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What's your favorite type of thing to write?
Poetry (Their short simple enough)
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 35%  [ 7 ]
Songs (I just got that beat ya know?)XD
15%
 15%  [ 3 ]
Short Stories
15%
 15%  [ 3 ]
Plays (Oh Romeo, oh quiet with the Shakespeare)
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 0%  [ 0 ]
Novels
15%
 15%  [ 3 ]
Other
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 20%  [ 4 ]
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 19, 2004 11:14 am


New Poem:

Dancing Rain

Blue droplets fall
fall from the sky
far above here.
My eyes stare out
was it all a dream?

Because I saw
a man dancing
praying that
sorrow for whoever
would end swiftly.

In a flash of light
he changed
into someone close
I ran and slipped
I thought he died.

And yet now
there's no trace.
It's as if
the man
was dancing in the rain for me.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 10:56 am


That was a nice poem. wink

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 12:20 pm


Jinsei
That was a nice poem. wink


Thanks. biggrin I always use rain to represent something when I write. I can't really figure that much out why though. I had a lot of diffuculties deciding what to name that poem too.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 12:25 pm


Rain is lovely. So inspiring, isn't it? xd We don't get much of it here..

That was a good title choice. ^^

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 12:31 pm


Jinsei
Rain is lovely. So inspiring, isn't it? xd We don't get much of it here..

That was a good title choice. ^^


The other was Dancing Man in Rain I think. Not sure. Rain is insipiring. I love the smell right after it rains too, it helps me think and sleep a lot too. xd
PostPosted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 12:38 pm


Haha, I hate the smell of rain on tar. Icky. domokun xd But other than that, it's nice..

"Dancing Rain" is cleaner-sounding. whee

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 1:17 pm


Jinsei
Haha, I hate the smell of rain on tar. Icky. domokun xd But other than that, it's nice..

"Dancing Rain" is cleaner-sounding. whee


I'm glad you agree. ^_^
PostPosted: Sun Aug 22, 2004 4:55 pm


Izu's big work that been delayed...here's a summary:

DPS's or Demon Possessing Syndrome is attacking the earth at a high paced speed. Fleet 21 the police crew responsible for stopping this is made up of high school teenagers selected by special abilities. However not all are alike though, one of the members is known as 'Ghost'. What happens when someone tries to see past that facade and falls in love in the process? Will it last or will theire reputations keep them apart? Did I mention that the police don't support Fleet 21?

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 22, 2004 9:52 pm


Sounds X-men like. Jinsei approves. xd heart
PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 6:21 am


Jinsei
Sounds X-men like. Jinsei approves. xd heart


Far from X-men I assure you. The powers are a lot more down to earth than those in X-men as well. We have a mind-reader, a telekentic, a precognit, and a water summoner. xd Personally I prefer the the telekentic character...she scares people a lot and so do I.

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 8:00 am


Yummy. Show me some of it when you have the chance, please and thank you. ^o^
PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 8:15 am


Jinsei
Yummy. Show me some of it when you have the chance, please and thank you. ^o^


Why of course. I'll put up a scene from it for you. The one I tend to use more often.

Exerpt from Chapter 16: Dawn Part Two

"Are you looking for someone?" It was a male voice, and for a moment the voice sounded like it belonged to him.

His facial features were pure puzzlement, the hair a light shade of brown. In fact it was almost mistaken for blond every now and then. His eyes though were pure emerald staring up as if waiting for a response.

"I thought I saw someone run up here." She commented as he looked a bit bewildered by it.

"No one comes up here anymore, mam. Not even us monks." His voice sounded sad, but she tried to ignore it. The room was indeed surrounded by cobwebs, and the floor needed treatment. Dark and drairy now, remenants of shoes faded in a corner.

"May I ask why?" Her voice was calm, not letting on a thing.

"A young lad by the name of Hisaki was training to be a monk here. He one day dissappeared without a trace and then we found a message written over the alter." He pulled out a copy and handed it to her. "Here. We are not to speak of this, but I have a great feeling you will need this."

Tsubasa nodded opening the piece of parchment by herside. Her eyes widened as it seemed to be chopped in half. She crumpled up the parchment and put it in her pocket. "Thank you."

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 8:20 am


heart xd That was nice, and mysterious. ^^

Though...I think "drairy" was meant to be "dreary"? And "remnants"? "Disappeared"? "Altar"?

Heh. redface
PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 8:22 am


Jinsei
heart xd That was nice, and mysterious. ^^

Though...I think "drairy" was meant to be "dreary"? And "remnants"? "Disappeared"? "Altar"?

Heh. redface


*coughs* I'm horrid at spelling, and it hasn't been edited like my earlier chapters have.

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 8:23 am


I'm sorry. I'm a spelling Nazi. xd They just stood out, so I thought I'd mention them..
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