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Here is a part of a history I'm doing,(This is the first time I write a history):

"This story starts in the city of Kratdina"
*In the scene there is a boy with two guns and 5 dead corpses around him*
-What are you doing here-said the boy.
*Then appeared a man who said*
-Why have you killed your partners-
Now the boy said-Those wheren't my partners anymore-
Man-They called you Samael,even when they had beg for mercy you killed them,and you only used one of your guns,you're a profesional,but that isn't your real name,your real name is Frend Carger,and I'm here to take you with my group-
Frend-You're their new dog,aren't you,what name did they put to you.-
Man-They call me Azza-
Frend-Another of the Fallen Angels,I'm not going to return there-
Azza-You finished with the Moon Wolves,and the reason is...maybe,revenge,or maybe protect something,or I would say someone.-
Frend-I killed them because I can,now returning to what we were talking,I'm not going to return with your group,you are all only murders who say are making justice,I want to kill you all-
Azza-Then try with me-
Frend-I never fail-
*Then Frend use his gun and shot to Azza,Azza jump to a building,then say*
Azza-You are the true Samael,now I have seen why they call you with the name of the angel of death,even with my speed you had shot fast to my knee,I go now,but I will return for you,remember me,because I'm the one called Azza,fallen angel once of justice and the moon reaper,you should never had mercy to me,but as you said I have seen you never fail,my knee is bleeding so I must go,Frend of the family Carger,I know your weakness,and you know mine,we will see one more time-
Frend-So you know about Marna,now you know why I killed them,they where going to make her one of the group,and use her,she would get hurt,and I noticed when she where useless to them,they where going to kill her,get away from her if you want to live-
*Then Azza disapeared,and Frend gone out of there*
"The next day in a house very old and with empty rooms"
*Frend's voice can be heard,talking to a girl*
Frend-You look so happy today,can I ask why?-
Girl-It's because I'll work with you soon-
Frend-Why do you want to work with me?,you don't even know with who I'm working,and you know my work-
Girl-I know,and I'm worried about you-
Frend-Marna,you don't need to worry,I don't want you to get hurt-
Marna-But you said someday when I get more experienced I would work with you,and I think it's time-
Frend-Do you have seen the news?
Marna-No,why do you ask?
Frend-There is a group of people murdered that was found,my work was with them,so I can't work anymore with them-
Marna-Sorry,I didn't know...-
Frend-You don't need to apologize,just forget it,I will find another job and that is all,now don't worry anymore about this and show me your smile-
Marna-Okay,but I keep wanting to work with you-
Frend-Then I need to get another tipe of job to don't get you in danger-
Marna-Just don't get yourself in any problem-
Frend-I promise you I won't-
*Then the two of them keeped talking for a long time*
"That night in the J-Inc. appeared a figure"
TV-The J-Inc. was stoled,this announcement invites everyone to tell what you know,the stoled piece was the general disc that control all the machinery,if you return it a prize will be given-
Frend-I didn't though that place would be stoled,it must be a profesional,I will get that money-
*Then the TV started to malfunction and someone started to talk*
Guy's voice at TV-Fool the one who attemp to come to find me and defeat me,you can't go against the power of Turbo Jolt,even if you know where I'm,you won't get this disc,if you believe you are worty of me,go to the city dump,the one who find me first will die first-

So now I want to see comments,I have done two draws of Frend(Samael),and one of Azza(Didn't discovered his real name in the history)I need to work in the draws,but here you will see the idea I have.

Samael

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y261/DarkLloyd/My Draws/Samael.jpg

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y261/DarkLloyd/My Draws/Samael-1.jpg

Azza

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y261/DarkLloyd/My Draws/TheMoonReaper.gif

Marna

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y261/DarkLloyd/My Draws/MarnaPro.jpg

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y261/DarkLloyd/My Draws/Marna.jpg

No one had even vote gonk