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 Posted: Fri May 02, 2008 8:56 pm
This is one of two newest works. Take it how you will.
Black the Rose
Black the Rose
and Red the tongue,
slay the old
and bed the young.
Split her lips,
thrust with might.
It's in her hips,
in her delight.
Pink the Rose
and Wet the tongue
damn the old
and save the young.
Her arms are spread
so for today
taste her neck,
be on your way.
White the Rose
and quick the tongue.
Insult the old
and slay the young.
Take each angle,
push with skill.
She'll be so high
she'll nay fear Hell!
Red the Rose
and quick the tongue
that waits on Lust
when day is done.
Her mouth is fierce,
her moans resplendent.
It's on your "Love"
she's now dependent.
Black the Rose
and sharp the tongue.
Deny the old,
seduce the young.
Push mouth to lips
while more lips sigh.
"The taste of Lust
makes all me High!"
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Posted: Fri May 02, 2008 10:48 pm
Both new poems reminded me of my new story. And made me sad.
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Posted: Sat May 03, 2008 6:45 pm
The one with the prostitute you mean? Yeah, I read that. It really got me concerned about what's gonna happen to her and david next. Sad sad story.
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Posted: Sat May 03, 2008 9:49 pm
crying
the sad part is that it has a happy ending.
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Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 6:09 pm
that was really good and the rhyme scheme was good
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Posted: Wed Jun 04, 2008 4:41 pm
Two words: EPIC WIN. heart Meow, this made me happy inside.
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Posted: Sat Jul 12, 2008 8:13 am
wow i like it well structured and a great idea
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Posted: Sat Jul 12, 2008 8:36 am
Got to love extremely sexual poems.
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Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 3:32 pm
I enjoyed reading this.
It flowed very well.
Kudos!
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