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 Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 4:44 am
Umm..Lucario13 here,me and Rukario13 are wirting a tale, Do take part in this and say what you think of it.Well this is just the opening.
1 year ago a band of ghost pokemon lead by a Darkrai attacked a kingdome of psychc pokemon.The team of ghost pokemon imprison everyone in the kingdome in the castle.After 13 days passed a small group got out of the castle. A Gallde and a small amry of psychc pokemon was going get rid of Darkrai and his team, But Gallde's sister Gardevoir tryed to stop him, She said to him " Don't to this, I'll let you go if you come back safe." Gallde said to her " I'll come back,Am sure we be safe,Now go to back to the castle." Gardevoir said, "ok, be safe". *Gardevoir let them passed* The army defeted the Darkrai and his team, But befor Darkrai was going to the land of lost souls, He took Gallde with him.Gadevoir saw every thing form the top of the castle.Then she said to herslef " I'll never rest till Gallde is back and safe,I will find a way to go to the land of lost souls if it kills me."Gadevoir sets off on here quests.
*End of opening.*
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Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 3:09 pm
With a bit of revision and checking, this could be pretty good. I often write stories, so gimme a call if you need anything.
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Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 3:11 pm
Oh and HELLO? I FINISHED THE GUILD BANNER BUT NO ONE HAS SAID ANYTHING.
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Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 12:49 am
Zangaxel Tybalt With a bit of revision and checking, this could be pretty good. I often write stories, so gimme a call if you need anything. sorry me and Rukario13 were wirting this at 1:00 am. So we were to sleeply to look and check on it befor we post it.
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Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 3:51 pm
You've got potential, definitly.
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Posted: Sat Jun 06, 2009 7:47 pm
For ep2 it will take a day or two befor we post it.
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Posted: Wed Jun 17, 2009 7:05 am
Here is ep 1 of are tale.
After the attacked 1 year ago.Gadevoir sets off on her quest to get Gallde back.She heard of a wise Alakazam who lives on the way to the water pokemon kingdome.On her way there she meet a Lucario named Rukario.Rukario ask what she was doing,She said " Am going to see Alakazam The Wise. Then he ask why,She told him about her quest.Her tale was so sad that it maked Rukario cry.Then Rukario said " I'll join you on your quest".Gadevoir said "Thank you".
The two went to Alakazam's,they have found out from Alakazam that the a mage who lives in Mt. Steel knows a way to get to the land of lost souls and back.But befor they say good-bye to Alakzam,He gave both of them items, he gave Gadevoir the Bow of The Angels and he gave Rukario the Aura Sword.And he told them about someone that lives in the City of Steel at may know how to get to Mt Steel.
*end of ep 1*
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Posted: Sun Jun 21, 2009 7:29 am
heres ep two.(sorry it took so long)
After Gadevoir and Rukario left Alakazam,They want to Steel City.As they were heading there Rukario ask if they can pick up some stuff at his house,Rukario lived in the kingdome of the water pokemon.He live there with is wife Lopunny and two kids,one was a male Rioul who was 13 years old and the another was a female Buneary who was 12 years old.They head there,Rukario got a map and his back pack.Lopunny said "Rukario were are you going?"He said"Am helping Gadevoir to get her bother back."Lopunny said"Can I come,plz"Rukario said"What about the kids"Lopunny said"We can leave them that my mom's house in the kingdome of the psychc pokemon."Lopunny ask Gadevoir them if they can go there.After they dorped the kids,They head to the Steel City.
*What will happen next*
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Posted: Sun Jun 21, 2009 7:30 am
Ok Lucario13 is some were in the world rigth now,Eevee The Pokemon is going to help me with this.
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Posted: Sun Jun 21, 2009 7:38 am
Rukario13 Ok Lucario13 is some were in the world rigth now,Eevee The Pokemon is going to help me with this. Yup am going to help Rukario13,Till Lucario13 gets back.For those who don't know me am just new here.
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Posted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 6:29 pm
So uhh... Yeah when's ep. 3 commin' out?
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Posted: Sun Jul 19, 2009 4:31 am
so to make a long story short.Gardevoir14, befor she went away,She took the story line for ep 3,4,5 ecte.I had a copy,But I gave it to Eevee300.And when I ask him where it was.He said that he lost it.So Gardevoir14 is going to send it to us.
(Nice going Eevee300)
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Posted: Sun Jul 19, 2009 11:28 pm
Rukario13 so to make a long story short.Gardevoir14, befor she went away,She took the story line for ep 3,4,5 ecte.I had a copy,But I gave it to Eevee300.And when I ask him where it was.He said that he lost it.So Gardevoir14 is going to send it to us. (Nice going Eevee300) am sorry
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