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darknessandcheese

PostPosted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 11:25 am


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So I just downloaded oC (well, to be exact, I downloaded it on Friday) and I've been messing around with it this weekend. So far, though, this is one of my favorite pictures.
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I know it's pretty awful, but I'd love some constructive criticism, to help me improve. sweatdrop

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 12:16 pm


It's not awfull,
just a little small. xd

It looks very nice. Smooth lines, smooth coloring. I think the only thing I'd suggest is putting in a bit more detail work. Hair-like lines/highlights/lowlights/whatever your style in the hair, shadows on the face where her bangs cross it, maybe some nice wrinkles on the tie. Itty-bitty things like that.

It's very cute and appealing. : D

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