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PostPosted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 9:09 pm


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I'm supposed to make a roleplay for a guild I'm in, The Idiots in Black.
To graduate their academy and become crew, I have to create a roleplay and have active members post in it.
I have a starter idea which came to me in a dream.
However, I don't know how to continue at all. I have no idea what to do.
I'm in a creative writing guild and no one is helping there at all. ;w;

The dream begins with a teenage girl driving at night in a Jeep with her three friends down these really steep, rocky roads somewhere in Brazil. Her mother calls and yells at her because she doesn't want the girl to go to a mansion tour she was going on, but they went anyways and the tour started when they arrived.

Then comes a voice-over describing how it was a governor's mansion. He has a whole bunch of staff, like his own team of doctors, that live there. There was this sadistic neurosurgeon that killed one of the maids and a flashback was shown from her point of view, which had him cutting into her without any anesthesia. She was screaming and there was a lot of blood. She had been dead for ten years and her body was never found.

Then the camera zoomed on some ghosts; all were either maids or butlers, and the maid that was murdered was one of them. They started talking to each other, and the camera zoomed in on the neurosurgeon, who is talking to the governor and having a glass of red wine with him. It turned out the murdered maid had an affair with the governor and the governor's wife had an affair with the neurosurgeon, by what she said, and the governor's wife was beside him, looking annoyed. The murdered maid was suspicious about the touring girls, and they were watching them explore the house. No one can see them yet and deaths of the other ghosts are unknown.

... NOW WHAT? I've figured that they can solve the mystery, but I'm seriously brain-dead!
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 5:03 am


Join the Ph3nom's Guild , don't ask, JUST DO IT oh cause of the hobo ball.


oh wow that was good
if only i could help sweatdrop


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PostPosted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 12:44 pm


Maybe the girls could wander around and go into certain rooms where things had occurred and the ghost maid could put visions in their heads?
PostPosted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 3:07 pm


Black tongues speak faster than the car can crash
You supply the rumors and I'll provide the wrath


That's a good idea. But I'm not sure if I can do it w/o godmodding. confused
I could have some rooms "off-limits," but they sneak in after the tour.
And/or give the one of the girls some sort of intuition to help along?

@ Huggertaker: Thanks. This is actually one of my more creative, ******** up dreams. 3nodding
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 12:16 am


Sounds good. :D
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