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TvIaMsOqTuHeYz

Dangerous Loiterer

PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2012 6:57 pm


@ City
Eh, she was raised as a spider, and she actually grows to an immense size whenever she transforms. Honestly I can't convey the transformation as I'd like to, but take it as a curse mark transformation, except she increases in such size that she is large enough to allow her to eat a human. Then she slowly reverts back to normal, digesting the human down to nothingness.

@ Hinote
But why should their background matter? I mean Zin's is much worse, he is literally a clone of Orochimaru, and he killed people as a small child. She was just born to the original Matriarch of a coven that treated her as a goddess. She never really learned anything, except about medical jutsu during this time. Up until her 8th or 9th year of life she didn't even know she was special, she just knew that she was worshiped as a goddess. I'm not trying to get Panthers in trouble or anything, but if he gets to have a clone of a notoriously evil villain, then I don't see why I can't have a girl who was worshiped as a goddess by a cult.
PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2012 6:59 pm


Oh good. I was worried I'd have to go assassinate her. >>

A City Of Fools

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TvIaMsOqTuHeYz

Dangerous Loiterer

PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2012 7:08 pm


But... Why would you assassinate her? She is nothing but a small Bloodsoaked innocent slight sociopath girl!
PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2012 7:15 pm


Because I didn't want her to live... And my character kills people for a living, and would probably be like "The ******** are you? Oh yeah, dead. Wait, give it a second.... Okay, now you're dead." xD
You know how some people like to see unique things? He likes to kill unique things.

A City Of Fools

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TvIaMsOqTuHeYz

Dangerous Loiterer

PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2012 7:20 pm


gonk

Hopefully she can gain a bit of power before she ever meets him... gonk
PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2012 7:24 pm


I start at chuunin, will rise quickly, and will be undetectable to anyone my rank or lower as long as they don't have a kekkai genkai that heightens senses or some such. So you're screwed. xD

A City Of Fools

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TvIaMsOqTuHeYz

Dangerous Loiterer

PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2012 7:31 pm


Well, I'm cramming for the Web Area jutsu now. >.> Then I can cover the area in threads at all times, and know when people are around. gonk
PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2012 7:33 pm


You think a master assassin that is virtually undetectable will fall for your trick? xD
Hell, he might even kill her with a bow and arrow if I can get one of those. XD

A City Of Fools

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TvIaMsOqTuHeYz

Dangerous Loiterer

PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2012 7:40 pm


But the threads are like a spider's silk, nearly invisible without the correct amount of light.

Plus unless you just happen to metagame, everyone that knows she can is dead, so you'd have to see her preform it, otherwise she just seems like a small child.
PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2012 7:46 pm


TvIaMsOqTuHeYz
But why should their background matter? I mean Zin's is much worse, he is literally a clone of Orochimaru, and he killed people as a small child. She was just born to the original Matriarch of a coven that treated her as a goddess. She never really learned anything, except about medical jutsu during this time. Up until her 8th or 9th year of life she didn't even know she was special, she just knew that she was worshiped as a goddess. I'm not trying to get Panthers in trouble or anything, but if he gets to have a clone of a notoriously evil villain, then I don't see why I can't have a girl who was worshiped as a goddess by a cult.


Zin's is much worse?

Child of Orochimaru, rather enjoys science, snakes, and killing people. Usually for the sake of science.

Cannibalistic girl with goddess complex, eats humans to survive, worshiped as a child, turns into giant spider.

No. Zin's is not, in fact, worse. Zin's background suggests that he killed people as a child. He's a murderous psychopath. David killed his own parents. Neither of them however, ATE their parents, (or anyone else) were worshiped by their own cult, and turn into gia-... Nevermind on that last one...

The point is, you want to make an evil character? Fine. Good. Do what you want. But it has to be within human reason, and the character has to have a legitimate claim to be a member of a village. Your character as described in this conversation would be more likely to be the target of an assassination mission or lying on Zin's experiment table than a member of any village. Especially as a genin.

You have a terrible habit of writing your characters to be more than they are legitimately allowed to be. Laxus, your existing character, has the air that he's supposed to be some sort of royalty constantly, though that's a common flaw in most RPers, so can easily be ignored. This character though, just takes so many absurd ideas and crams them all into one. The only way such a character could ever legitimately EXIST, is as a monster NPC for the sake of a story or random mission. For reasons I already stated, it simply does not work for an RPC.

Edit: Anyways. I' not going to spend my first (Partial) day home in a pointless argument over something like this. It's not worth it, and I have far more important things to focus on. I shall see you all tomorrow.

Hinote Tosatsu
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PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2012 7:55 pm


TvIaMsOqTuHeYz
But the threads are like a spider's silk, nearly invisible without the correct amount of light.

Plus unless you just happen to metagame, everyone that knows she can is dead, so you'd have to see her preform it, otherwise she just seems like a small child.


Kumo threads are not like that. They are hard and thick. And ******** brown.
PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2012 8:19 pm


Hinote Tosatsu
... A character with that sort of background cannot exist as an RPC. MAYBE as an NPC villian, but as an RPC it is completely unfeasible, and unreasonable to allow. I don't know if Greg reads backgrounds before approving a character, but if a character was discovered to have such a background it would need to be either scrapped, or have it's background completely redone.


I do have a tendency to not read backgrounds very carefully. I'll start doing that from now on.

Gregar828
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TvIaMsOqTuHeYz

Dangerous Loiterer

PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2012 8:33 pm


A City Of Fools


The jutsu describes it as a spider's thread, not a Kumo member's thread. I know it doesn't seem right, but there are quite a few holes in the Clan.

