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PostPosted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 1:44 am


Yeah! This is my first fanfic story and I’m going to do one of my favorite pairs ever!


CHAPTER 1

It seemed that all the new freshmen back from Naruto's child hood were sitting at one table. Choji, Sasuke, Sakura, Ino, Hinata, Shino, and Kiba. Even the three sophomores: Neji, Ten-Ten, and Rock Lee (a.k.a Bushy Brow) Yep everybody was there... except for one brunette boy.

"Oh you stupid, gone missing once again. Probably on the roof staring at clouds. CLOUDS; of all things." Naruto mumbled to himself rising quietly from the table. Hoping not to be seen leaving just to find Shikamaru.

Naruto didn't make it that far before he heard the voice that could only be the loudest girl in school, Ino yelling from behind him: "Where you going off to Naruto?"

"Just let him go Ino, no need to question him. Why don't we talk about Friday?" Naruto silently thanked god for Kiba as he snuck through the lunch doors to the deserted hallways. Naruto kept walking till he reached the school stairwell that led to the roof.

When Naruto reached the top he saw exactly what he expected, there was Shikamaru lying flat out on the flat grainy rooftop. Naruto walked over to where Shikamaru who was, as he realized, asleep. Well of course Naruto would have to come up with a way to wake him up now wouldn't he? Naruto went over and sat down right on Shikamrus chest and leaned forward until his face was over Shikamarus; and as hid eyes flitted open Naruto yelled in his face "BOO"

Shikamaru woke up unsurprised. "How troublesome Naruto” Shikamaru sat up with Naruto still on his lap. "Yes, Naruto how troublesome."

Naruto seemed to remember all of a sudden "Shikamaru are you coming to the party Friday?""Of course, as long as you'll be there?" Than it was a definite yes. "Good!" Naruto yelled and hugged Shikamarus neck. That’s when Shikamaru finally pushed Naruto off of his lap.

"Don't push it Naruto” When Shikamaru saw Naruto giving him the big blue puppy dog eyes. "Ughhh, how troublesome." Was all could think of. Shikamaru scooped him into his arms and let Naruto hug his neck however much he wanted at the moment. Shikamaru could smell Naruto unique aroma of ramen, dog, and bleach (trying to clean his house again…maybe). Shikamaru enjoyed this smell and loved to inhale it everyday, which would lead to the main reason he liked to hang out on the roof. Next to watching the clouds and sleeping of course. (Tee-hee)

Shikamaru stood up and made Naruto stand up in front of him and looked into his eye as seriously as Naruto seemed to take him at the moment. "Naruto, will you go to a party with me on Friday?"

Naruto gave him a playful puzzled look and put his finger up to his lip as if in deep thought as he walked around him playfully scrutinizing him.

"Hmmm, that depends. Would you consider it a date?"
"Depends on whether you want to call it a date."
"Would you walk me home?"
"Depends on whether my harpie mother would let me."
"Would you tell everyone else?"
~Silence~
"Probably not right away, but if it came to that."
"Ok then....I will be your date."
With that Naruto hugged Shikamaru around the neck. When Naruto checked his watch it was at least 45 minutes into their next class. "Oh Crap” Naruto yelled as he showed Shikamaru the time.

"No, no, no, no, no!" Both of them wailed simultaneously as they ran down the stair-well to Kakashi-sensei's History class. All the student's heads turned as the door slammed open and Shikamaru and Naruto both rushed in flustered and, mainly Naruto, very happy looking and sat down immediately. (No that’s not suspicious at all. Hint, hint.)

"Well your both late which will equal to a detention tomorrow and now you get to stand up in front of the class and tell us what you were doing for 45 minutes." Shikamaru always being the calm one walked up to the front of the class a shaky and red-faced Naruto right behind him. Then he announced loud and clear "We were on the roof watching the clouds." And that was it. All Naruto did was nod his head and they both took there seats again. Naruto smirked happily with no embarrassment. When he was seated again Naruto tore a piece of paper from his work book and scribbled quickly ‘are you going to pick me up?’ and passed it to Shikamaru.

Naruto waited patiently and when he got it back it read
‘Of course, that’s what dates are supposed to do. I’ll drop by at 6:00 since were supposed to be there at 6:15 anyway.’
Good the date has been set, thought Naruto ready for the next day to pass quickly.

After School had let out Shikamaru and Naruto stood in front of the gate waiting for their friend, Kiba to join them like he usually ended up doing. Today they saw him walking towards the front gate with Hinata by his side and everybody else from lunch gathered around him. Naruto clapped his hands giddily and smiled from ear to ear, “Goody, Kiba has gotten everyone to join us today.” Shikamaru only gave a low groan and Naruto elbowed him in gut which produced another low groan. When everybody caught up they immediately started off towards the arcade.

