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LotusCurtiss

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2012 4:50 pm


Name: Lotus Curtiss

Age: ? (looks 16-20)

Gender: Chick

Birthday: June 27th

Zodiac Sign: Cancer

Blood Type: A

Hpbbies/Likes: Reading, painting, writing and video games (Inspired Game and Manga Writer), Husband.

Dislikes: Injustice

Family: Jade Curtiss (Husband- Knight)

Appearence: Hair is pitch black with purple and indigo irredecent shimmer. Iris' are (from outside-in) Indigo, aquamarine and violet.
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Personality: Quiet, a good listener and wisdom beyond her years.

History:
Family History- Lotus comes from a long line of lost Senshi, said to be lost even to the Moon Princess, what happened to them is still a mystery. Her family line used to be advisor's to the line of Moon Princess'.

Personal History: Lotus meet and married Jade Curtiss, an american who moved to live in Japan and complete his advanced college degree (PhD). She currently runs a small shrine passed from her grandparents unto her, a Healing Shrine where people from all walks of life could find themselves to gather their thoughts and find healing with her advice. She keeps to herself about her family yet the look in her eyes tells that of much more. Lotus's power's remain sealed that is untill the reawakening of the Moon Princess.

Sailor Transformation Information: In a flurry of ribbons made of shimmering stars.

Sailor Name: Starburst -(relates to baby boom galaxies that are the brightest star's)

Element of Use: Holy, Creation, Heart

Appearence: Hair and Eye's (same as above). -imagine sword gone and bow in hair gone- --white heel's--
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Attacks:
- White Staff with Blue Orb's.
---- Starburst Rainbow; Final attack that unleashes rainbow crystals that deal massive damage
---- Sealing Heart; cause's enmies to become disoriented and doubt their abilities to fight.
---- Shining Starlight; a healing song
---- Star Burst; a blinding attack that causes temporarily slowness



Strength's: Defensive fighter and speed is Lotus' key, analetical as soon as a fight starts (observes patterns and movements to counter and turn the tables.)

Weaknesses: Dark/Blind effect's, other than that, is immune to Water.


Name: Jade Curtiss

Age: ? (Looks 20-30)

Gender: Dude

Birthday: June 27th

Zodiac Sign: Cancer

Blood Type: B

Hobbies/Likes: Reading, Curry/Potato dishes, Wife

Dislikes: Annoying People, jerks, idiots

Family: Lotus Curtiss (Wife- Senshi)

Appearence:
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Personality: Cold, Sarcastic, Follows and finishes goals.

History: Jade is an american who moved to live in Japan to complete his advanced college degree (PhD) and comes from a wealthy family and is the youngest adopted son. He meet and married Lotus, keeping close to her side. He, one day was reliving some transgressions from his past and found himself at a shrine were Lotus just smiled and gave him a bag of star candy. Though Jade promised to never marry and much more than to fall in love, he did. He prefers not to share about his past and the trangressions that follow.

Knight Transformation: A flurry of pear flowers

Knight Name: Starburst Knight

Element of Use: Water, Wind

Appearence:
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Attacks:
-Uses spear
---- Prisim Sword: A blade bathed in Light (wind and pear flowers), plunges from the heavens.
---- Absolute: Freeze's enemy solid in supercooled air. (Water)
---- Mystis Cage: A multi-enemy attack that deals massive damage in one stroke! (Uses wind and water.)
---- Indignation: Calling forth a pillar of lightning (Wind and pear flowers) dealing massive-multiple damage's to the enemy.




Strengths: Offinsive fighter and speed is Jade's key, analetical before the fight starts (watch's each characters personality and reads the type of attack.)

Weaknesses: Poison and Health drain effect's, other than that, is immune to blind/darkness

P.S. I am using Jade from one of my video games and I wanted to stick as close as possible to his attacks and element styles of which are wind, water, fire and earth. I have used him in other RP's since I am kind of in love with him.
PostPosted: Wed Aug 08, 2012 10:39 am


Heya hun,

I was talking with Dark about your bios last night, and he pointed out a few things that I didn't see when I looked at them the first time.

You need to add some more details to their bios. Especially the history section. The weaknesses look better. But I'm not sure if I would say that Starburst is immune to all poison. To me, it kind of sounds unrealistic (even for a senshi).

Also, for elements, they should also narrow elements of use down to one. Two at the very most. Senshi can be strong and powerful without having a bunch of elements to use. For Starburst, I think the elements you have listed can be narrowed down to either light or creation. Dark made a suggestion to me that sums up all 3 of the elements listed and gosh darn it if I can't remember!

Edit: He said try Light or Holy smile

For Starburst Knight, I would suggest probably narrow the elements down to just Earth. You can do a lot with it and still have a very powerful knight. But its up to you.

Sorry if it sounds like I'm picking your bios apart a bit. You do have something good going for both of your characters! But I think you can do better in terms of molding them into characters that are not just great, but awesome smile

Miss Jenn Jenn
Captain


LotusCurtiss

Fashionable Powerhouse

PostPosted: Wed Aug 08, 2012 9:30 pm


Update, please read above and notice the *cough* recommended changes or biggrin add on. Thank you.

