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 Posted: Sat Feb 04, 2012 1:53 pm
this is just like the first few lines of my story but i wanted to know if it was a good hook. the story is going to be about a young high school girl finding God. soooo here it is.....
I thought my life was over.The knife in my hand. one small twist of the wrist or move of the hand and it would all end... but then I met him.
9 months earlier
tell me your thoughts
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