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Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 10:00 pm
I'll reserve this post for when all of the judges have their votes in.
We apologize for the delay, it's been something of a busy week. We hope to have the chuunin called before Sunday night.
Judges, please post your votes here, the name of each competitor with a "Yes" or "No" vote. Any competitor you give a "No" to, you must supply a reason.
Judging for chuunin is based on the best three-out-of-five vote.
The Judges are:
Temari Shikamaru Guy Kakashi Shizune
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Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 10:56 pm
Since some of the matches went rather slowly, and there wasn't much to gather from, I also put a bit of my opinions from past matches added in, to give you an overall idea of who I think is chuunin worthy.
Rikei Kyuuzou: YES
Miyuki Takarada: NO
After much deliberation and reading your match a few times, I really think you missed a bit of the reality of what you were doing. As much as I positively adore your character, and the noble drive she had, being a chuunin is also about making good decisions. That means knowing the capabilities of what you own, your own condition, and outside conditions. Knowing when to quit and retreat is a good quality, rather than ending up with near-fatal injuries after every major battle. I think the next time, you'd do a fantastic job. But at present, I don't see you fit to be a chuunin and hold the responsibility that a chuunin is expected to uphold.
Toravisu Yokoshima: NO
As good of a fighter as you are, your ability to lead a team would be compromised with your "one-man-show" attitude. You'd have the ability to protect a team as a leader, but teamwork is a stressed component. Your character may expect it, but tough love and compassion have to work in an effective balance to be able to trust him with responsibility, and allow him to function as a platoon leader. I think your character has some growing to do.
Minato Higate: NO
As pretty and elaborately descriptive your posts were, they described things that had very little to do with what you were actually doing. Summaries helped, but I still had a bit of a problem picking out what you were doing. And a "bloodthirsty" type doesn't fit the criteria of someone suited to be chuunin.
Yamata Suginori: YES
Takiko Matsuhina: N/A
Due to certain circumstances, I am ineligible to vote for Taki.
Shuro Raikouro: YES
Nitou Suimate: YES
Kayzuru Eyoko: NO
I feel like you were still missing a bit of the Naruto-esque of it, looking through all of your battles. You'd be a perfect mage in some fantasy-type roleplay, but I don't exactly see much of being a ninja here. You'd have good social and teamwork skills, but not a leader's.
Heero Tamahome: YES
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Posted: Sat Apr 19, 2008 8:23 pm
Rikei Kyuuzou: N
This is more character-wise than OOc-wise. You are great with Rikei, it's just Rikei that is not so Chuunin. I believe the last round should prove why with what he did to Sato. Normally, that type of punishment isn't that bad, but your character has a tendency of taking it too far. I'm sure you purposely gave him the Deidara touch with a little change up, so I can see where the sadistic attitude comes from.
Miyuki Takarada: N
My comments are just about the same as Temari's.
Toravisu Yokoshima: Y (*laughs*)
Minato Higate: N
I agree with temari, as well.
Yamata Suginori: Y
It's usually the Suna officials that have to judge you, but since there isn't really a Suna yet, I'll say you pass.
Takiko Matsuhina: Y
Shuro Raikouro: Y
Nitou Suimate: Y
Kayzuru Eyoko: N
You still have much to learn from seeing your performances. You're getting there as a skilled ninja, but your character reminds me a bit of a Sakura-in-training, in that you have potential, but haven't reached it yet in the qualities it takes to be a Chuunin.
Heero Tamahome: N
Needs a little more training. I reviewed this round's match and the last, and I have to say that he's not quite Chuunin yet.
I'm judging more critical than Temari, so there weren't many Yes votes from me. So, everyone, don't be offended if I have placed you as a N.
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Posted: Sat Apr 19, 2008 9:11 pm
Due to some complications, Kakashi and Shizune won't be joining the judging. So, the results will be compromised of a best two-out-of-three vote between Temari, Shikamaru, and Guy.
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Tsunade of the Sannin Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2008 8:29 pm
Toravisu Yokoshima and Minato Higate: Both No
To Toravisu: My comments are the same as Temari's. Chuunin are supposed to be team leaders, and although you have some great skills, I wasn't seeing that from you either.
