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Captain of Squad 4: Kente Morino

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Blades252

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 17, 2013 4:33 am


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Public Records - Background Information


Basic::

Full Name: Kente Morino
Alias/Title:
Nickname: Ken
Gender: Male
Date of Birth: May 16th
Age: 233 (Looks 27)


Appearance:

Height: 6.6
Weight: 200lbs
Eye Color: Onyx
Hair Color: Black
Body Type: Tanned, Average size but muscular
Nationality: Japanese/Hispanic
Appearance Description: Kente is extremely tall and can be very imposing looking, he has dark onyx eyes and black hair. He always has a "Poker Face" which rarely shows emotion. Kente has a single stud earring in his right ear and he also has a huge scar that covers most of his back from a hollow attack. He also has a natural tan from his hispanic blood.




Classified Records - Psychology and History


Basic:

Occupation: Shinigami
Affiliation: Soul Society
Former Occupation: Cashier
Former Affiliation: A small mom & pop store

Hobbies: Watching cherry blossoms, training, weight lifting, reading.
Likes: Treating injured, BBQ, Comrades, cherry blossoms
Dislikes: Enemies, those who call his squad weak, any vegetable, sweets


Advanced:

Character Strengths: Kente is calm remains very focused on the given task. He is determined and rarely backs down.
Character Weaknesses: He won't show it but he gets slightly arrogant in fights if things go his way.

Motto/Quotes: "No comrade.....shall ever die on my watch......"
Personality: Kente is very silent, usually only speaking the bare minimum if not less. He values the life of his comrades and subordinates above all else and will attempt to save as many people as he can, even if it means risking his own life. (It is this reason that he has the scar on his back) Kente is almost never seen without his "Poker face" on, he never truly shows many emotions, leading some people to believe that he just doesn't have emotions when in truth he just doesn't like other people knowing how he feels although he will let a small smile slip when the time calls for it. Despite all this he gets extremely talkative and flirtatious when he's drunk and will flirt with anything that moves.
Sexual Preference: Kente is pretty much asexual, he never really put much thought in his romantic life and shoved it to the side.

Relatives: N/A
Spouse: N/A
Friends: Unknown
Rivals: N/A
Enemies: Anyone who threatens the Soul Society

Background: When he was alive Kente worked at a small Mom & Pop store as a cashier to pay his way through collage as well as being captain of his kendo team. Then one night just as he was about to close shop a couple of armed muggers came in to rob the store. Kente had managed to wound one of them but was fatally shot and died on his way to the hospital.

When he awoke he found himself in the Rukon District where he stayed with a nice old couple. After awhile he revealed that he could control spirit energy and the old couple suggested that he enter Shin'ō Academy. When he did he excelled in swordsmanship and kido, specifically Kaidou.

Kente had then joined squad 4 due to his expertise in the art of healing and quickly rose to the rank of captain due to his skills. Many in his squad however prefer to keep him away from patients because when he starts to heal someone he gets a "serious" face and tends to frighten the patients, but he doesn't realize what he does and never understands why they rush him out. He is also and extreme lightweight when it comes to drinking, all it takes is one cup and he will be completely drunk which is why he doesn't drink.



Classified Records - Combative Information


Basic:

Carried Weapons: Zanpakuto
Fighting Styles: Kente fights in classic Kendo and can is highly skilled in it. He can stay on par with even the most seasoned of captains, making his swordsmanship his best fighting trait.
When he is sparing in hand to hand he actually fights like a street brawler. He goes for quick jabs and low kicks to try and knock his opponent off their feet. He's not the best when it comes to hand to hand but he's proficient at it.

Strength: Kente is extremely strong and can lift even the largest hollows with one hand. He can easily enough out muscle people as strong as Sajine Komomura (just an example)
Speed: Kente can do the flash step like any other captain but without it he is by far the slowest of all the captains.
Intelligence: Kente's second best attribute is his high intelligence, he can almost always tell an opponent's weakness and come up with a counter strategy in minutes
Stamina: Kente has average stamina and can last a decent while in a fight but because he spends more of his time behind the front lines healing the wounded he doesn't have as high stamina as other captains.
Durability: Once again Kente can take as much damage as any other captain however once again this is slightly hindered by the fact that he doesn't fight as often. This is offseted by the fact that he can heal himself if the damage is bad enough.


