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 Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2008 8:34 pm
Stranger-Than-Fiction by Valerie
This is dedicated to my boyfriend Tucker, who's always been dedicated to me.
I have a love, that's stranger-than-fiction,
It's passed an obsession, more like an addiction.
It's like when I walk, when no one's around,
Nothing moves, nothing makes a sound.
It's like when I'm with him all alone,
No sadness is there, at least none that's shown.
Not the least of my worries is if it will end,
Because for this love, I'll die to defend.
But if it must be over someday,
Maybe for now... you could just stay?
But you're far, and I can't always see you,
I wish there were some way, some little clue.
But when I'm with you, I can't take a breath,
But if to lose you, I'd sooner choose death.
For death would be better, and easier now,
Than facing the pain, I wouldn't know how.
Cause' this is my love, my secret addiction,
This is our love, still stranger-than-fiction.
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Posted: Sat Sep 13, 2008 8:54 pm
That was good.
It kinda...didn't seem to leave the right feelings though. It's odd, becuase it's obviously a love poem, but it didn't leave me with the "aww" or love-oriented sort of feelings those kind of poems usually do.
It's different, but it works. I wouldn't change it.
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