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"Flowers"

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Cyodie

PostPosted: Mon Oct 06, 2008 3:39 am


Wrote this at work, kinda felt like it... uh, sorry about any spelling mistakes... any help would be, well... helpful. >.> also, i read into this shortly after reading it, it can be taken multiple ways.XD

"Flowers"


once upon an open feild,
rising from The cold earth,
Flowers of dispair,
Rising valiantly,
in A desolate plain,
wheren thrives decedence,
upholding a certian justice,
a certain Stubborness,
Against a barren landscape,
that allows no Difference.


This Myriad Of Flowers,
Standing Vigilantly,
littering the ground,
With raw beauty.
subetly hinting,
at a Time when this land,
still recongnized its former glory.
their sielent cries,
almost Painting,
Their Defiant Nature.

And yet,
These Flowers too,
also Die,
and With them,
so does The Beauty,
they once Held Inside,
their anguished outcries,
could make even the hardest stone,
weep in pity,
until the beauty rises,
once again.



Also, there is another line in each, only the capitalized words.
PostPosted: Mon Oct 06, 2008 2:58 pm


"The Flowers Rising A Stubborness Against Difference

This Myriad Of Flowers, Standing Vigilantly, With Time Painting Their Defiant Nature.

And These Flowers Die With The Beauty Held Inside"

It's almost like a summary of the part it came out of.

rinalla


Cyodie

PostPosted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 5:00 am


Heh, i know, XD

thanks for the post. XP
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