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Kahara Michiyo

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 15, 2006 3:10 pm


This is a story i've been working on for quite some time.. But unfortunatly i have only the prologue written. My original goal for this story if it was good enough, and my art became better, was to have it become a webcomic or comic of sorts. But it doesn't seem like that'll be any day soon.

If it does become good enough, i'd like to at least see it be published.. perhaps turned into a movie. Yes i know i dream too much.

I used the prologue as the premise for my guild's roleplay only I changed it slightly.

Anyway please read, i hope you enjoy, and i'd very much love to hear comments, suggestions and tips, because God knows i need 'em.

Table of Contents
Page 1:
Post 1- Intro/table of contents
Post 2- Prologue: The Battle
Post 3- Chapter 1: The Prophecy
Post 4- Chapter 2: The Awakening(work in progress)
PostPosted: Fri Dec 15, 2006 3:12 pm


I don't quite have a name for the evil bad guy yet so when you see the "___________________" insert some evil name or something
Prologue: The Battle
In a time very distant from our own an ancient evil known as _________ threatened the existence of the universe. He wanted to control everything and to do so he had to turn everything into a barren wasteland where only evil could prevail, more specifically his followers, lackeys, and himself. So from the farthest expanses of the universe he came spreading pain, death and destruction upon all the worlds lying in his path.

As that evil forces gained control of more and more worlds many people lost all hope that they would be saved and the evil destroyed once and for all. What most did not know was that a force of good was en route. Eight chosen people from four different worlds, far away from where the destruction had begun, two from each of the world’s major cities, Yarusagi, Shiawase, Aikou and Kietsu. Each of the chosen wielded powers and abilities of one of the six elements: Water, Fire, Earth, Air, Light and Darkness, two of them, however, were able to wield powers and abilities from all six of the elements. The warriors’ ability to use these skills as a team would be the deciding factor for this enormous quest they had undertaken.

__________ upon hearing word of these eight chosen, sent out his eight most trusted advisor’s, the generals of his army of darkness, one by one in hopes to defeat the opposing team.

The eight chosen bested each general one by one, they used each battle as training for when they finally came face to face with _________. The eight grew closer and closer to each other and feelings began to emerge.

_______ grew furious when word was sent that each of his generals had been defeated. He then dispatched large multitudes of his followers and lackeys to fight the chosen. One by one his army’s soldiers were defeated leaving him on his own and defenseless save fro the skills he had on his own, which only grew as the darkness and evil spread further and further in all directions of the universe. There was still some time before the chosen reached him so he instead concentrated on spreading his dark influence, allowing his power to grow.

Now in this time throughout many known galaxies a goddess was worshiped. She was their sole protector it was prophesied that with the help of the chosen she would be summoned and would save them all from the darkness of ________, she was known as the Star of Hope.

Finally the day of the battle emerged and the chosen stood strong and courageous in the face of this eminent danger. Though _______ had increased his power 10-fold, the chosen matched him blow for blow, who the victor would be was unknown. The chosen had faith that the Star of Hope would appear when they had met the requirements to properly summon her.

The chosen with the abilities of one element gathered in a circle around the two with the abilities of all the elements. The two in the center stood back to back their arms extended above their heads, hands spread out. The other six joined hands channeling their powers through each other and toward the two in the center, the two in the center channeling the power toward the sky. They seemed to become one, this being the first requirement.

With their hearts and power all becoming one, a beam of light shoots up into the sky projected through the raised hands of the center two warriors. Each of them began speaking an incantation that only they knew, calling forth the Star of Hope, the second requirement. Nothing happened, they had performed the ritual with perfection. _________ began to laugh mockingly, he had won.

As he laughed a great blinding light came back down from the heavens bathing all of them in it. __________ began to cower in fear, he hadn’t won. The Star of Hope had not appeared, however, an amulet with strange markings appeared, the blinding light dissolved and the chosen saw the amulet. They hadn’t summoned their goddess but an object of hers had appeared in her place. ________ tried to run, to escape the fate he knew he had. The amulet began to glow, light blue in color, the light projected itself toward _________ as the light touched him, he was pulled into the light being sealed away into the amulet. For everyone knew evil could not be destroyed, if it could the world would become chaotic without proper balance. One could only simply maintain and put a damper on the evil in existence.

