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Llovemos (en Espanol)(translated)

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KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Tue May 13, 2008 7:42 pm


Llovemos
(We rain)

El dia esta empezando
Como el dia primero cuando
Senor Adam y Senora Eva
caminen en el Jardin.
Y nosotros caminamos
bailamos
cantamos
jugamos en la playa
Estamos las personas solas
continuamos vivir.

Y nosotros llovemos:
volamos, reiamos
No nos preocupamos
sobre la costa
o el tiempo
cuando tenemos que
decir despedida.

Colgamos en el aire
con la luna
Encima del mundo
Baja las estrellas.
No recordamos los cosas malas
No nos duele en los corazones
No nos creamos.
No volvemos nunca.
No nos caemos
Nosotros
solo
somos.

Y vivimos
nos reimos
oimos....
Y llovemos.


~~~

Translation:

The day is starting
like the first day when
Adam and Eve
walked en the Garden.
And we walk
we dance
we sing
we play on the beach
We are the only people
(Who/We) continue to live.

And we rain
We fly, we watch
we are not preocupied
about the cost
or the time
when we have to
say farewell.

We hand in the air
with the moon
over the earth
under the stars.
We don't remember the bad times
Our hearts do not hurt.
We do not think.
We never return.
We do not fall.
We
just
be.

And we live
we laugh
we listen...
And we rain.
PostPosted: Tue May 13, 2008 9:41 pm


this was very etheral and calming, it really made me feel deep as well. I also felt like it told me that we need to find more ways to live than the way we are living now. In other words we should care more about things that are happening.

Galladonsfire


KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Wed May 14, 2008 3:24 pm


That last part is...ironically...the exact opposite of what I meant.

Or what I think I meant.

Meh. It's up to anyone's interpretation...even mine :/
PostPosted: Wed May 14, 2008 4:31 pm


KirbyVictorious
That last part is...ironically...the exact opposite of what I meant.

Or what I think I meant.

Meh. It's up to anyone's interpretation...even mine :/


I see what you mean by that, but thats also not what I meant...

I was talking on a basis of a more personal level about things that are happening. Doesn't have to be society that we should be worried about but more the people around us.

Galladonsfire


KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Wed May 14, 2008 4:32 pm


Still nope.
PostPosted: Wed May 14, 2008 4:36 pm


>.>

Galladonsfire

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