do when at close range.
Hoja Izquierda del Engañador, or Left Blade of the Deceiver. Lucifer swings out with his claymore, sending out a wave of darkness energy, which can engulf or crush an enemy. Obviously can be dodged.
Traicon, or Betrayal. Lucifer charges up an incredibly dense ball of darkness energy, slamming it into the circle-like opening on the tip of his blade. The blade absorbs it, and becomes coated with the darkness energy. His sword now behaves more like a drill than a sword, the darkness energy constantly writhing around it, shredding apart an opponent. Occasionally a tendril may even swing out, latching onto an opponent from mid-range. The tendrils aren't really strong at all, and the swings can be dodged or blocked.
- Achieved? Si
- Segunda Resurrección: Satanas, El Traidor
- Segunda Resurrección Appearance: Satanas El Traidor
- Segunda Resurrección Abilities This form gives Lucifer total control over darkness. In addition, it gives him some control over fire, and he generally combines the two, creating a substance he calls Hellfire. Finally, his hierro is increased once again, allowing him to take hits most Espada couldn't handle.
Fuego del Infierno: More of a passive ability than a special technique, this is the basis for all of Lucifer's abilities whilst in Segunda Etapa. This is the creation of hellfire, which involves creating darkness in his left hand, and fire in his right, then smashing them together, drawing his hands apart slowly, to create a blackish fire that only strong kido can put out. A captain/Espada can automatically put out the fires after one post.
Rebanada del Diablo, or Devil's Slice. Lucifer creates a long, thin lance of hellfire, using it to slash apart an opponent. Each swipe of the lance leaves hellfire on its target, and it constantly seeps hellfire, literally oozing from the lance itself. Lucifer can throw the lance, and have it explode on impact, similar to Lanza del Relampago. Can be dodged, blast radius is only about 3 meters.
Brazo Izquierdo del Traidor, or Left Arm of the Betrayer. Lucifer activates his left shoulder guard, and it begins to glow faintly, seeping out darkness energy. The energy coats his left arm, extending out into a sword that he uses in close combat. The sword itself has two properties: 1. Informe: "Shapeless," this allows him to manipulate the blade, into different shapes, such as an axe, a flail, a whip, etc.
2. Filtrarse: "To leak," this allows the sword to constantly ooze darkness energy, which it can sometimes even throw if gathered in large amounts. The darkness energy acts like an acid, eating away at whatever it touches. Same rule applies as with Fuego.
Deicidio, or Deicide. This is Lucifer's final attack. He falls to the ground, his wings covering him in a black shroud. Slowly, they begin to shrink, coating him until his wings retract entirely into his back. His armor falls off in steaming chunks, and his entire body heats up, cracks appearing in his skin, until he finally bursts, his entire body blowing up. In his place is Satanas, el Angel Caido. Whilst in this form, his hierro is once again doubled, making it 8x as strong as his normal form. He can freely manipulate darkness around him, culminating in one final attack, what he calls El Bomba Sombra, or The Shadow Bomb. This is a final attack where he creates six extremely dense balls of shadow reiatsu, (One in each hand, one in each of his four misshapen wings) and a massive seventh in the perch of wings that he floats on. The six orbit around the seventh, and when is ready, they plunge into the seventh, increasing its size and turning it into a massive swirling vortex in the middle of the field. It can draw in any object that is not player controlled within a 10 meter radius, and then explodes, decimating an entire area, of a 5 meter radius. This attack instantly forces Lucifer out of Segunda, and may result in him reverting back to a mindless, albeit much weaker, hollow.
- Segunda Resurrección Time Able to Hold: Unlimited
- Achieved? Si, have to authorize it first, however.
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Posted: Mon Jul 08, 2013 4:34 pm
Bala
- Color: Dark Red
- Range: Six inches in diameter
- Distance: He can shoot up to a mile in length
- Mastery Expert
Cero
- Color: Black, ringed with dark red
- Range: about a foot in diameter
- Distance: He can reach very long distances, capable of shooting a target up to 500 meters away with deadly accuracy.
- Mastery Expert
- Hierro :
Extremely high, his Hierro is easily Lucifer's strongest trait.
- Swordsmanship: Master
- Sonído :
Very Average
- High Speed Regeneration
Novice
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Posted: Tue Jul 09, 2013 9:55 am
First: I won't allow an unknown age. You must have an exact amount of Hollow years (hollow plus Arrancar)
Your bio is far to short (which you already stated), contains Canon based information, and doesn't reference some hollow to Arrancar information. Fix that.
Second: Your Ressurrection is fine up until the Hierro part. Your character cannot possess the highest Hierro due to your rank. It would thwart the system of Espada ranking. I'd like to see how these abilities can be escaped as well, and insert a post count if need be.
For Segunda, you can't claim he has the most powerful darkness Zanpakuto. It's kinda like god modding in my eyes.
I'm fine with the abilities although I need you to lesson the Hierro like said before. How can an enemy inflict damage if you're skin is virtually unsliceable? I'd also like you to add a post count for the abilities. How long do they last? For Fuego del Infierno only Kido can deflect it? What about other Arrancar? Supply more ways it can be thwarted.
For Decide, the blast radius is too large. I understand it's your most powerful ability but the distance is way far fetched. Lessen the radius to like 5 meters or something.
Other than that, everything seems dandy. Contact me when edits are made.
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Posted: Tue Jul 09, 2013 11:24 am
Onin Harashi Tsuna First: I won't allow an unknown age. You must have an exact amount of Hollow years (hollow plus Arrancar)
Your bio is far to short (which you already stated), contains Canon based information, and doesn't reference some hollow to Arrancar information. Fix that.
Second: Your Ressurrection is fine up until the Hierro part. Your character cannot possess the highest Hierro due to your rank. It would thwart the system of Espada ranking. I'd like to see how these abilities can be escaped as well, and insert a post count if need be.
For Segunda, you can't claim he has the most powerful darkness Zanpakuto. It's kinda like god modding in my eyes.
I'm fine with the abilities although I need you to lesson the Hierro like said before. How can an enemy inflict damage if you're skin is virtually unsliceable? I'd also like you to add a post count for the abilities. How long do they last? For Fuego del Infierno only Kido can deflect it? What about other Arrancar? Supply more ways it can be thwarted.
For Decide, the blast radius is too large. I understand it's your most powerful ability but the distance is way far fetched. Lessen the radius to like 5 meters or something.
Other than that, everything seems dandy. Contact me when edits are made.
Everything but the damn bio is finished, I really am drawing a blank on what to do for it xP
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Posted: Tue Jul 09, 2013 11:33 am
PM me and I'll assist.
You're approved otherwise.
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