Advanced:

Spiritual Pressure: Kente has very high spiritual pressure which he keeps hidden, much like any other captain. His Spiritual Pressure is about even with that of Shunsui Kyōraku
Swordsmanship/Accuracy/Other: Because Kente practiced kendo when he was alive he is a master swordsman. Kente also tends to fight more on the defensive so he can wear his opponents out before going all out.

Special Training: Despite being a master swordsman Kente spends a majority of his time practicing new and different styles of healing to improve on the old style.
Personal Abilities:


Spiritual Techniques/Releases: When in battle Kente can release some of his spiritual pressure to give himself a much needed speed boost.

Kidou:
Specialty: Healing

Hado:
1. Shō (Clash)
4. Byakurai (Pale Lightning)
11. Tsuzuri Raiden (Bound Lightning)
12. Fushibi (Lain Fire)
31. Shakkahō (Red Fire Cannon)
32. Ōkasen (Yellow Fire Flash)
33. Sōkatsui (Blue Firefall)
54. Haien (Nullific Flames)
58. Tenran (Swelling Storm)
63. Raikōhō (Thunder Roar Sear)
73. Sōren Sōkatsui (Twin-Wake Blue Firefall)
88. Hiryūgekizokushintenraihō (Flying Dragon Marring Heaven-Shaking Thunder-Sear)
90. Kurohitsugi (Black Coffin)
91. Senjū Kōten Taihō (Thousand-Hand Bright Heaven Culling-Sear)


Bakudo:
1. Sai (Block)
4. Hainawa (Crawling Rope)
8. Seki (Repulsion)
9. Geki (Strike)
9. Hōrin (Disintegrating Circle)
21. Sekienton (Red Smoke Flight)
26. Kyokkō (Bent Light)
30. Shitotsu Sansen (Beak-Thrust Tri-Flash)
37. Tsuriboshi (Hanging Star)
39. Enkōsen ( Round Lock Fan)
58. Kakushitsuijaku (Trace-Catching Pursuit Sparrows)
61. Rikujōkōrō (Six-Staff Light Prison)
62. Hyapporankan (Hundred-Step Rail Parch)
63. Sajō Sabaku (Chainlink Chain Bond)
73. Tozanshō (Inverse Mountain Crystal)
75. Gochūtekkan (Five-Post Iron Weights)
77. Tenteikūra (Heavenly Void Net)
79. Kuyō Shibari (Nine-Daylight Bonds)


Other:

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Zanpakuto Name: Kinami Watashizo
Zanpakuto Type: Wind
Zanpakuto Spirit: Kinami is a small black haired girl who wears a blue dress with a pink rippon in her hair. The inner world is an extremely large, ballroom like area with a single small child's table in the middle with four chairs, two for a stuffed rabbit and teddy bear, one for Kinami, and the final one for any visitor (Kente) it is where Kinami holds her "Tea Parties."
Kinami loves it when Kente comes to "visit" so he can come and have "tea" with them. Kente and Kinami get along well and Kente tends to visit every once in while to make her happy.

Zanpakuto Sealed Description: A simple grey katana, the hilt is in the shape of a crescent moon.

Shikai: Kinami Watashizo
Incantation: "Blow like a gentle autumn breeze; Kinami Watashizo"
Appearance: A large staff with a single golden bladed ring at the top and a silver crescent blade on the bottom.

Abilities:
Kente can create hurricane strength wind, with it he can slightly manipulate the enemy's movements and the direction of the attack. He can also use this ability in conjunction with his wind blades to control where the blades hit.

Kente can create a healing wind to gently blow over comrades and heal them, this technique can heal almost all injuries however the wind can only heal wounds depending on how much Kente focuses. Because of this Kente usually doesn't use this when in the midst of battle unless he uses his wind barrier.

Kente can turn the wind into lethal blades to attack the opponent with, these blades are so sharp that they can slice through steel. However he cannot control the blades direction without using the wind.

Kente can create an wind barrier to protect himself or his comrades. This technique can be used in the heat of battle to give himself a moment of rest. This can also be used so that he can heal his comrades with his healing wind. The barrier can withstand a great deal of damage, such as an energy blast from a meno's. However this also requires alot of his focus to keep the barrier up and it also severely drains his energy depending on how powerful the blow.


Techniques: Using the wind barrier Kente will use it to block enemies attacks while using his healing wind to treat the wounded. When he is not healing he uses the barrier in tandem with his wind blades to create a lethal attack & defense combo.

