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 Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 7:30 am
Like reading? well I like writing and Iv started a Monster hunter story which seems to be ok...a little misspelling every once in awhile but it has a few fans which is why I figured Id post the first episode up and if you like it pm me Ill get you the link to where I post all my episodes...if this is breaking some type of rule the Guild has let me know ill take it down lol....enjoy....
Sorry for the spelling and such...if you make it through teh whole story and like it ill love you forever....lol in a friendly way...
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They walked for hours after they had gotten off their boat, There was four of them. Two of the men were well built and carried a Giant sword and Hammer the other two were average, one with a long sword and the other Dual swords. They walked in the rain for hours and hours before they came to a cross in the paths, One of the men raised his hand and waved twice one way twice another. The rest nodded and they split into groups of twos. The man with the hammer looked over at the other with the duals. "...Where do you think it is?" His voice was deep and slow. the man with Duals pushed his wet hair away from his face and shook his head. "...Not sure We should check the deeper points of the swamps." The two carried on further into the wet, muddy swamps.
On the far side of the area the other two came upon a cave. "Could it be in here?" The one with the long sword spoke while pulling his sword out of its casing, and the larger man replied. "Maybe only one way of finding out." They both looked at each other and headed inside. It was dark and cold inside but they both kept walking in search of somthing, some one. The large man stopped and leaned down running his hand over the ground. "...Tracks it went through here, she cant be to far." Their walking started to speed up as they approached a larger area of the cave. "Shh look." They dropped behind some rocks looking ahead at a nest of some sort with two eggs.The man with the long sword smiled. "Ian's eggs?" They looked at each other and nodded. "It has to be I havnt seen anything else in the swamps." The large man stood up and started walking towards the eggs slowly as the smaller man spoke. "Shouldnt we wait for Victor and Spike?" He spoke low to keep hidden. The larger man took two steps and stopped, as he went to turn around his eyes got wide. "...Vain...Dont move."
Vain stopped completely and slowly turned his head behind him. A large Dragon like monster stood behind him. Its Green scales and grassy back kept it well hidden in the cave, while its long tail with a large spike at th end and its claws made it deadly. The monster let out a large Roar and leaped at Vain, He moved and started running forwards towards the eggs. "Bishop Flash her!" Vain stubbled and leaped away form the rock where the Giant wyvern had landed from its attack. The large man, Bishop, Grabbed a small ball from his pack and tossed it behind Vain as he covered his eyes from the blast of light blinding and confusing the wyvern. "Hurry grab an egg!" Bishop yelled as he ran at the beast and slashed its wing with his sword. Vain ran over to the nest and grabbed one of the eggs, but as he looked up the monster had smacked Bishop with his tail. "You ok?!" Vain started running as fast as he could without dropping the egg and checked on Bishop. "Im fine, But I dont think we can get out of here with the egg." Bishop stood up and got ready.
The Monster now targeting her egg screamed and started charging forward at the two but in a loud clase was stopped and The man with the hammer stood between Vain, Bishop and the wyvern. "Spike nice timing, Id wave but I have an egg. Where is Victor?" Spike did a spin and smacked the beast back a few feet and turned to look at the two. "He should be here soon he went to get something at the boats." Bishop grinned and walked up beside Spike. "...how about we stop this thing and clear Vain a path?" The two smiled and ran at the monster doing all they could to keep it away from Vain. After Vain had started running He seen Victor near the enterance waving.
"Hurry up tell Spike and Bishop to follow!" Vain nodded and yelled the orders back to the others as he kept at his run towards the exit. Spike smashed his hammer against the monster's head as both him and Bishop started running with Vain. The three ran out of the cave and took off towards the boat, now teamed back with Victor. "Vic she can fly faster then we can run!" Spiked yelled with fear they may ot make it, as Victor looked back. "I wasnt taking a nap while you guys fought." He smiled and in a loud thump the monster fell into a pitfall trap right in front of the cave before it could reach the outside sky. After a long run back the four rested on the boat. sweaty and tired Vain looked over at Spike and sighed. "...So was the Rathian what you expected?" Spike rubbed his head and replied. "Big, green and loud...yep bout it." The four smiled and drifted away from the island.
