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Gomenroia

PostPosted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 9:33 pm


Children fear the dark.
Were you afraid?
Did you cry?
Did your closet have a monster?

Masks scare people.
What's behind them?
The dark?
Do you know what yours is?

Hell scares people.
Is it the fire?
The loss of hope?
Do you know what Hell is?

Heaven scares people.
Heaven takes away the dark.
Heaven takes away the masks.
Heaven takes away the fear.

Where does the mask end?
Where did I go?
Am I still clean enough underneath it to be allowed entrance to perfection?

No.

I'm not clean enough.
I'm not pure enough.
I'm not good enough.

I've forgotten who I am.

Does the mask wear me?
Or do I wear it?
Is there a difference?

If you took off your mask
Would you survive?


If you shut all the lights off
Would you still be afraid?


Or is it the masks that fear?
Fear is the mindkiller
The only thing to fear is fear itself


Wise words.

What was their mask?
What did they fear?
PostPosted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 9:35 pm


And on this note... I may be gone a couple days.

Gotta get myself back under control.

I kinda lost my hold on myself tonight.

I might not be gone...

I might be back tomorrow.

But in case I'm not... this is my apology for my inactivity.

Gomenroia


KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Sat Oct 21, 2006 11:23 am


..........

nice poem.

You sound upset, chica. Problems?
PostPosted: Sat Oct 21, 2006 3:42 pm


KirbyVictorious
..........

nice poem.

You sound upset, chica. Problems?


Always...

but they are like an underground river... while I travel life they are sometimes farther from the surface than others.

Gomenroia


KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Sat Oct 21, 2006 3:53 pm


.......oh.

okay.

:/
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