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PostPosted: Sun Aug 15, 2010 9:49 pm


Here is where you can come and post your writings. Have poetry or Haiku's to share? COME THEN! WHAT'CHA WAITING FOR!! biggrin

We want to read your stories or even song lyrics you came up with. We accept anything that involves writing!

Also, the same rules apply here as they do for the Drawing Topic forum.

If you are rude the consequences read:

1st: Warning
2nd: Banned from Guild a few days
3rd: Banned permanetly from the Guild.
 
PostPosted: Thu Sep 08, 2011 4:23 pm


I lie awake this sleepless night
Stars above burning bright
The enemies shadow falls on me
My voice fails, no scream

I lie awake this sleepless night
Across the sea with fright
All around voices I hear
Hush now, not a word

I lie awake this sleepless night
Will no one heed my plight
Tis cold beneath this weight
Silence, no one hears

I lie awake this sleepless night
A face I swoon at the sight
None shall know the love
The fear, and icy sting

I lie awake this sleepless night
Alas my lovers flight
Hark! He nears the place
Woe, it is far too late

I lie awake this sleepless night
Tears fall upon the stone in rite
Scrawled across in final words
"Where art thou, mine Hero?"

I lie awake this sleepless night
Stars above fading light
Heavy still I feel it now
Darkness surrounds, engulfs

I lie awake this sleepless night
Morning star breaks in light
Rising from the ground
Dew, a new day begun

I lie awake that sleepless night
Thoughts of you abound delight
Cast away the dreamers dust
Go forth and live, all in good fun



Can you figure out what this is talking about? Hm? wink  

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 10, 2011 7:59 am


I lie awake and dream of you
Tossing and turning because you aren't here
I reach for the sheets in which you slept
Wishing you were here to hold me

But you can't because you've left
To help those in our country
I pray you return safely
So I can cry tears of joy

Your children ask where you are
I say somewhere protecting us from harm
My friends watch the news that I can't bare to see
I do not watch

Thinking you might not return I cry
I feel a hand on my shoulder
Thinking it's someone telling me that you are gone
I do not turn to look or listen

I feel a tug on my shoulder and then I see your face
I leap into your arms and cry those tears of joy
Our kids ran out and hug your legs
As I kiss your lips softly
 
PostPosted: Sat Sep 10, 2011 8:06 am


Holly, I believe that is for Eve and Gabirel XD Love the poems girls!

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 11:22 am


thxs Kameko ^^
PostPosted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 11:29 am


It would work for them indeed. But that's not it. whee

I really like yours, Disturbed World. Tugs on the heart with the children involved.

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 6:16 pm


Thxs Holly and yours is really great too.^^ Oh yea, I put it on FaceBook and lots of ppl loved it, and want me to write more poems. :3  
PostPosted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 6:21 pm


((Here's another one ^^))

I kick up dust walking down my block

Hands in my pockets, hood up

I walk by your house and don't stop to say hi



You were my friend

Then you told those lies

Now we don't talk to each other anymore



You got new friends?

Well so do I

Oh, you thought I couldn't be without you?

Well look at me now



You can stay in your web of lies

While I have fun in my own world

So bye my ex-friend.





I know this has happened to many of my friends, and I hope this never happens to me.
 

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 6:24 pm


Tears Fall, Cry out.

Tears fall, do you see my pain?
A cry out, do you hear my sorrow?
In the shadows I hide,
not to be seen by the world,
Where am I to go?
What am I to do?
Pain echoes within my soul.
Tears fall, do you see my pain?
A cry out, do you hear my sorrow?
I am alone to feel no joy
I can only taste that of sadness
Where am I to go?
What am I to do?
Pain echoes within my soul.
Tears fall, do you see my pain?
A cry out, do you hear my sorrow?
Finally the end comes
My life of sorrow is over,
None has seen me weep,
none have hear my cries
I am alone, but,
Will you weep for my death?
Will mourn for my lost soul?
will you finally see my tears?
Will you finally hear my cry?
Or is it to late
And I walk the Earth as a shade
Forever trapped in my pain?
PostPosted: Thu Dec 06, 2012 7:25 pm


Hey,
This is a work in progress from part of a story I'm currently writing. Please feel free to critique as I'm hoping to learn. This is only an excerpt, many of you will recognize the character of Kora. And anyone who belonged to my first guild will recognize Kyle and Kree.




