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Posted: Sun May 12, 2013 3:14 pm
tanqela Stardust Drifter tanqela Stardust Drifter tanqela i made a happy story this time ; u ; Very nice story. ^^ lol now that song will be stuck in my head all day. xD thank you. i did make it realistic... but then by the end of it, i realized it was too sad because it made me cry, so i scrapped it and wrote a new one lol lol xD that's cool. ^^ Congrats on winning too smile thank you, but i won by default since no one else joined lol It's alright. smile I would have joined but I was a bit busy last month. ^^; Are you going to enter this month's contest?
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Posted: Sun May 12, 2013 3:15 pm
Stardust Drifter tanqela Stardust Drifter tanqela Stardust Drifter tanqela i made a happy story this time ; u ; Very nice story. ^^ lol now that song will be stuck in my head all day. xD thank you. i did make it realistic... but then by the end of it, i realized it was too sad because it made me cry, so i scrapped it and wrote a new one lol lol xD that's cool. ^^ Congrats on winning too smile thank you, but i won by default since no one else joined lol It's alright. smile I would have joined but I was a bit busy last month. ^^; Are you going to enter this month's contest? i would love to, i have a good idea for it, so i have to now. it probably won't be happy to the guild captain's dismay, but it'll be something i'll be proud of writing. c:
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Posted: Sun May 12, 2013 3:22 pm
tanqela Stardust Drifter tanqela Stardust Drifter tanqela thank you. i did make it realistic... but then by the end of it, i realized it was too sad because it made me cry, so i scrapped it and wrote a new one lol lol xD that's cool. ^^ Congrats on winning too smile thank you, but i won by default since no one else joined lol It's alright. smile I would have joined but I was a bit busy last month. ^^; Are you going to enter this month's contest? i would love to, i have a good idea for it, so i have to now. it probably won't be happy to the guild captain's dismay, but it'll be something i'll be proud of writing. c: Hey that's cool. ^^ I dunno if I'll enter this one honestly. But good luck anyway. smile
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Posted: Sun May 12, 2013 3:24 pm
Stardust Drifter tanqela Stardust Drifter tanqela Stardust Drifter tanqela thank you. i did make it realistic... but then by the end of it, i realized it was too sad because it made me cry, so i scrapped it and wrote a new one lol lol xD that's cool. ^^ Congrats on winning too smile thank you, but i won by default since no one else joined lol It's alright. smile I would have joined but I was a bit busy last month. ^^; Are you going to enter this month's contest? i would love to, i have a good idea for it, so i have to now. it probably won't be happy to the guild captain's dismay, but it'll be something i'll be proud of writing. c: Hey that's cool. ^^ I dunno if I'll enter this one honestly. But good luck anyway. smile thank you c:
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Kasumi Roseglimmer Captain
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Posted: Mon May 13, 2013 11:10 pm
Shade_Angel17 I love it actually, when I was out of state, I read it a couple of times on my niece's kindle. Being that our characters are more or less isolated (And quite possibly the only ones left active in the topic other than Fallen's), cant' we try to do some of that at least? I don't want to call it quits just yet. I'm curious to know what happens to Croix and Kaia, even if you gave some ideas to that in the past. We can continue in the same topic, and later maybe update and transfer what happened to the library if we can give their story an ending? Sorry it took me so long to reply to this comment. I really have a lot on my plate right now. I knew I would get to it eventually but didn't mean to make you wait. Thank you for saying that you love my story. Actually, I can see lots of flaws in it and I don't think it's that good but I did enjoy writing the scene anyway. I think I probably should avoid describing colours for eyes and hair after gem colours...apparently it is overused. ^///^ Lol. I've been reading articles to try and help me improve my writing and character creation. Wow, I'm impressed that you read it a couple of times. cat_surprised I feel like it's got more attention that it derserves. Hehe. Thankies. And yes, I would really like to continue the story along with Fallen Akari-chan if you both are able and happy to. ^_^ I haven't posted replies yet but am working on them. It's a little tricky since basically, I feel like all we have to go off is: 'Some people own Persocoms and use them like this. What will you do?' So coming up with a plot along the way is what I was trying to do with this fanfic/ideas. I'm not sure if it's a good idea to make Croix one of the villains/protaginists or not...but as there wasn't any other ones or goal for everyone to achieve, I thought that would give us one. The real villian of course is meant to be Mr. Blue Hair in that fic since he's controlling them...Lol. Unless someone wants to change that.
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Posted: Mon May 13, 2013 11:29 pm
Darn it, I lost my post! Basically, I said you're welcome, why not touch up your story after learning all that info and we really need to get Kaia pregnant first before we can get that plan into action. I'm not sure what I would change from your story, it's too far ahead in the future for me at the moment.
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Kasumi Roseglimmer Captain
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Posted: Tue May 14, 2013 3:23 am
Oh that happened to me today when I just spent 10 minutes writing one out. Lol. I can empathise with you there.
I will have a look and see if there's anything I can change in the story I have saved on my computer but as I have already submitted it to the contest thread, I won't edit that version as I feel it would be cheating in some way.
Oh and Kaia is pregnant at the current point in the story. The 'kiss' was the catalyst required to start the whole process, since she got a little DNA from Jamie's saliva. This is why she is more tired than usual and can't figure out why. =^.^=
Me too, really. Let's just see how things unfold via rp.
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Posted: Wed May 15, 2013 10:04 pm
Thank you for your entry, I can't wait to see how all the stories match up for this months challenge. mrgreen
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Posted: Wed May 15, 2013 10:20 pm
Viper 9000 Thank you for your entry, I can't wait to see how all the stories match up for this months challenge. mrgreen Not a problem, I was going through some tough issues and this is kind of what came out of it. I was surprised because normally it's a poem. I kind of hope I have at least a chance at winning.
