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Posted: Sat Mar 14, 2009 10:03 am
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Posted: Sat Mar 14, 2009 7:26 pm
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The Mysterious Gunslinger
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Posted: Sat Mar 14, 2009 7:58 pm
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Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2009 2:39 pm
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Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2009 3:46 pm
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rofl
Quote: po⋅em /ˈpoʊəm/ Show Spelled Pronunciation [poh-uhm] Show IPA –noun 1. a composition in verse, esp. one that is characterized by a highly developed artistic form and by the use of heightened language and rhythm to express an intensely imaginative interpretation of the subject.2. composition that, though not in verse, is characterized by great beauty of language or expression: a prose poem from the Scriptures; a symphonic poem.
You don't have to have 'restrictions' when writing poetry. :/ Poetry doesn't have to rhyme or be in iambic pentameter, etc. It's called free verse. However, it still has to be a poem.
You can't just take prose and make it a poem. EX: Here's a random passage from a book I have laying around formatted as if it's a poem:
She stared at frustration at the screen which at that moment carried a picture of the Prime Minister telling her how all things considered everything was really far better than it had been three years ago even if it didn't seem that way As she watched she was mildly surprised to see the picture of the Prime Minister's face...
Bona fide poetry:
Gathering Leaves
Spades take up leaves No better than spoons, And bags full of leaves Are light as balloons.
I make a great noise Of rustling all day Like rabbit and deer Running away.
But the mountains I raise Elude my embrace, Flowing over my arms And into my face.
I may load and unload Again and again Till I fill the whole shed, And what have I then?
Next to nothing for weight, And since they grew duller From contact with earth, Next to nothing for color.
Next to nothing for use. But a crop is a crop, And who's to say where The harvest shall stop?
Robert Frost
This is not to say poetry must rhyme (duh!) it just happened to be present in the example. Also, I'm not saying poetry has to be entirely simplistic (see Narrative poetry; epics, ballads, etc.)
ANYWAY~ my entire point is that you may want to write prose rather than poetry unless you want to actually write poetry. I would rather read: Wouldn't you really rather have it clearer even if it did come off as prose? As you can see, I write far better with fewer restrictions.
As opposed to: Wouldn't you really rather have it clearer even if it did come off as prose? As you can see I write far better with fewer restrictions.
Well, g'luck with whatever you do. : D
If you have some extra time and want a few laughs, I recommend checking out this: http://www.anti-shurtugal.com/wordpress/?p=31
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Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 9:26 am
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Just_Fn_Crazy Surasaya WELL... I like the content and ideas, I really do. However, it doesn't read like a poem at ALL. It just seems like a story with breaks.
They called me a "naritive imagist". Is this more like a poem. I just wrote it today. Nihongo no Tsuki a Japanese moon over my tiny world too... being very good I could but see it, what it was, and complete it, herein breaths and beats but please understand the glowing parts are garland thrown so, to woman liberties ashore the States statue thus adorned... Freedom's employer welcomed to my ears the words of the songs write, “Here's love!” on all life's tears. THE END Wouldn't you really rather have it clearer even if it did come off as prose? As you can see I write far better with fewer restrictions. Got Gackt?
(?) huh? Wish I could really see what my critics are talking about. I really really do. Is what you're saying that the spoof--see UNKNOWN VAMPIRE--poetic prose in some stories potentially poetry too but not in the example of Edgar Allen Poe or Rudyand Kipling for example. Question: Do you mean that assonance and consonance well done is to be ignored if it is not as profound as Frost or Emily Dickinson. If so we are all in trouble. On the other hand I can see some of what you're saying to some extent for sometimes it even feels like a story rather than a poem as I write it. But my point is, if your critics not mine call that I write a poem and publish it-- even give me money to write it, correct me if I am wrong, but isn't getting published part of it too? What if I change my style and no more magazines accept my poems--does my poetic endeavor stop at seventeen publications without ever having written a poem? Odd. You think. question sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 9:02 pm
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Just_Fn_Crazy Just_Fn_Crazy Surasaya WELL... I like the content and ideas, I really do. However, it doesn't read like a poem at ALL. It just seems like a story with breaks.
They called me a "naritive imagist". Is this more like a poem. I just wrote it today. Nihongo no Tsuki a Japanese moon over my tiny world too... being very good I could but see it, what it was, and complete it, herein breaths and beats but please understand the glowing parts are garland thrown so, to woman liberties ashore the States statue thus adorned... Freedom's employer welcomed to my ears the words of the songs write, “Here's love!” on all life's tears. THE END Wouldn't you really rather have it clearer even if it did come off as prose? As you can see I write far better with fewer restrictions. Got Gackt? (?) huh? Wish I could really see what my critics are talking about. I really really do. Is what you're saying that the spoof--see UNKNOWN VAMPIRE--poetic prose in some stories potentially poetry too but not in the example of Edgar Allen Poe or Rudyand Kipling for example. Question: Do you mean that assonance and consonance well done is to be ignored if it is not as profound as Frost or Emily Dickinson. If so we are all in trouble. On the other hand I can see some of what you're saying to some extent for sometimes it even feels like a story rather than a poem as I write it. But my point is, if your critics not mine call that I write a poem and publish it-- even give me money to write it, correct me if I am wrong, but isn't getting published part of it too? What if I change my style and no more magazines accept my poems--does my poetic endeavor stop at seventeen publications without ever having written a poem? Odd. You think. question sweatdrop n_n;;;; I really have no idea what you're trying to say, sorry. o_0
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Posted: Sat Mar 21, 2009 5:34 am
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Surasaya Just_Fn_Crazy Just_Fn_Crazy Surasaya WELL... I like the content and ideas, I really do. However, it doesn't read like a poem at ALL. It just seems like a story with breaks.
They called me a "naritive imagist". Is this more like a poem. I just wrote it today. Nihongo no Tsuki a Japanese moon over my tiny world too... being very good I could but see it, what it was, and complete it, herein breaths and beats but please understand the glowing parts are garland thrown so, to woman liberties ashore the States statue thus adorned... Freedom's employer welcomed to my ears the words of the songs write, “Here's love!” on all life's tears. THE END Wouldn't you really rather have it clearer even if it did come off as prose? As you can see I write far better with fewer restrictions. Got Gackt? (?) huh? Wish I could really see what my critics are talking about. I really really do. Is what you're saying that the spoof--see UNKNOWN VAMPIRE--poetic prose in some stories potentially poetry too but not in the example of Edgar Allen Poe or Rudyand Kipling for example. Question: Do you mean that assonance and consonance well done is to be ignored if it is not as profound as Frost or Emily Dickinson. If so we are all in trouble. On the other hand I can see some of what you're saying to some extent for sometimes it even feels like a story rather than a poem as I write it. But my point is, if your critics not mine call that I write a poem and publish it-- even give me money to write it, correct me if I am wrong, but isn't getting published part of it too? What if I change my style and no more magazines accept my poems--does my poetic endeavor stop at seventeen publications without ever having written a poem? Odd. You think. question sweatdrop n_n;;;; I really have no idea what you're trying to say, sorry. o_0
I'm not sure I do either. Thanks for your patience.
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