When everybody reached the arcade they all spread out instantly, Naruto playing a racing game with Shikamaru; Sakura went to go play Dance Dance Revolution with Ino; Rock Lee was playing a shooting game with Ten-Ten; Choji was playing digital poker by himself with Shino looking over his shoulder; Kiba and Hinata were off playing air hokey; and Neji and Sasuke stood off to the side just watching everyone play, Sasuke looking a little irritated.

Everyone slowly disappeared from the arcade being picked up by siblings; parents; and even aunts or uncles. Shikamaru; Naruto; and Choji were eventually the only three left in the arcade and it was another hour before the arcade closed up. While Naruto was watching Shikamaru take his turn in Pool he saw Chojis Mom standing near the door waving Choji over to go home. After Choji left the manager came out from behind the counter and said: “Ok were going to close a little early tonight kids…so get out.” Naruto put everything up and finished cleaning up their game and pulled Shikamaru out of the arcade behind him. Naruto handed him his phone and sighed heavily as Shikamaru waited for his Mom to pick up the phone.

When she picked up:
“Hey mom…”
~silence~
“Yeah mom I almost forgot to call, I’ve been with my friends all night.”
~silence~
“Uh, yeah, I’m going to be staying at Naruto’s apartment tonight.”
~silence~
“Of course, with Kiba.”
-Click-
“Oooo-k so I had no idea Kiba was sleeping over tonight. I’ll race you to my car though…” Naruto was already running towards his car, while Shikamaru silently jogged behind him, Naruto jumped into the front seat and locking the doors right as Shikamaru reached the passenger side. Then Shikamaru laughed and held up the keys to the car. Naruto checked himself and realized Shikamaru must have stolen them from him. Naruto scowled at him but laughed anyway as Shikamaru unlocked the car and stepped in.

The door of Naruto’s apartment swung open and Shikamaru stepped in with Naruto half asleep on his back. “I’m surprised you didn’t kill us half asleep at the wheel, how troublesome.” Shikamaru mumbled to him as he set him down on his bed. “Would you like anything Naruto?” Naruto just gave a weak sound that might have been a sure. Shikamaru came back with a glass of milk and some hot ramen. Naruto suddenly sat up and took the ramen and stuffed it down. “Knew you’d take that well” Shikamaru told him as the glass of milk quickly disappeared.

“Ahhhh, now that i’m awake what do you want to do? Watch a movie, play a game, or maybe just lay around until one of us falls asleep?” Naruto questioned now fully awake as he fidgeted with his pillow. (He had never had Shikamaru in his home alone before. Of course Shikamaru had been over many times before but always with another friend.) They were barely ever alone. Shikamaru just shrugged before saying “Whatever you choose sounds good enough for me.” Naruto threw his pillow at Shikamaru before getting up and going over to flip through his DVD’s. “Ok I suggest that we watch….either the Princess diaries or Blade.” Shikamaru shrugged something Naruto knew too well, which meant ‘I don’t care, surprise me.’ Naruto sent him a fake glare and stuck in the movie Princess Diaries half to piss him off and half because he actually liked the movie. Naruto stood up and turned around to see Shikamaru had already found a comfy spot on the couch and had his head laid back his arms spread out across the couch and his legs open wide with his eyes already closed. “So I already know who’s going to fall asleep first” Naruto said as he sat indian style next to him.

Shikamaru opened his eyes “Mmmmm, bet I can still stay up longer than you, crack baby.” Shikamaru declared. He took Naruto into his lap and rested his head in his yellow spiky hair. As the movie started Shikamaru smirked and reached for Naruto’s hands with his. “Oh Naruto this movie is soooo scary!” Shikamaru said sarcastically. Naruto punched his knee but laughed still. When Naruto stood up Shikamaru gave him a questioning look and watched Naruto make his way to the bathroom. Shikamaru heard the door close and a fan come on in the bathroom. Minutes later when Shikamaru was just getting curious out came Naruto…In a dress?

