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 Posted: Thu Nov 13, 2008 1:57 am
The Unseen Forrest is a creation of mine. I made it up as i was Rping with some friends. The whole idea is that it is an untouchable Forrest with unfathomable beauty, because of a very bloody and ancient war. So the Forrest is still nurtured by the blood of those that died, and the powerful magics that still lingered. XD
anyways, I hope you all like it. If i misspelled anything, lemme know.
In the Unseen,
Forest of Dreams,
I lie there,
In the shade.
A small stream flows,
to where the wind blows,
A cool breeze,
Warms my heart.
A song-bird sings,
and though my ears ring,
It's a sweet, sweet,
Lullaby.
In Natures cradle,
I'm just an old shell,
She claims me,
As her child.
Rapture entwined,
Swirling in mind,
Such God-like
Harmony.
It's such a God-like
Harmony.
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Posted: Thu Nov 13, 2008 9:33 am
Well, let's get the incorrectly spelled words out of the way.
Forrest = Forest
Lye = Lie
I think this is the best thing I've seen out of you, writing wise. Loved it, especially since I know what the Unseen Forest is from. I always get this picture of you napping in a clearing in the forest under the shade of some ancient oak with the sun beating down on the forest.
Love it, love it, love it. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2008 5:54 am
thanks, kurai, for the effort. razz
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