Bankai
Incantation: "Create the gale of judgement; Miri Shizo"
Appearance: The staff disappears completely as he and his enemy are brought into "forest" of tree's in autumn and from there he can control the wind to do whatever he pleases, while also giving him faster flight ability's. If the forest does not appear then Kente simply gets the powers of his bankai.

Abilities: Kente can create massive tornado's in order to catch his opponent off guard and severely damage them.

Kente can use his wind to form blades around his hands to go in hand to hand if necessary. These blades can slice through solid steel like butter.

Kente also retains his previous ability's.


PostPosted: Mon Feb 18, 2013 4:04 pm



Alright, this profile isn't horrible, but it does need some work nevertheless.
-By the looks of things, this profile was rushed since you don't have to much detail on your abilities and legit, everything but your bio is underlined.
-With your appearance description, you just have one large run on sentence with a ton of commas. That should be changed to sentences instead man.
-For your character strengths and weaknesses, you mention physical strengths and this section of the rpc profile is a psychology section. You need to put strengths like say determination and things of the such. For weaknesses, same can be applied like say his weakness is that he's arrogant or something along those lines of a character flaw.
-In your bio, you have a few misspellings that need to be corrected. Also, what is Kaidou?
-For your fighting styles, it's more so what style of fighting does he prefer. Not how he fights with one class of fighting. So say for example your character prefers hand to hand combat over the other forms of combat, make that clear and include how skilled he is in that art.
-For strength, the way you have things described at the moment is very vague. Please add some detail to this if possible so that I can get a better idea of your character's limit strength wise.
-For Kente's spiritual pressure, saying it's on par with a captain's is a bit vague. Do you mean as high as a low level captain or someone like Kenpachi who has a ton of spiritual pressure that he cannot control? Make sure you can make this clear for people to understand in the guild.
-With Kente's special training, he's received and continues to train with healing kido, correct?
-For your zanpakuto type, you don't have to put down defensive along with wind, just a heads up.
-You forgot to give a description of your sealed zanpakuto appearance. You could even just get a photo of a katana and it can count.
-For your shikai, you need to have detail with all your abilities. With the first ability, how would this benefit Kente on the battlefield? For the second ability, what are the limitations behind this ability? Can he heal someone who's on their deathbed with this wind? Does this ability take a toll on Kente at all?
With the third ability, how strong are these blades? Can he cut through anything with them? Make sure you make clear the limitations this ability has. Finally with the final ability, how powerful is this barrier?
-With your techniques for your shikai, could please elaborate a bit on this please? I found it a bit confusing.
-Finally with his bankai, that description for his abilities and techniques isn't going to cut it. You must have some abilities that aren't like the ones you mention in the bankai. It doesn't make to sense and if you're going to use that in the end, please do elaborate on this.

Forgive me if this review seemed a bit harsh, but I'm simply playing the role of the Devil's advocate with this review. If you have any specific questions on how to make certain parts of your bio better, please don't hesitate to ask myself or one of the other mods in the guild.


The Hopeless Optimist
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Enduring Citizen


Blades252

Perfect Fatcat

PostPosted: Mon Feb 18, 2013 4:33 pm


The Hopeless Optimist


Honestly the whole thing was very rushed, my first version I had was a lot better then this one and just as I was about to post it my computer shut off and I lost all the work. By them I was just pissed and rushed through it since I was up till like 3AM working on it xd

I'm on my phone right now but I'll work on it when I can smile
Also Kaidou is just another term for healing kido.
PostPosted: Mon Feb 18, 2013 4:46 pm


Weapons Master Cal
The Hopeless Optimist


Honestly the whole thing was very rushed, my first version I had was a lot better then this one and just as I was about to post it my computer shut off and I lost all the work. By them I was just pissed and rushed through it since I was up till like 3AM working on it xd

I'm on my phone right now but I'll work on it when I can smile
Also Kaidou is just another term for healing kido.


No worries, just make sure to make the changes I addressed in my previous comment.

The Hopeless Optimist
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Blades252

Perfect Fatcat

PostPosted: Wed Mar 13, 2013 12:38 pm


The Hopeless Optimist


Fixed
PostPosted: Tue Apr 09, 2013 8:35 am



Approved.

The Hopeless Optimist
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