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Posted: Tue May 21, 2019 12:58 pm
Asami 【b a s i c . i n f o】
*Username:strider rose
*Name:Asami
Nickname(s):butterfly
*Age (Please don't say Unknown):34 year old
Date of Birth: 25th of second seed
Height:5'6
Weight:125 pounds
*Gender:female
*Race:beastman ( feline)
*Kingdom:Itomori
Sexuality:straight
Military Position (If requested): 【a b o u t】Likes: - fish - people like her - rice dishes
Dislikes: - rain - people that hate cats
Quirks: she is an airhead at times and gets distracted Hobbies: going for walks , reading and being with friends
Goal(s): to someday have a mate *Personality: a flirt , friendly and has a good sense of humor *Bio (At least 8 sentences): Asami was raised in the Itomori kingdom her whole life and does not wish to travel outside of her kingdom . She likes to see change in things , but wont change herself . She is the last of her family as most have passed away , leaving her behind to start her life over . She loves to go watch the Koi in the stream moving about and tries to catch them but they are too fast . She lives alone in her hut and doesnt have very many friends .Her life has been spent training her martial arts and studying other subjects that interest her.She wants to be a part of things and hopes to be an active member of itomori kingdom . Asami is a little scared of her past and wants to change but dont know how without some help from others .She misses her family but does what she can to move on and forget what happened. 【b a t t l e . i n f o】*Strengths: - her heart for others - love for animals
*Weaknesses: - Love - sadness - weather changes
*Abilities: (ability 1)kung fu -Description-hand to hand combat
(ability 2) -Description【e x t r a】Theme:hemorrhage- fuel
Nickname(s):
Quote:" I can feel you there "
Extra: gaia_kittenstar
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Posted: Tue May 21, 2019 1:42 pm
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Posted: Tue May 21, 2019 2:18 pm
Hey there, I'm just going to point some stuff out for your profile okay?
• My crew and I have mentioned this to you a few times. But times are Medieval. The date being 1990 is modern and doesn't fit into our lore settings. We are when people are barely learning about technology.
• Your BIO is a little short there love, I'd ask that you would have to length it a bit.
• As a personal suggestion, Itomori is an Oriental inspired country. ( Asian ) and her name is very American.
Edit these things, but please keep the timeframe in mind, If it keeps being ignored, it will result in a ban,
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Posted: Tue May 21, 2019 2:29 pm
Angel Of Blood Moons Hey there, I'm just going to point some stuff out for your profile okay?
• My crew and I have mentioned this to you a few times. But times are Medieval. The date being 1990 is modern and doesn't fit into our lore settings. We are when people are barely learning about technology.
• Your BIO is a little short there love, I'd ask that you would have to length it a bit.
• As a personal suggestion, Itomori is an Oriental inspired country. ( Asian ) and her name is very American.
Edit these things, but please keep the timeframe in mind, If it keeps being ignored, it will result in a ban, I dont mean to forget stuff . I am trying to do it right but i get a little flustered at times and have to step aside from things and cool down is all . I changed her name and dont know what to put for her bday though ?
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Posted: Wed May 22, 2019 12:52 pm
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Posted: Wed May 22, 2019 1:00 pm
Heya! Just a couple things. Everything looks good except one of her abilities. I can't allow her "Premonitions" ability as it is. Directly seeing into the future, or knowing the outcomes of things, borders on Godmodding-- a big nono. She can keep the Premonitions IF it is limited to something similar to hazy visions or gut feelings (like what actual Premonitions actually are). You can either replace this ability or adjust it.
Thank you for your cooperation!
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Posted: Wed May 22, 2019 4:43 pm
Noizless Heya! Just a couple things. Everything looks good except one of her abilities. I can't allow her "Premonitions" ability as it is. Directly seeing into the future, or knowing the outcomes of things, borders on Godmodding-- a big nono. She can keep the Premonitions IF it is limited to something similar to hazy visions or gut feelings (like what actual Premonitions actually are). You can either replace this ability or adjust it.
Thank you for your cooperation! i dont know of any other abilities so i left it blank.... sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed May 22, 2019 10:22 pm
That's alright! The abilities are optional, so both don't need to be filled out. And with that I declare this profile 𝓐𝓹𝓹𝓻𝓸𝓿𝓮𝓭!
If you ever decide to add another ability, just quote one of the Crew and we'll let ya adjust her profile. ████
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