@ Hinote

Not child, Clone of Orochimaru, does enjoy a morphed sick twisted science that allows him to convert humans into zombies, Loves snakes to the point he'd rather have snakes for companions, torturing people in the open for the entire village to see, holding the families of the tortured in the front so that they see the horrible ways Zin massacres the offenders to his iron law.

Girl who drinks blood to survive like a spider and was worshiped since she was a child and therefore never knew anything different, Eats small animals, and was fed humans by her coven once a month, or twice a month if it was a special occasion, Again, it was due to her mother proclaiming her child to be the heir to the coven, and being born in her true form, turns into a giant spider.

Zin's background confirms he slaughtered at least one person in cold blood, as a child without any training what so ever, and before the ANBU realized what happened. David was brought up by you, there is no comparison. Zin didn't feel like eating anyone, if he felt like trying it, he probably would eat a bit of a human. Zin basically is worshiped by the other Naga bloodline members. Jin is easily strong enough to kill him, yet he doesn't because he is the "Offspring" of the ex-leader. That is the exact circumstances of Ame's position in the coven, except instead of being created in a tube, she ate her mother from the inside.

I don't understand why, Murasaki, Keishi's rpc has no claim to being a member of Konohagakure, and she has a demon within her, something Zin would be much more likely to want to know more about than Ame's genetic quirk. I'm not saying it wouldn't happen, but she'd take a back seat to Zin's current plans.

No, Laxus is just up tight. He doesn't believe he should be royalty, he believes he should be treated with respect, and seen as more than just an underling. He doesn't like useless waste, and he likes to be surrounded by people who don't intentionally annoy him. He mentions he wants an estate, but that is to replace the estate that he lost after killing his parents. He mentions that he wants to become the leader of Kumogakure, but that is because he wants to reform it so that it is a great village of immense power. He has the drive to be the best Raiton user around. He does not however believe himself to be royalty, or even want to become royalty. The reason I said lighting prince when I made him was because it was fitting, He wants to become the strongest Raiton wielder, and a prince is supposedly a powerful individual. That's the only connection to royalty unless I mistakenly put him saying he wants to become the King of Kumogakure in one of my posts. If so, I'm sorry, that was a fault of my own.

It isn't that overboard... Luo is worshiped ( Or at least was ) by Fordon. Zin, like I mentioned before, is basically worshiped by the other NPC members of the Naga bloodline. So having a character who was worshiped ( As in is no longer worshiped ) isn't that outrageous. If need be, I'll rewrite the Kumo bloodline so that her "Talent" is a part of the clan ( Which should be a bloodline as you can't train and gain four extra arms. ) as a second stage. Just because of her past she isn't allowed to exist? That doesn't make much sense, seeing as if that was the case, going by that logic, Zin would have been killed outright for simply being a creation of Orochimaru. As an RPC, she would only be capable of accessing this power in moments when she needs it, not just willy-nilly. It physically hurts her to revert back to normal, so she tends to avoid using it.

Also, I'd like to add that I'm not arguing, I'm completely calm while writing this, and I don't mean to type it as if I'm angry. I've tried multiple times to explain this in the recent months, however you don't seem to listen to me, and you simply keep writing me off as arguing. I'm not, I'm really not anymore. Now I'm attempting to further explain myself in a manner that I hope you understand, and attempting to grasp why it can't work. Please, I know I'm not your favorite person in this guild, I'm probably your least favorite, but don't just write me off as always wrong, or always arguing. I'm making an honest effort to remove that title from me, but if you keep it there, then I'll never truly be rid of it. Please, I'm literally begging that you simply give me another chance. I'm merely trying to state my case, and being given the answer " It simply isn't acceptable. " Is very confusing. Like when you were a child, and your parents gave the answer " Because I said so. " It answers no questions and only leads to more. Then when you cease to explain things pertaining to a different situation, you negate any possibility of me ever comprehending why things can and cannot be within the guild.
PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2012 8:38 pm


Hinote Tosatsu


On that note; Welcome back Capt'n I trust you had a good vacation?

-X Duo Yiro X-

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Hinote Tosatsu
Vice Captain

Eloquent Lunatic

PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2012 8:50 pm


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Girl who drinks blood to survive like a spider and was worshiped since she was a child and therefore never knew anything different, Eats small animals, and was fed humans by her coven once a month, or twice a month if it was a special occasion, Again, it was due to her mother proclaiming her child to be the heir to the coven, and being born in her true form, turns into a giant spider.


One human death a month, every month, for fifteen years or thereabouts, going by your profile's stated age. That equates to one hundred and eighty human deaths. Plus one for each "Special Occasion". Now, in the setting of POTS, that easily equates to a few villages if they were all taken at once. I assume that the cultists did not immediately start lining up to be lunch, so I'd guess that they started by kidnapping humans from nearby villages to feed the character. Over the course of a single year, that being at least twelve deaths, someone would have noticed them going missing. By the time the second year passed, they would be very very worried about what was happening to their people. And before the third year was out, they would be hiring shinobi to find and kill whatever was killing people. Thusly, before this character reached the age of five, she would have been killed by ninja sent to destroy a murdering monster. In doing so they would find a cult kidnapping a human, and follow them to find the rest of the group. They would then spot the spider person. They would not automatically realize that this is an unknowing child, they would see only a monster, and kill it, as ordered.

So, this character is, as I said, impossible. Is it a bit more clear now that I've written out the entire thought process? And that isn't even going into the effects that would have on the character itself such that any village would be more likely to lock them up or kill them than even consider training them as one of their own.
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