To Minato: I agree with Temari as well. You wasted a lot of your actual attack posts talking about how you looked like when your body moved. That genjutsu you attempted seemed to me to be no more than trying to suggest the effects to your opponent through your writing as if they'd be impressed by it.
That, and I thought your sense of physics in the fight were off. There were many ways Toravisu could have thrown off that double-handed attack in ways to mess up your balance with the way you were positioned. That, and throwing a kunai at close quarters with just a wrist flick after it's momentum has been struck in another direction, especially when you misunderstood the time frame it'd take for Toravisu to complete that movement. By the time you recovered your kunai for a proper throw, his baton would already be coming in. At worst, Toravisu could have moved his body towards the outside and take a glancing blow to his hip while you would end up open to a broken nose, which would not be a good impairment to have against someone once they start using ninjutsu.
Heero Tamahome and Eyoko Kayzuru
Heero Tamahome: Yes
Eyoko Kayzuru: No
I have to agree with the others. I still think you need more development. I have my own comments on tactics you could have used to avoid Heero's attacks, but your freezing techniques seem to catch me a bit off guard. Is this a kekkei genkai? Hyouton (Ice Element) is a kekkei genkai-based elemental jutsu type in Naruto, and I would understand if you say that you possess it. However, I also notice that your freezing techniques don't require any handsigns. Are you even using jutsu? I would hope so considering the nature of the competition. Normally handsigns don't really effect too much in terms of reaction time depending on the jutsu and situation, but you were freezing his attacks in mid swing. As a ninja I would have expected you to move rather than retain your stance. You're definately better than the usual Genin, but there's more you need to work on before getting to Chuunin.
Miyuki Takarada and Rikei Kyuuzou: Both Yes
I thought both of them did fantastic in their fight. Although I agree with what the others say with Miyuki, I don't think that's enough to bar her out of being a Chuunin. That's just how I feel about it. Like Rikei, she has a concrete theme with her lighting element and taijutsu. Both of them are models of what we're looking for in chuunin, especially along the lines of creating interesting stories.
Even though I'm approving Rikei as well, I agree with Shikamaru. If he's gonna advance as a Konoha ninja, he'll have to stop thinking like that Akatsuki we know so well. >>
Yamata Suginori and Takiko Matsuhina: Both Yes
*Nice guy pose* Great fight!
Nitou Suimate and Shuro Raikouro: Both Yes
Very good tactical usage of jutsu from both of you.
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Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2008 9:05 pm
Please disregard my last message. Shizune and Kakashi will be participating in judging for a wider opinion, but we must extend the date to tomorrow night.
I will make an official announcement in the Updates thread and change the title of the Konoha thread when the results are in and finalized.
Thank you for your patience.
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Tsunade of the Sannin Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2008 11:40 pm
Rikei Kyuuzou: N - I agree with Shikamaru on this. Great character, great rping, great tactics...But all the same you gotta have some form of mild restraint, even when you're attempting to make a point.
Miyuki Takarada: N - I also agree with Temari. Nobel drive and such is great. But it should never be brought forward to the point of which it could compromise the mission at hand. Limits need to be known, and control needs to be kept. Under no circumstances should a chuunin, or even a real ninja lose themselves like you did in the final slip of things. Rp wise it was greatly entertaining, but keep in mind of limits and know when to take a loss.
Toravisu Yokoshima: N D: I actually wanted you to become a chuunin at one point, however the others are right again. You lack team work abilities. Y'know this is starting to become a trend...
Minato Higate: N - Word of advice? Pay more attention to battle detail then surrounding detail. Or even better pay attention to both and work on both so that they melt in together. Focus less on the 'pretty boy syndrome' that I'm seeing going on here.
It may not be that but it's really close. Work on it.
Yamata Suginori: Y
Takiko Matsuhina: N -Cries.- ;_; I'm sorry! But I can't let you go after what happened. Your character is wonderfully made and it seems like you have really good potential for that particular character. But you MUST focus, and you MUST attack offensively.
Shuro Raikouro: Y
Nitou Suimate: Y
Kayzuru Eyoko: N -I agree with everything the others say, once again. However outside of what everyone else has pointed out. I want to point out that you need to work on your observations and battle instinct more. Look for more ways to take down your opinion, and in a manner that allows less pain when mistakes come into play.