With _______ sealed away for all eternity, the chosen returned home bringing the amulet with them as proof of their success. The damage that had been caused by ________ and his army began to rapidly reverse everything returning to the way it had been.

A temple was built somewhere in the home world of the chosen wielders of all elements, Yarusagi, to hold the amulet safe. A large statue of the eight chosen was built outside this temple in commemoration of the work the chosen had done. The chosen had also come to live in this city. Thousands upon thousands of people from different worlds came to see the temple and the statue, meet their saviors, or to live there just for the sake of living amongst heroes.

Whether it be by fate, the gods, or some earthly form, the temple and statute were lost to the world. Many searched for it day in and day out but it had vanished, nowhere to be found. As times change so does truth, this piece of history became nothing but a fictional story meant to entertain. As such no one knows which race of people originally lived in this world, to know if the powers of the chosen were passed on generation to generation would those powers ever be needed again.

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 15, 2006 3:13 pm


Chapter 1: The Prophecy
There existed a small group of people who still remembered their true history, though many around them had forgotten; This group still believed in the prophecy that had yet to be fulfilled.

Plague, death, and chaos
throughout the world will reign
an ancient evil will awaken
bringing terror and fear in its wake

Generals of Fire and Water,
Earth and Air, Light and Dark
Causing their own terror and fear
on all words in their path

Warriors will be chosen to fight
dangers unknown and trials they will face
many battles they will see
and in the end they will triumph

All will be undone and peace restored
the Star of Hope will appear before all worlds
to vanquish the evil threatening existence
And the balance of power.


In days long past it was thought that the first battle with __________ was what this prophecy was talking about. But as the Star of hope had not appeared this simply wasn't so. One family out of all of those, who remembered, believed the strongest and would play a greater role in this prophecy than they knew.

~


“Hikari!” An older woman called from the kitchen of an older styled house. “Hikari! Get down here!”

“Coming! I'm coming, calm down!” the eighteen-year-old girl yelled back. She quickly ran down the stairs past the living room where she saw her grandmother telling her younger brothers, sisters and cousins the story of the chosen and the great evil.

“Not that story again” Hikari said rolling her eyes “when are you going to stop filling their heads with such nonsense?” Hikari asked as she tied her long blonde hair back preparing for the work she knew she would be doing in the kitchen.

“It’s not just a story! It’s our history, Hikari, and you know it!”Hikari’s grandmother replied angrily. The children stared back and forth between Hikari and their grandmother until Hikari noticed and made a face at them; they quickly turned their attention back to their grandmother.

“Whatever” Hikari said, rolling her eyes once more. She headed out of the room and toward the kitchen as her mother called for her again.
“What?” She said in an annoyed manner, as she entered the kitchen and saw her mother.

“I’d like you to run into town and pick up everything on this list” her mother said, handing a piece of paper and the money to buy the items, to her.

Hikari gave a look of disgust. “Why do I have to do it? Why can’t one of them do it?” Hikari said pointing back toward the living room.

“Because you’re the fastest, and I’m asking you to do it.” Her mother said staring at her with anger in her eyes. “Now get going, I need those things right away. “ Her mother said pointing to the door leading outside from the kitchen.

“Fine!” Hikari said snatching the list and the money from her mother’s hand as she headed toward the door slamming it shut behind her. “You’re the fastest, I’m asking you.” She said, mocking her mother and grumbling under her breath. “Blah, blah, blah.”

Hikari made her way down the driveway, and started heading toward town. Her family lived on the outskirts of the city, Yarusagi, on what used to be farmland. Everything had been covered by the last bits of forest still existing in the area or the ever expanding city. In some ways this was conveniant, it no longer took an hour to get into the city to go shopping; It now took roughly fifteen minutes. On the other hand it meant that forests were being destroyed and countless animals lost their homes. The advancement of technology had become more important than the environment in which it was infecting.

~


Hikari had begun to daydream, something she did quite often during her walks into the city. To her family she was a saucy brat who hated not getting her way, she was all that it was true, but she was so much more. The events that took place over the years that made her the way she was. Her father had been a strong believer in the Star of Hope; He had a goal to find the statue and the temple that had been built to prove that the story was really the history of not only this world but every world in the universe. The children her age made fun of her and her family because of what they believed, this was carried on from their parents who equally gossiped about her family. She had to pretend she didn’t believe in the story or the prophecy just to get them to leave her alone. She eventually after years of denying it convinced herself she didn’t believe in any of it. During this time her father traveled everywhere. He hoped to find some sort of clue to the location of the temple. Some of his trips were left empty handed, others filled with rumors and leads, all of which he followed through until he had met a dead end or stumbled on more leads to follow through.

