Dr. Valentine
Page Boy
I think the problem with your hairiness is that it seems to be in conflict with the style you're using, which is characterized by simpler forms and a lack of detail...
That is true.
I'm sort of tired of the extremely low-def stuff though. I'm trying to incorporate scribbliness and hatching and lines and s**t. I mean, I know that hair can be accomplished with a well-placed highlight and all, but ... well I don't wanna do that. I don't really know why.
Maybe the heavy line-age breaks it up too much. I shall try hatching/scribbling on some stuff with little/no outline and see how that works out.
Yeah finer lines and also more definition of detail and components in general. Like, if you're going to draw hairs, you should be also drawing other little things to. I guess.
Although, texture can be simplified as well. On the bunny image for example, you used all smooth lines on parts that would be furry, but you could have broken the shape here and there with jagged lines to show tufts of fur sticking out.
Like this sig art i was given:

The artist is still using simplified shapes and bold lines, but still shows texture in the outline of the hair.
You might also look at VG cats, because the artists draws furry chracters in a super simple chibi type style.