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Kurai_kotori

PostPosted: Sat May 03, 2008 7:26 pm


Newest peice, random muse. Don't ask, just appreciate....and comment. Loves me some comments....

Oh yeah, this is a song, so, hum to yourself.


Your Rock

Well I will stand by you when you're down,
I will show you all the sea.
I can't stand the contradiction,
as all the waves wash over me.
And I will be a rock forever,
cause I am too damn cold to please.
Feel the heartbeat from your bedside,
as all the waves wash over me.

Changing lanes when driving too fast,
bein' jealous till you're green.
Paying some five dollar hooker,
so you can't get one up on me.
It's not a message I like sending,
it gets mixed up too easily,
but I love how you watch forever
whle the waves wash over me.

And I, I will be your rock forever.
And I will never tell you "never".
Cause it's too hard to articulate
all the words that swirl within my head,
but I will be your own forever,
until we've seen the day we're dead.

You never fall in love for business,
the pleasure's lost too easily.
An hour for a hundred dollars,
why don't you just lay down by me?
I feel I'm slowly losing meaning,
and the words will never be,
what I wished in the beginning,
just let the waves wash over me.

And I, I will be your rock forever.
And I will never tell you "never"
Cause it's too hard to articulate
all the words that swirl within my head,
but I will be your own forever,
until we've seen the day we're dead.

I know it's hard to comprehend now,
but just wait and you will see,
what it is that I have come for.
Wont you please just answer me?
I don't mean to irritate you,
I just wanted you to see
How much love that I have for you,
don't let the waves erode me.

And I, I will be your rock forever,
And I will never tell you "never"
cause it's too hard to articulate
all the words that swirl within my head,
but I will be your own forever,
until we've seent he day we're dead.
PostPosted: Sat May 03, 2008 9:50 pm


First four lines and I already decided that this is depressing.

Sorry.

KirbyVictorious


Kurai_kotori

PostPosted: Sun May 04, 2008 12:09 pm


No problem. I felt the same thing when I was writing it. Didn't turn out quite the way I wanted, but with some things you just have no control.
PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 7:43 am


I like it.... Can I set it to music on Fimale? Please???? PLEASE?!?!?!?!

rinalla


Cyodie

PostPosted: Sun May 11, 2008 5:14 pm


kuri says ok.
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