Eventually one year her father became convinced he’d found the exact location of where the temple had been built and had sunk into the sea. Determined to find it he gathered all the men he could find that believed him and his information and they set out to find the temple. Months later the party returned, every one of them, except for her father. The party brought nothing but bad news. There had been a diving accident, one of her father’s oxygen tanks had hit a sharp rock, during the search, which made a hole in the tank and oxygen had been leaking out. It went unnoticed until it was too late. Those around him noticed something was wrong and they tried to get him to surface in time, but they had been so far down that nothing would have been able to save him.

They had returned empty handed once again. Other families took pity upon Hikari’s family. Most simply mocked and made fun of them for believing in such foolish things that only got her father killed. She hated it more than anything, but she couldn’t let anyone see her weakness. They’d only make even more fun of her and that was something she did not want.

Out of the corner of her eye Hikari saw a bright yellow beam come down from the sky and soon after she saw a figure come out of the woods, it snapped her out of her deep thoughts and daydreams. “What on earth?” She said making her way toward it. As she drew closer, she saw it was an elderly man staggering it looked like he was hurt.

“Sir? Are you okay?” She asked a look of fear and concern spreading across her face as she neared.

“Please, I need help. I need to find the Mitsuki family.” The old man said through pain he felt, though any wound he had was not visible.

“T-That’s my family.” Hikari said now confused. What did this man want with her family? “What do you want with them?” she asked helping him up, leading him toward her home.

“Please it is very important I must speak with all of you. There’s no time. We must hurry. “He said gathering himself up and quickly heading to the house she was leading him too.

“ Mom! Grandma!” Hikari called out several times, hoping they’d be able to hear her. After the third time both her mother and grandmother came to the front door. They saw her leading an older man toward the house. Her mother rushed out of the house to help Hikari. Hikari’s brothers, sisters and cousins gathered around the door trying to see what was going on only to be shooed away by their grandmother.

Hikari and her mother managed to get the man into the living room and sitting down on the couch.

“I’m sorry to barge in like this, my name is Raule, I come from a planet close by, and I’m afraid I bring grave news with me.” He began, Hikari tried to say something but he put his hand up to tell her to let him finish before any questions were asked. “Your family believes the supposed story and prophecy of old to be our actual history, am I correct?” he asked.

“Yes of course. “ Hikari’s mother replied. “My husband many years ago, before he passed away, was searching for the lost temple. “ Her mother said.

“Some of us believe in it . . . ” Hikari mumbled as she rolled her eyes. ‘Great another person who believes in the stupid prophecy.’ Hikari thought.

‘I can hear that young lady. Hikari is it. A lovely name.’ The man said projecting his thoughts into her mind.

“Whoa! Hey, who gave you permission to read my mind!”Hikari said jumping up in surprise, everyone turning toward her wondering what was going on.

“I come from a planet filled with Seers, I don’t have to have permission, if you think loud enough anyone could hear you. Your thoughts happen to be so loud we can hear them on our planet. That’s how I knew where to come with this news.” He said, looking around the room he saw the younger children in the room. “Perhaps it’s best to keep the young ones out of this. “ He said simply.

“Children you heard him, now go upstairs and mind your selves, I’ll call you when dinner’s ready. “ Hikari’s mother said. The children gave looks of disappointment for not being able to be a part of everything, but quickly made their way upstairs to their rooms, not wanting to get into trouble.

“Okay old man they’re gone spill. What’s going on? “ Hikari said only to be nudged by her mother for her rudeness.

“The prophecy” He said simply looking at the three of them with the utmost seriousness.

“Okay . . . what about it?” Hikari said rather annoyed from receiving an incomplete answer.

“It has begun.” He said, closing his eyes for a moment, as the room became shrouded in silence.
PostPosted: Thu Dec 21, 2006 3:34 pm


Reserved for Chapter 2: The Awakening

Kahara Michiyo

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