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 Posted: Tue Oct 24, 2006 2:07 pm
As time goes by
I will not say goodbye
Rather you still think of me today or tomorrow
I'll stay by your side
Please,don't let your heart cry
Don't think of your sorrows
Eventhough I'm gone for awhile
My love for you will always a trial
Rather to let you go
Or let your heart grow
But one day I'll know
Right now,my mind is in a deep sleep
For now,wait for me
*just curious what do you think this poem is about,everyone has their own point of view about poems* 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Oct 24, 2006 6:33 pm
nice rhyming, chica.
But please...subject/verb agreement. As time GOES by.
And the flow was a little off, but not by much.
Overall, nice job. (6^-^)6
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Posted: Wed Oct 25, 2006 1:18 pm
KirbyVictorious nice rhyming, chica. But please...subject/verb agreement. As time GOES by. And the flow was a little off, but not by much. Overall, nice job. (6^-^)6 ooopsie sweatdrop i forgot to put "es" thanks for reminding me. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Oct 25, 2006 6:16 pm
>.<
Hey, that's what the walking dictionary is for.
......By the way, it went that way (>0.o)>
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