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X_Oxy_X

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 03, 2011 4:08 pm
Below you will find two skeletons one is the old one this guild has been running, the other is a new skeleton that has been recently created.
Please look them both over and vote.



old
Quote:
Name sad name of ship)

Crew sad crew name)

Type sad type of ship)

Physical Description: (Provide details include color and size)

Inventory sad what does it carried/have in it)

Weapons sad what it use for weapons)

Techniques sad what techniques does it use)


new

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SHIP NAME HERE




Description: [Picture or writen]

Interior Description:

Composition: [Is it wood or metal]

Amenities: [does it have a stove does it have a fridge is the toilet just a bench with a hole]

Control: [Most are rudder but there are other kinds]

Propullsion: [sail boats use sails but there are other types]

Speed: [sails move as fast as the wind blows other types need to list]

Size: [give a general size in feet]

Number of Decks: [there are normally 2 one above and one below but there can be more]

Number of Mast/Props: [how many mast does the ship have or how many props does it have]

Max Crew:

Special Abilities: [Anything unique to your]


~Weaponry~


Left side:

Right side:

Front:

Back:

Other: [please state where the location is]
 
PostPosted: Mon Apr 04, 2011 10:27 pm
bump to get more votes  

X_Oxy_X

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 5:30 am
While, I do like the new one, a lot, It is missing one thing the old one has, Inventory. While Amenities can cover that, it isn't quite the correct place for it.  
PostPosted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 7:12 am
That should be added to the skeleton I'll stick it in there when i made the new one I was focused on including as much detail as possible for the ship.  

X_Oxy_X

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 06, 2011 9:29 am
If your really want some detail. Water displacement, Crew (Needed for operation), Max Passengers and Other (For anything that could better detail the ship but isn't included, not just other weapon positions.)  
PostPosted: Wed Apr 06, 2011 1:13 pm
Water displacement is a bit too much to expect from people.

Crew needed is a matter of opinion since if you move fast enough you can operate a complex ship solo.

Max passengers is based on deck space for the most part.

The second other section would be a good idea.  

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 06, 2011 2:07 pm
Um, as for your thoughts on water displacement, well, that is a good bit of math needed.
Crew needed. What! Yes, there are some that you can pull that. But a majority, hell no.
Max Passengers, no. It is not just deck space. There is a lot more to it then that. Some ships can't hold that much weight.
The second other, glad you agree.  
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