Misses Jenn Jenn
Heya hun,

I was talking with Dark about your bios last night, and he pointed out a few things that I didn't see when I looked at them the first time.

You need to add some more details to their bios. Especially the history section. The weaknesses look better. But I'm not sure if I would say that Starburst is immune to all poison. To me, it kind of sounds unrealistic (even for a senshi).

Also, for elements, they should also narrow elements of use down to one. Two at the very most. Senshi can be strong and powerful without having a bunch of elements to use. For Starburst, I think the elements you have listed can be narrowed down to either light or creation. Dark made a suggestion to me that sums up all 3 of the elements listed and gosh darn it if I can't remember!

Edit: He said try Light or Holy smile

For Starburst Knight, I would suggest probably narrow the elements down to just Earth. You can do a lot with it and still have a very powerful knight. But its up to you.

Sorry if it sounds like I'm picking your bios apart a bit. You do have something good going for both of your characters! But I think you can do better in terms of molding them into characters that are not just great, but awesome smile
PostPosted: Wed Dec 05, 2012 5:55 am


LotusCurtiss
Name: Lotus Curtiss

Age: ? (looks 16-20)

Gender: Chick

Birthday: June 27th

Zodiac Sign: Cancer

Blood Type: A

Hpbbies/Likes: Reading, painting, writing and video games (Inspired Game and Manga Writer), Husband.

Dislikes: Injustice

Family: Jade Curtiss (Husband- Knight)

Appearence: Hair is pitch black with purple and indigo irredecent shimmer. Iris' are (from outside-in) Indigo, aquamarine and violet.
User Image

Personality: Quiet, a good listener and wisdom beyond her years.

History:
Family History- Lotus comes from a long line of lost Senshi, said to be lost even to the Moon Princess, what happened to them is still a mystery. Her family line used to be advisor's to the line of Moon Princess'.

Personal History: Lotus meet and married Jade Curtiss, an american who moved to live in Japan and complete his advanced college degree (PhD). She currently runs a small shrine passed from her grandparents unto her, a Healing Shrine where people from all walks of life could find themselves to gather their thoughts and find healing with her advice. She keeps to herself about her family yet the look in her eyes tells that of much more. Lotus's power's remain sealed that is untill the reawakening of the Moon Princess.

Sailor Transformation Information: In a flurry of ribbons made of shimmering stars.

Sailor Name: Starburst -(relates to baby boom galaxies that are the brightest star's)

Element of Use: Holy, Creation, Heart

Appearence: Hair and Eye's (same as above). -imagine sword gone and bow in hair gone- --white heel's--
User Image
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Attacks:
- White Staff with Blue Orb's.
---- Starburst Rainbow; Final attack that unleashes rainbow crystals that deal massive damage
---- Sealing Heart; cause's enmies to become disoriented and doubt their abilities to fight.
---- Shining Starlight; a healing song
---- Star Burst; a blinding attack that causes temporarily slowness



Strength's: Defensive fighter and speed is Lotus' key, analetical as soon as a fight starts (observes patterns and movements to counter and turn the tables.)

Weaknesses: Dark/Blind effect's, other than that, is immune to Water.


Name: Jade Curtiss

Age: ? (Looks 20-30)

Gender: Dude

Birthday: June 27th

Zodiac Sign: Cancer

Blood Type: B

Hobbies/Likes: Reading, Curry/Potato dishes, Wife

Dislikes: Annoying People, jerks, idiots

Family: Lotus Curtiss (Wife- Senshi)

Appearence:
User Image

Personality: Cold, Sarcastic, Follows and finishes goals.

History: Jade is an american who moved to live in Japan to complete his advanced college degree (PhD) and comes from a wealthy family and is the youngest adopted son. He meet and married Lotus, keeping close to her side. He, one day was reliving some transgressions from his past and found himself at a shrine were Lotus just smiled and gave him a bag of star candy. Though Jade promised to never marry and much more than to fall in love, he did. He prefers not to share about his past and the trangressions that follow.

Knight Transformation: A flurry of pear flowers

Knight Name: Starburst Knight

Element of Use: Water, Wind

Appearence:
User Image
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Attacks:
-Uses spear
---- Prisim Sword: A blade bathed in Light (wind and pear flowers), plunges from the heavens.
---- Absolute: Freeze's enemy solid in supercooled air. (Water)
---- Mystis Cage: A multi-enemy attack that deals massive damage in one stroke! (Uses wind and water.)
---- Indignation: Calling forth a pillar of lightning (Wind and pear flowers) dealing massive-multiple damage's to the enemy.




Strengths: Offinsive fighter and speed is Jade's key, analetical before the fight starts (watch's each characters personality and reads the type of attack.)

Weaknesses: Poison and Health drain effect's, other than that, is immune to blind/darkness

P.S. I am using Jade from one of my video games and I wanted to stick as close as possible to his attacks and element styles of which are wind, water, fire and earth. I have used him in other RP's since I am kind of in love with him.


Approvded. Tag was taken out of the title.

Miss Jenn Jenn
Captain

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