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Xiaa

PostPosted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 11:03 pm


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Does Tifa's right (your left) shoulder look a little too short? Is it just me?

Uhmm, I need help with the shoulders >___< Of course, if you see more mistakes, just point them out. I'm not finished with her left arm yet XDD
PostPosted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 8:18 am


-: What made the shoulder look smaller was probably because the elbow appeared too soon. One idea you could do is measure the shoulder to about mid-waist and just use that to maesure the other shoulder.

If you want, for a more dramatic look, you can have the shoulders and the waist going in different directions such as having one going upwards and the other downwards. It's just a suggestion, though. :-


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Xiaa

PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 12:47 pm


Thanks! I guess her elbow did appear too soon. I'm not sure about the shoulders and waist going opposite directions, but I'll give it a shot to see if I like it.
PostPosted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 4:56 am


I hope this is at least a little useful :3
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Awesome picture, by the way. Love it <3

I didn't do too much to it, because it looks to me like you know what you're doing better than me,... so... yeah XD

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