Shikamaru gasped “Oh. My. Good God.” Naruto heard this and turned around to go back in the bathroom but Shikamaru stood up quickly and said “No; no; no; it looks cute on you.” Naruto slowly backed out of the bathroom and walked towards the living room and stopped in the doorway. “Really? I bought it a few days ago.” Shikamaru kind of stared for a minute. Naruto, who is in fact is a boy, was wearing a dress. It was a loose dress on him but hey nothing is perfect. The dress had a V neck and was about mid-point around his neck. The dress went down to his knees and in the middle was a big black bow tied in the front the entire dress was orange of course, Naruto’s favorite color. Naruto just stood in the doorway shifting from foot to foot his face red.
~silence~
Shikamaru walked up to Naruto still a little surprised at what he was wearing. (At least Naruto shaved his legs too.) Shikamaru gathered Naruto in his arms hugging him. “Of course you look cute. You’ve always looked cute. Would you like to finish the movie in the dress though?” Naruto nodded, he really did like wearing it. When they both went to the couch Shikamaru sat down and Naruto stretched across the couch his head in Shikamaru’s lap, and closed his eyes.

Shikamaru really did like the way Naruto looked in the dress. He thought he looked even cuter as he slept his mouth slightly open a small blush still showing on his face. Shikamaru bent his face down and, aware Naruto was asleep, kissed him lightly on the lips.

“Good night my sleeping beauty.”

Shikamaru leaned his head back and rested his eyes not noticing Naruto smiling in his sleep.


(I am going to be creating many continuations of this whenever I possibly can so try and check this out as often as possible and post comments, I don’t mind. Yeah ShikaNaru. If you want me to write about other pairings I can for you. You can also leave short storys for me to read. Try and keep it…well… short….) <3<3 Gummy-Bear
PostPosted: Sat Dec 22, 2007 12:12 pm


CHAPTER 2

Naruto woke up groggily and sat up wiping his eyes. When Naruto looked around and saw no Shikamaru he first thought that he had imagined all of yesterday. “Noooo, now I’m going insane. Not good for my health.” He mumbled. Then Naruto looked and saw he was still wearing the dress. “Ok so last night really did happen?” Naruto looked around and still saw no Shikamaru. Naruto smelt cooking eggs coming from the kitchen and said a mini prayer and walked into the kitchen. “Oh, Lee. It’s just you. Do you know where Shikamaru is?” It wasn’t surprising seeing Lee in his kitchen making breakfast yet again. “Of course. He’s in your bed, do you mind going and waking him up. I don’t want him missing breakfast.”

Naruto quietly crept to his bedroom and just as Lee said; there was Shikamaru sprawled across the bed snoring like a chainsaw. No need to creep, when Shikamaru was sleeping like that he was out cold. Naruto crawled next to him and put his hand on his stomach knowing Shikamaru’s one ticklish spot. Right in the belly-button area. Naruto ran his fingers down his stomach and lightly tickled him and a large smile ran across Shikamaru’s face and his eyes opened and he pushed Naruto off the bed. When Naruto fell off he pulled on Shikamaru’s arms and brought Shikamaru with him to the floor. While they wrestled on the floor, Shikamaru on top of Naruto and Naruto trying to kick him in his balls, they heard a loud “AHEM” that came from a chuckling Lee who stood in the doorway.

“How long had you been standing there Lee?” Naruto asked embarrassment edged his voice.
“Not long. Just long enough to see you both fall to the floor and playing around.” Replied Lee
“Oh, so like for the whole thing.” Naruto giggled.
“Pretty much.” Lee replied truthfully.
“So who is hosting the party anyway Lee?” Shikamaru questioned
“Oh just Ino and Sakura, but if you have any questions I know the answer.”
“Who’s house, and can I invite some of my friends.”
“Ino’s house who else’s. Maybe you’ll have to ask Ino today. Oh, and Naruto do you plan on wearing that dress tomorrow night? You look cute in it.”
“NO” was all Lee got before Naruto ran off to change.
“What’s up with you two? I mean Naruto put on a dress for you. There’s got to be something going on.” Lee knew he wouldn’t be able to get anything out of Naruto but Shikamaru was a little easier to pry open.
“Mmmm, well Naruto is kind of my…uh… can I trust you?” Lee nodded his head ferociously.
“Well Naruto is my…boyfriend. Ok it’s out now don’t tell anybody yet, I’m going to wait till tomorrow to tell everybody at the party. Ok?”
“Sure anything Shikamaru.” Lee was very truthful and didn’t plan on going back on this. He actually couldn’t wait to see everybody’s face at the party. Naruto came out of the bathroom with a black t-shirt with an orange swirl in the middle and an orange sweater with A. EAGLE imprinted in white on the front. He wore just regular blue jeans with a chain hanging down and connected to his back pocket. He wore a pair of simple tennis shoes with this and a purple and black checked hat which covered most of his bright yellow spiky hair. All completed with a black dog collar choker. “Oh great now I have to go change, I feel like these pajamas are messing you up. Please don’t let me cramp your style.” He said sarcastically. While Shikamaru went off to go get changed Naruto looked at what Lee was wearing.