Through the broken window of the theatre the days first rays of light drifted in, highlighting the dank, dusty condition of the office. Kora peered out the window. Despite the fact that the fight was over, her nerves were shot. She couldn’t put down the feeling that they were about to be attacked. Never before had she felt so helpless, for the first time in her life she had important people to protect. For the first time she knew she would throw herself before a sword if it meant giving them only minutes more to breathe. Now she stood guard, bracing her hands into the filthy window sill, straining to keep her tired eyes open; because even now while they counted their dwindling numbers in relative safety, she could not allow evil to creep upon her friends.
A nudge at her hand, and a persistent whimper brought her attention towards her feet. Kree, with his intrusive golden eyes, looked into her own glazed and tired green ones. With a sudden burst of emotion Kora turned from her guard to sit on the floor. Wrapping her arms around her constant companion she began to sob hard, gripping his dark fur as if it was the only lifeline for miles. Kora couldn’t remember crying even as a young child. Her mother had often announced with pride that she had been a quite baby, only ever crying out for milk; even when she had become ill with a fever, she had remained silent. Ara herself declared it to be a sign of great strength. Remembering their proud faces, Kora thought of her own disdain. Perhaps even as a baby she had known that the women who surrounded her did not care for her tears. They did not hush her, or hold her lovingly. Even then, perhaps she had always known, that her tears were a waste. But now, clutching Kree, tears fell before her, soaking his warm body with her sorrow. In spite of those words, Kora did not feel weak for her sadness, as perhaps for the first time she had found true strength in her love.
Her time with Kree passed in a haze, whether she remained on the floor for a few hours or a few days was unknown. Sobs of sorrow came in waves, often dying for a time before flowing out again like the harbor tide. Kree never moved away from his master, often he bent to lick her face or nudge her consolingly, but he remained rooted to the floor until it was time for Kora to rise. Dawn became day, and the sounds of the bustling city pounded against the walls of the little theatre. Still, Kora and Kree remained in their sorrowful embrace. Only when the bustling sounds began to quiet with fading rays of the sun, a distinctive knock echoed through the room. Kora lifted her head and rose to the door, Kree creeping protectively behind her. Opening it tentatively, she didn’t bother to hide her tears, choosing to wear her sorrow upon her as a mark of her love for the people they lost.
“Kora, we need to see you on in the green room. We’re having a meeting.” Kyle’s voice wavered from exhaustion and mourning. He searched her face, as if trying to understand what was happening in front of his eyes. “Are you going to be alright?”
Kora laughed bitterly, “yes, what do you think. That I will become a broken mirror, unable to be put back together without revealing the damage. Of course I will be alright, Kyle, we are human.”
“We need you right now, the kids... The kids, they look up to you for protection.” He paused as though not sure how to explain himself without committing an offense. “You can’t fall apart- at this moment, we need you to be emotionally sane.”
Kora stared out at him, she felt as though she had been slapped in the face. “I’m not weak.” She hissed defensively before closing the door in his face, and turning her back to stare out at the darkening sky. “I’m not weak...” She murmured to herself, wrapping her arms protectively around her body.
“Kora. Kora? Please.” His voice sounded through the door, battered down and beaten.
“I’m coming, I’m simply... I’m coming.” Her heart ached with her losses. Only a moment ago, she cried for her love of the dead. Now she wiped the tears away for her love of the living. Opening the door once again, she saw that Kyle had already left. Her jaw clenched, had he thought she would selfishly choose to let loose her emotions when they called upon her? Stashing her frustrations in the back of her mind she walked along, not bothering to whistle for Kree, knowing full well that his intimidating black form followed loyally beside her.