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Posted: Tue May 13, 2008 10:35 pm
even on here no one comments you. o.O its weird.
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Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2008 9:43 pm
Sorry if i intrude but that was an Awsome story. You should write a book >.>
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Posted: Sun Jul 19, 2009 2:37 pm
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Posted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 10:08 am
nice short story ^-^ ive thought about writing about MH before...
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Posted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 3:35 pm
Really nice job. You should write a story. It would be better than that MH: Orage manga
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Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 10:04 pm
Wow, your story is really good. I made a story too. Two of them actually, me I tell you the newest one. I'm not that good at writing stories. And it's not like I save any of them but, I want to see if it could make a good rp, because MH rp's don't last long. It's base on Monster hunter freedom 2 and a little Unite here I go.
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It snowed constantly upon the village, showing no sign of stopping. The winds blew hard, blowing hard against the windows. In the house, a mother sat with her child in a rocking chair, placed in front of thefire place. The little girl was about eight years of age. Sleeping in her mother's lap, peaceful, like she was having a good dream.
Then, three knocks broke through the silence, catching the mothers attention. She turned her head towards the door, then back at her child to see if it had woken her. The girl still slept. The mother picked her up and set the girl on the bed, placing the covers over the chair, before proceeding to the door.
The mother opened the door, and met three familiar faces. Friends of her husband, fellow hunters. She met them with a smile and invited them in. They entered, though didn't not return her smile. The mother held the door open, waiting for her husband. Yet, no one was insight. Her brow twitched and she slowly closed the door, but her eyes refused to leave it. The hunter just frowned, but one just had to tell her. He walked over to the mother and whispher in her ear. Her eyes widen as the man spoke. It wasn't long until tears formed in her eyes and fell. Her legs gave way and fell to the floor, clutching onto the handle of the door. The hunter apologized, not knowing what to say to ease the pain. She closed her eyes and she cried. The little girl in the bed watched her mother, not making a sound. She wondered why her mother was crying. A sight she has never seen before. The girl sat up in bed and called out to her mother. She got out of bed and walked over to her and hug her mother as her mother hugged her.
The mother looked at the hunters, " What was it?" she asked them. The hunters looked at her then at each other before looking back at her, "Tigrex" they said in unison. Many hunter have failed against the Tigrex. Though the Tigrex lives in the desert, it hunts in the mountains in kill the Popos, the live stock of the village of Pokke. It was a problem for the village. "We're going to go back for it tomorrow morning." one said to her. The mother looked at her child and kissed her on the forehead, "I'm going too" she told them and hugged her child before standing up and face them. They nodded, know that she helped repel the mighty Blangonga and slain the Legendary Kirin. The girl looked at everyone in the room then at her mother. The hunters said their goodbyes before leaving and the mother closed the door after them and looked her daughter and knelt down. "Destiny, about your father............"
Eighteen hours later.
"There's been an avalanche?!"
"Yes, cause by the Tigrex. Those poor hunters"
"Did anyone make it?"
" A woman survive the avalanche, you know, the one who killed the Kirin, but died shortly after we found her."
"She had a kid didn't she?"
"Poor girl, lost both her parents to the Tigrex"
As Destiny cried after being brought to her mother, the people of the village felt their hearts breaking as well. The village elder held Destiny to comfort her. It was a sad day for Pokke, losing most of their best hunters. And a very sad day for Destiny. But, over time her saddness would turn to anger, even hate.
Eight years have passed and Destiny has trained under the village elder to become a hunter. After she turned sixteen, the elder granted her to become a hunter. Destiny was excited to be going on her first mission. But before she went, the elder had something special for her. Her mother armor, the Kirin set. It was a very rare armor. Not many people slain a Kirin, let alone seen it. Destiny accepted the armor and shed tears of happiness. The elder had been saving it for Destiny. Destiny then decided to use dual swords like her father. Her first time she left the village. Walking towards the mountain which haunted her every dream.
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Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 2:50 am
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Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 1:27 am
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