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Addiction

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Reese_Roper

PostPosted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 2:19 pm


Addiction

A need greater than want
A must greater than desire
An itch you have to scratch
An ever-burning fire

Never achieving pacification
An empty bottomless pit
The center of your attention
Around which your life must fit.


I just came up with this on the fly. Tell me what 'cha think. surprised
PostPosted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 4:10 pm


Nothing else matters
Not even I
The only one to promise
To stick by your side

I know that it’s hard
Please know I’m still here
When everyone vanishes
‘Cause you don’t hold them dear

I know you still care
That part’s still inside
It’s just your addiction
Has pushed it aside

When you want to come back
To the world as it is
Just give me a call
You know where I live


Yes, I have continued it.

Reese_Roper


Song of the Pheonix

PostPosted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 5:49 pm


I like it, though I like the second part better than the first.
PostPosted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 6:30 pm


Did you write this?
Because it seems awfully similar to the "Drug Poems" that circulated all through Myspace.

Mind you, not accusing you of anything, but I know I wasn't the only person to think that.
It's very good.

Xahmen
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KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 6:48 pm


myspace? *snigger*

I liked the first part. My ADD kicked in on the second.
PostPosted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 12:29 pm


Zahmen
Did you write this?
Because it seems awfully similar to the "Drug Poems" that circulated all through Myspace.

Mind you, not accusing you of anything, but I know I wasn't the only person to think that.
It's very good.


MySpace= burning_eyes If you take the hint. xd

All dislikes for MySpace aside, yes, this is my own work. I wrote it during a time when I had severe writer's block during an essay on the element aluminum, and I just decided to write more than my usual humerous poems. I also wrote another serious one called "Silence" but it's at school.

Reese_Roper

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