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Posted: Tue May 28, 2013 4:20 am
I've got an entry this month, yay!
Some quick info on Mari before I start the story. She's a blue elf (an eclipse elf if you want to go into detail), that's pretty much all you need to know going in. The rest you can figure out for your self.
Mari let out a nervous groan as she paced around the room. She held in her hands a letter she just got from her parents. They were coming to visit, seeing how she was doing on her own. “Why now.” she grumbled to her self, looking up from the sheet of paper. “I haven't even told them about you.” She walked over to a crib sitting in the room. In the crib lay her sleeping child. “They're going to be so mad when they find out.” Mari said, her child letting out a small coo as she rolled over. Since Mari had moved out of her parents house she had rarely talked to them. She used to spend her nights out with friends till one faithful night she returned home with a man her parents would have never approved of. Even after finding out she was pregnant she didn't say a word to them. Her friends knew and did what they could to help. Mari got lucky with her child, the father being a neko would have lead to multiples. Mari let out another small groan and looked to the door. “Was that them?” She mumbled, moving away from the crib and leaving the room. She quickly made her way to the front door and carefully poked her head out. To her relief it wasn't them, it was the neighbors across the hall returning to their home. Mari shut the door and sighed. “Thank goodness.” She said, only to be surprised by a knock. After releasing her chest from death hold she opened the door and just as she feared, there stood her parents. The door was quickly pushed open as a large blue elf pushed her way in to hug her daughter. “Hello Mari!” Kurai elated, squeezing Mari against her breasts and belly. “It's been too long, you never called and we were starting to worry.” She said, releasing Mari and looking down. “Dear, have you gained weight?” She asked, Mari blushing some. “Yeah, so?” She asked. Kurai grinned. “Nothing, it's just been quite a while since I've seen you with a bit of a gut.” Her mother giggled. “I think the last time she had a tummy was just before her growth spurt.” Her second mother said, entering the house now that Kurai had moved. Zena smiled and gave her daughter a hug as well, though compared to Kurai there wasn't as much squishing against her. Mari squirmed slightly, she knew her mothers loved her but for her they were a bit over affectionate. “How are you doing sweetie?” Zena asked. Mari nodded and forced a smile. “I've been doing fine, just been a bit busy. You know, work and classes and all that.” She said. Mari winced as a cry rang through the apartment, her cover blown only seconds after her parents stepped in. They stood there in an awkward moment as her baby cried, her parents looking to her curiously. “I think someone's calling for you.” Zena said. Mari nodded and quickly went to calm her baby. She went into her room and over to the crib to pick up her crying daughter, rocking her slowly. “shh, shh, it's ok, mommy is here, shh, it's ok.” she whispered as she rocked her daughter. Mari paced around the room slowly as she calmed her little girl, she in turn quiting down and snuggling up to her mother. Once the baby was quite, she carried her out into the living room to meet her grandparents. Zena and Kurai had already made them selves comfy on the lone couch. When Mari entered the room they both moved over so she could sit between them. It felt like a trap to Mari, but it was the only place she had to sit right now. She sat down between them, looking down guiltily to her daughter as her mothers sandwiched her slightly. “So what's her name?” Kurai asked, leaning over some to get a better look at the child Mari cradled. “o-oh, uh, her names Firi.” Mari said, looking up to her mothers smiling face. “That's a nice name.” Zena said, Mari turning her head to look to her other mother. “How old is she?” Zena asked, moving her hand overto see if Firi wanted to play. “About a month old.” Mari said, Firi grabbing Zenas fingers and tugging. Mari was surprised, her parents weren't at all mad at the fact she had kept their grandchild a secret. They were never super strict while raising her but she had thought her being unmarried and already raising a child would have set something off. “So, you aren't mad?” Mari asked, hoping they weren't bottling it up. They both shook their heads and smiled. “Why would we?” Zena asked, pulling gently as Firi continued to pull at her fingers. Mari waited a moment before answering. “well, I'm not married and this is the first you're even hearing of me even having sex.” She said. Kurai giggled some. “Dear, you're not the first in this family to have a baby alone, you're not going to be the last.” She said, opening her arms out some. “Can I hold her?” Mari smiled and nodded. “Sure you can mom.” She said. “Aw but I'm still playing with her.” Zena whined, her fingers currently resting in Firi mouth. “Then I'll move so you can keep playing with her.” Mari said, having to pull Zenas fingers from her daughters mouth. After getting Firi into Kurais arms Mari moved so Zena could continue playing. Mari sat back down and looked to her parents, she smiled warmly as they continued talking, catching up with Mari on the last few months.
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Posted: Fri May 31, 2013 1:38 pm
Thank you for all your entries! The stories were really good this month and I had a hard time choosing one over the others. xd But all the same, the stories have been judged and our winner of this month's writing contest is... Meyaira Firespring! 3nodding Congratulations! Stay tuned for next month's prompt and another chance at 4,000 gold!
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Posted: Fri May 31, 2013 1:53 pm
wait, wouldn't the deadline have been tomorrow? because it is only the 31st of May now. o.o
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Posted: Fri May 31, 2013 1:56 pm
tanqela wait, wouldn't the deadline have been tomorrow? because it is only the 31st of May now. o.o Shh... I jumped the deadline a tiny bit. xd I wasn't going to be on later tonight to change it so I wanted to do it now while I was on the computer. ninja
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Posted: Fri May 31, 2013 2:00 pm
Viper 9000 tanqela wait, wouldn't the deadline have been tomorrow? because it is only the 31st of May now. o.o Shh... I jumped the deadline a tiny bit. xd I wasn't going to be on later tonight to change it so I wanted to do it now while I was on the computer. ninja i was almost done with my story emo oh well lol
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