Heero Tamahome: Y
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Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 12:38 am
We thank all the competitors and spectators for being so patient. We're waiting on one last judging, from Kakashi.
But, since the ability to pass to chuunin is based on the best 3-out-of-5 vote, we can make a few decisive chuunin already.
Rikei (Must wait for last judging)
Miyuki - Will Remain a Genin Recieved three "no"s from the judges.
Toravisu - Will Remain a Genin Recieved three "no"s from the judges.
Minato - Will Remain a Genin Recieved four "no"s from the judges.
Yamata - CHUUNIN Recieved four "yes"s from the judges.
Takiko (Must wait for last judging)
Shuro - CHUUNIN Recieved four "yes"s from the judges.
Nitou - CHUUNIN Recieved four "yes"s from the judges.
Eyoko - Will Remain a Genin Recieved four "no"s from the judges.
Heero - CHUUNIN Recieved three "yes"s from the judges.
There are four chuunin who walk out of this so far.
Yamata Shuro Nitou Heero
Since some of the decisions are definite, Kakashi's only duty relies in making a tie-breaker vote between Rikei's and Takiko's match.
Kakashi, if you will, please give a "yes" or "no" to Rikei and Taki, along with your reasons why. I'd like a reason for both, since you only have one match to look over.
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Tsunade of the Sannin Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 6:11 am
((I feel like I did all the work, since most of you seemed to agree with me. -_-))
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Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 12:30 pm
Awah? Oh, it seems I'm late...
Rikei- You're brutal, heartless, and strong. You've got great technique and don't take oppression to heart when an opponent tells you they hit you (As your opponent did a few times). You've got a powerful character, yes, and you don't give your opponent a moment's reprieve with that power.
We're going to have to speak about the maximum power of your weaponry. With thrown/exploding weapons, there needs to be strict details already made before a fight. In the future I want to see exact range of blasts, and I want you to detail the effects of a bomb before its thrown. For plot purposes, it's only fair to have an author know what her character will be suffering through if she is hit by one of your bombs, and you'll need to trust her to still play fair. This part isn't a huge problem I saw, but I still want you to keep a note of it.
Honestly, I hate promoting you, since I was really hoping to train you personally as a genin. But I can't be unfair-
You are now officially a CHUUNIN
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Takiko- Our bookworm ninja continues to impress. Your writing style really draws the reader in, and accurately mimics the show-style of having characters think out strategies. Though you lost fairly quickly in the final round, you faced an opponent who had the counter to most of your techniques. Overall, you're a fine Roleplayer with a smart style and a fun theme.
I've proud to say you're now officially a CHUUNIN
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Oh, and what's that? Kakashi has MORE to say?
Miyuki-
You were quite difficult to judge. On one hand you're a passionate, detailed, and immersed RPer, and that's something I think is VERY important. You attack well, have a great theme, and don't use silly cliches (unless you count Guy and Lee, which I might not disagree with as being silly...). It's so very hard to judge which parts of your performance merit you worthy or unworthy. Personally I really enjoy you. All and all I really want to pass you to Chuunin level. So I'll try.
Because I think you've been done a bit of disservice.
HOWEVER. You don't have fighting down to a science yet, and that's almost completely neccisary for a Chuunin. As well as you perform IC, OOC you need work with your style and fighting etiquette.
For example- you are supposed to 'suggest' attacks, not state them. An example being when you told Rikei that you had cut into his jeans, or when you had broken his wrists. Rekei is experienced enough to know to simply tell you otherwise, but not all fighters are.
There are still things you need to learn, even though you're almost otherwise completely chuunin material.
That said. I'm moving to promote you to- PROBABTIONARY CHUUNIN
If my fellow proctors accept this you will have to take a class with two Jounin (Likely myself and Guy) before you can become a full-fledged chuunin. If we don't believe that after our classes you are worthy, we have the full right to demote you back to genin.
If they don't accept this, unfortunately, then you're still just a genin.
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Tsunade of the Sannin Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 9:17 pm
The Hokage approves this notion for Miyuki's eligibilty as a probationary chuunin.
I don't assume there will be any who are too strongly against this condition.
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