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is the perspectoive off?

Drowningwaters

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Posted: Sat May 23, 2009 11:07 pm

I dunno...something about this continues to bother me...fixed it like 10 times, still not happy. any advice?

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also...while I'm here:

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something about her bugs me..and no, it's not the face. very happy with the face. something with the body. There's this ffxi meme going around between about 70 people, so want my person to be near perfect when the file gets to me

Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 3:49 pm

-: Lovely image, there.

The perspective is a little off. I'm not sure how to explain it but I would suggest making basic shapes first then adding details. Starting with square, triangle, cone and sphere.

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I can't really find any thing major but her arm is a little short. The pose makes her look like she's falling which makes it a little awkward. To me, anyway. I placed her right foot to the ground and moved the other a little bit closer. I'm not sure if that help anything but I tried.

Second

I hope that helped you even a little. Feel free to ask any questions. :-

Shoroie

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Drowningwaters

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Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 11:02 pm

worked on the first one today, think I'm getting closer...
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Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 11:43 am

-: The picture is looking great but the pillar, I don't know what to call it, looks awkward to me. Seems to be leading a little further, almost like it could fall down. However, it maybe just me. :-

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starynite50

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Posted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 8:57 pm

[ So Let the Flames Begin ]

In the first one .... It`s getting too small too fast , therefor the spaces between the boxes look off O_o

I suggest adding more boxes ?

The second one you did looks better , but some parts are clearer than others , and it`s not from focus point , so it throws people off when they look at it .

With the girl ... her hand is a little awkward , as her right breast .

I`m not redlining it because I`m not on my computer O-o so I`m pretty lost here and don`t want to save the picture D;

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