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 Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2008 5:29 pm
Post ur poems have people rate them help chack for corrections and more
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Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 1:16 pm
i posted some poems before but no one really paid attention and i want to have them rated and get some advice for better future poems. soo.. here is one of my poems i posted.
Monster
Im the monster in your closet
Im the demon under your bed.
Im the tapping on your window
Im the voice inside your head.
Im the figure in your nightmares
Standing with the axe.
Im the footsteps on your stairs
Now Im right behind your back.
The bump in the attic.
The shadows from outside.
I won't matter where you run
It won't matter where you hide.
and another
Lost
slowly falling
through a darkness so thick
it holds me back
it makes me feel sick
these thoughts in my mind
caused by my pain
i continue to fall
going insane
i land on solid ground
but my head is still high
i start to feel lost
i just want to die
then i see a light
its calling me there
im going some place
but i dont know where
i burst through the light
and land on the grass
i feel sunlight
a breeze lazily pass
the warmth on my face
and the dew on the ground
i feel content here
i have been found
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Posted: Tue Dec 16, 2008 8:38 am
Lost is a good poem. Here's one I wrote last night. It's kinda short.
Wolves howling at the night,
there is no sweeter sound.
Running swiftly over snow,
to this mountain I am bound.
There's but one pack of wolves,
living on this mountain I hear.
'twas a great season,
and I have no reason,
to forget these memories next year.
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