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Writing Arena

Do you like poetry??? Come on I know ya do!!!

HECK YESSS!!!!

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Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 10:17 am

Cold Hearts and Warm Bodies

Please take a look, vote if you like it, tell me what you think, ect ect..

Posted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 10:37 pm

I like the imagery, but it needs more 'flow' to it

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Posted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 8:49 am

to hang and quarter a heart

another arena.

more flow? can you explain better? maybe some pointers?
im always up for constructive critique.