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 Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 5:25 pm
ART DUMP! black and white!    C+C please!
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Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 5:46 pm
I think the shading looks great :p. Work on your anatomy a little bit and they should be awesome xD
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Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 5:53 pm
I know I have real issues with anatomy. sweatdrop
Especially arms, legs, feet, and fingers... wait thats everything xd
Thanks~!
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Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 5:57 pm
Oooh, nice shading and folds. biggrin
I see a slight issue with the guy's arm in the second picture. I think the upper part of his arm is a tad bit too long. 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 6:01 pm
Yea, I can see that now.
Hrm....
Its supposed to be a baggy sleeve, maybe I made it too baggy.
So raise the elbow a bit?
Thanks for the critique~
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Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 6:03 pm
bishi_neko Yea, I can see that now.
Hrm....
Its supposed to be a baggy sleeve, maybe I made it too baggy.
So raise the elbow a bit?
Thanks for the critique~ Yeah, raising the elbow and making it look more... pointed (?) should do the trick.
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Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 6:11 pm
YAY!
Thanks for the advice! heart
and with that I shall say farewell!
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Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 6:30 pm
The first picture looks great! But the other two dont show for me. Big doomeh red x's. e-e;
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Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 9:03 pm
Very nice pictures, I really like the shading on all of them ^^
First pictures looks probably the best of the three, since I love the expression of her face as well as the hair design...actually I like how you did the hair on all of them XD And well, along with the tatoos it looks very nice ^^ ....one thing that seems to stick out for me though is the wrist and the left arm (how it seems bigger then it should be..).
Second one looks nice as well, and I think I now can see what you mean by having the shirt baggy. From that being said, the arm seems to be more preportional then it should be.
Every piece looks amazing, and would like to see more work ^^
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Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2006 1:47 pm
Thanks~ I'll probably have another art dump, eventually.
I do have issues with joints and bending in general, thanks for the advice~
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