Lee had on a green fleece jacket over a brown shirt with pandas on it, Lee loves pandas. (?)He also had on a pair of black baggy jeans and a pair of green converse. Lee’s hair had changed over the years and it was shorter and choppier. Lee had also had his eyebrows trimmed a bit, but they still looked; well bushy.
“Lee have you ever gone a day without wearing green?” asked Naruto.
“Of course not, have you ever gone a day without wearing orange?” Naruto just stuck out his tongue and looked up when Shikamaru stepped out of the bathroom wearing a baby blue t-shirt with a black ‘My Chemical Romance’ fleece over it and a pair of ripped blue jeans with a pair of black and red checked vans. He also wore a dragon necklace with the dragon gripping a blue diamond in the middle. Of course his hair was still in the traditional ponytail.

“Cool. Is everybody ready to go yet? Were going to be late for class.” Naruto pointed out tapping his wristwatch impatiently. As they walked to school Lee leading Naruto and Shikamaru walking behind chatting. Shikamaru came to Naruto’s ear and whispered “Lee knows, but he promised he wouldn’t tell so don’t worry.”
“What do you mean he knows” Naruto whispered back.
“He questioned me this morning, so I told him.”
~silence~
“Fine just don’t tell anyone else yet. We don’t want people making crazy assumptions seeing that you stayed at my house last night.”
They walked the rest of the way to school talking about things they would have normally. Also pondering what Lee might do.

When Lunch time came around everyone met in the spot they always ate at. Under the biggest oak tree on the entire campus. Hinata was talking to Ten-Ten about Kakashi-sensei; Kiba was trying to talk to Shino; Lee was trying to cheer up Neji; Ino, Sakura, and Choji were all arguing about food; and Naruto and Sasuke were fighting, Shikamaru restraining from punching Sasuke.
“So dog are you lost? Where’s your owner.” Sasuke sneered at them.
“What the hell is your problem Sasuke? Just trying to pick fight with everybody!” Shikamaru interceded.
“Even what if I do have an owner?” Naruto yelled
“What kind of girl would go out with you? Or maybe it isn’t a girl at all!” Sasuke lashed back.
“None of your damn business!” Naruto got up and stomped away.
“You stupid ********, why don’t you try leaving some people alone.” Shikamaru yelled back as he stood up and followed Naruto. While Shikamaru walked away Ino though she hear him say “how troublesome”

Everyone glared at Sasuke in either disappointment; dislike; or distaste. After lunch everybody went back to class a little disheveled and, somehow Shikamaru got Naruto calmed down and back to class. After School Shikamaru and Naruto waited by the front gate for Kiba like usual. When Kiba came he was alone. After Kiba had left down the opposite street to get to his house and Shikamaru was already in his home Naruto walked down the street and looked up to see his home not far away. Naruto checked to see he was alone; when he was sure he sang:

For what you did to me
I want to do to you
You get what everyone else gets
You get a lifetime

Naruto played an imaginary guitar

Do you remember back when we met
You told me this get harder
Well it did
Been holding on forever
Promise me that when I’m gone
You’ll kill my enemies
The damnist truth inflicted
Temporary wounds
Coming back from the dead
Would I take you home with me?
Well I’m taking back the life you stole
We never got that far
This is everything all through the night
Bright lights won’t kill me now
Won’t tell me how
Just you and I your starry eyes with me

Hip, Hip- Hurray for me
You took to me
But would you kill me in my sleep
Be still like the dead
I with every will avenge my ghost
Breath I take
Well I’m coming back from the dead
Will I take you home with me?
Well I’m taking back the life you stole


Naruto stopped in front of his door and sang the last chorus:

This hole you put me in
Wasn’t deep enough
And I’m coming out right now
You’re running out of place to hide from me
When you go home just know that I will remember you
If living was the hardest part
Well then one day we’ll be together
And in the end we’ll fall apart
I will be there one last time

When you go home just know I will remember you

I’ve lost my fear of falling
I will be with you
I will be with you.


Naruto finally stepped into his puny apartment and threw his keys onto the counter and flopped down onto his bed and immediately falling asleep the song playing in his head over and over again.

(please leave comments! I actually like them.)

OneU2


OneU2

PostPosted: Mon Dec 24, 2007 9:52 pm


whimpers
nobody loves me. X(
PostPosted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 9:02 pm


hey that's a very good story. i love it! i'm curious to find out what happens next.

punk_rocker_wanabe


rina_harada

PostPosted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 12:33 am


I like the story~
=D
It's cute.
I'd love to read more <333
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