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Kayai

 
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 1:43 pm


well, i dont know....it looks alright, but something feels a bit...off....can you guys help me out? i also need help on his left hand....and his hair XP

if you find anything, please tell me ^^
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 11, 2007 8:14 pm


I think the hand looks fine. o.o I also like the folds in his clothes, nicely done.

One thing that bugs me is his right shoulder (our left) because it seems positioned as though he were facing us. Try moving it up and back a little, to suit the angle. :3

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 13, 2007 2:14 pm


i see

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