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Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 9:25 am
My love lasts forever, But he doesnt know, I smile and say not loving me's okay. He thinks I dont love him but dear lord he doesnt know, I cant stop loving him and ill never show. When he needs me ill gladly be there, Not like that girl I cannot bear. She uses and abuses, I love and I care, He likes her better, Well thats his cross to bare.
Light in my eyes, But sorrow in my soul, The light hides the pain, The betrayal gives someone something to gain, I want to forget, I dont want to know, For my soul is torn beyond my repair, My eyes cry blood red tears, Those tears fall upon a ground darker then the seven hells.
Lemmi know what you think of them, please?
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Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 11:29 am
they were bith really good. XD
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Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 2:13 pm
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Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 2:41 am
i really liked the second one, it was very good
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