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 Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2004 9:31 am
Hope you don't mind but I'm going to use this topic to post my writting. Some of you guys might find it a little darker than most, but what do you exspect from a goth blaugh . Anyways I look forward to your comments on it.
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Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2004 9:39 am
This one is for all the christian Goths out there.
"I tell you now a tale bold
One I pray will not grow old
'Tis 'bout a people near not far
People that wear the color tar
Many call their dress queer
Because of it them people fear
God's people, my true kin
Outcast them, say they sin
I advocate on their behalf
And at me people do laugh
I know of no other one
Who fallows the will of the Son
These people are condemed to death
Unless they feel God's breath
Yet no one will care for them
They won't even give it a whim
So in this I am alone
For their deaths I won't condone"
(Gothic Solitude - 11/3/04)
Ps: sorry about any spelling mistakes.
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Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2004 9:19 pm
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Posted: Sat Nov 20, 2004 5:44 am
Thanks, For a while I thought that this place was dead... Anyways I should have atleast 2 more poems up by end of next week.
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Posted: Mon Nov 22, 2004 5:34 pm
I'm deleting this thread in a couple days... start posting your poems in the coffee house, thanks.
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Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2004 4:24 pm
actually... new idea
Change the name of the thread to
"Loneguardian's Journal"
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Parari~Flight~ Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2004 12:34 pm
interesting poem; I'll come back later to criticize blaugh
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Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 8:47 am
I'll look forward to it. BTW I am back. Thank you for not deleting my topic. I get kinda picky bout those kinda things. Sry if I acted at all immature.
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Parari~Flight~ Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Dec 05, 2004 4:54 pm
I like the end rhyme....(too tired to analyze)
*i'm gonna kill the server...*
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Posted: Mon Dec 06, 2004 8:34 am
What is that bright light
And why for do so many fight
One indeed must be bold
To dislike its is to be cold
Yet to it I will not serve
For its power will not curve
I have since tasted dark
Gentle like a meadow lark
What the light leave by itself
The dark takes in as wealth
It does not leave you alone
But raises you to a throne
The darkness will one day rule
Though it its truly cruel
People can not see thought its mask
An when they die they will ask
What has happened to me
I was once free
If only they knew
The light is true
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Parari~Flight~ Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Dec 06, 2004 1:16 pm
.........interesting.......*faints from too much sake....lol 'tis a joke*
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Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2004 10:39 am
Interesting and good...dark is not necessarily a bad thing...
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Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2004 7:00 pm
No but I felt like taking the lights side on this one...
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