My poem ^_^

[The Most Devoted Follower]

Lover Oh Lover,
Sing Me A Sweet Song,
The Melody A Sweet Horror,
Of A Life Gone Wrong,

Lover Oh Lover,
Show Me A Play,
Upon The Stage,
Of A New Day,

Lover Oh Lover
Keep This Heart Alive,
Once Its Dead,
It wont revive,

Lover Oh Lover,
Stay With Me,
For My Heart Is,
A Dead Melody  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

that is really the sweeties sad poem u have it really good can u make a sequel to it  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

not bad it very poetic and it is adventurous
it makes people feel really happy  

[XxPrincessTKxX]

its k  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

it good it reminds me of Davichi song