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 06, 2012 7:34 pm


Lady,

That was very good. I enjoyed reading, so I can't imagine how much you are enjoying writing it. I didn't see a thing wrong with it. Very detailed and I felt like I was your character, Kora, I felt like I could be her, feel her emotions. It was amazing. (:
PostPosted: Sun Nov 22, 2015 9:08 pm


For Lyssa

Rescue Me
By Kelsey Burton


On the surface its a perfect world
Beneath my skin the truth does dwell
All the hurt, it still swirls
All this time I still can't say farewell

I'm stuck somewhere in between,
Who I am
and who I am supposed to be
Still- here I am, in this world
Clinging on to all my hopes
All my dreams have been hurled
Somewhere far, below the deep
Now its time I rescued me

Broken shards etch into my skin
Detailing all my past sins
Whispering, this background noise
Who I am supposed to be...

If only I was that perfect girl

I'm stuck somewhere in between,
Who I am
and who I am supposed to be
Still- here I am, in this world
Clinging on to all my hopes
All my dreams have been hurled
Somewhere far, below the deep
Now its time I rescued me

Delve into my thoughts
Into my mind
Into this twisted world of mine
Drink the poison
Lose yourself

You'll never be that perfect girl
You'll never be that perfect girl

I'm stuck somewhere in between,
Who I am
and who I am supposed to be
Still- here I am, in this world
Clinging on to all my hopes
All my dreams have been hurled
Somewhere far, below the deep
Now its time I rescued me

No its time you rescued me
Please someone rescue me

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 23, 2015 10:41 am


I know this is silly but when I heard the song "Hellfire" I knew that I had to make my adaption version of the song. I guess you can call it a fanfiction song. So, I hope you enjoy.

Jessierys’s Lament
Adaption from: Hellfire – “The Hunchback of Notre-Dame”
Character from: Vi-lon on Gaia Online by Kameko the Dark Mage
Character Created by: TeenTitans4Ever

Beata Dear Mother
You know I am a righteous woman
Of my virtue I am justly proud

Beata Dear Mother
You know I’m so much purer than
The common, vulgar, weak, licentious crowd
Then tell me, Dear Mother
Why I see him dancing there
Why his blood rose eyes still scorch my soul

Then, I see HER
The sun caught in THAT raven hair
The smile upon his face at her arrival
Is blazing in me out of control

Like fire
Hellfire
This fire in my skin
This burning desire
Is turning me to sin

It’s not my fault
I’m not to blame
It’s that harlot
The witch who sent this flame

It’s not my fault
If in God’s plan
He made the devil so much
Stronger than a man

Protect me, Dear Mother
Don’t let this siren cast her spell
Don’t let their passion sear my flesh and bone
Destroy Siena
And let her taste the fires of Hell
As long Ulrik is mine and mine alone

Hellfire
Dark fire
Now harlot, it’s your turn
Ulrik, choose me or
Her pyre
Be mine or you will burn

God have mercy on him
Father, have mercy on me
But he will be mine
Or they will both BURN!
PostPosted: Mon Nov 30, 2015 8:08 pm


Mother (Lyssa's Waltz)
Kelsey Burton


Mother. Oh Mother.
I’ve given you my all
Mother, my mother.
You’ve made me feel so small

Breaking, needing
Openly bleeding
I gave you what you asked
Your dark throne
To sit upon
Still, I’m here, left alone
If you love me so,
Let me go

Bound to your black will
Mother dear, you know best
For you I make the many kills
Mother please, its time you see
You promised me, I would be free

Breaking, needing
Openly bleeding
I gave you what you asked
Your dark throne
To sit upon
Still, I’m here, left alone
If you love me so,
Let me go

You promised me
You promised me
I realize you’ve lied
For your dark deeds
I will avenge
And take from you your life…

Breaking, needing
Openly bleeding
I gave you what you asked
Your dark throne
To sit upon
Still, I’m here, left alone
If you love me so,
Let me go

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