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 Posted: Sat Jun 25, 2005 10:24 pm
Ack, your poems are getting a little more cliche. (No more ryhming >_< Addicitve though)
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Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2005 10:10 am
Xeroxer Ack, your poems are getting a little more cliche. (No more ryhming >_< Addicitve though)
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Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2005 12:15 pm
[ Message temporarily off-line ]
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Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2005 3:00 pm
yeah over half the time, I don't want to rhyme. razz I'm a teenager no matter how you look at me. 15 is the typical teen age.
Vocabulary? I like to keep different words. I don't like to use 'big' words in somple concept poems. I like to use them in my short stories, and longer poems/songs that are meant to tell of something.
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 12:23 am
Did'Ja Wonder?
Every morning I wake up,
put on a smile even though it's tough,
Joke around, have some fun,
no woner noone ever caught on...
(guitar instrumentals single out)
(drum beat comes in once more/base)
(course)
She's so perfect they say,
she wouldn't have it any other way,
designer cloths,
on the run
Damn she's the lucky one...
(guitar instrumentals single out)
(beat slows)
My world goes on upside down,
truning round and round and round,
what goes up, must come down,
I'm sorry to say it...but the love's all gone.
(beat goes fast & song picks up)
(course)
and she's so perfect they say,
She's so perfect they say,
she wouldn't have it any other way,
designer cloths,
on the run
Damn she's the lucky one...
(beat slows)
The poisoned blood runs through my veigns,
form harsh words and all your games,
stop it now before I crack..
Can's you please get off my back?!?!?!
(beat quickens)
(course)
and she's so perfect they say,
she wouldn't have it any other way,
designer cloths,
on the run
Damn she's the lucky oonnnneee...
o0o0o0o0o
she's so luck..
she's so lucky...
damn she's lucky..
she's the lucky oneeee.
( **note:** I generally write songs instead of poetry, but I write poetry too. This is just a song ive been working on recently and thought I'd share it. I sing/song write alot and am curently working on a band. I hope you enjoyed the song and hope I can get some feedback on it. (: If anyone wants to know the tune/beats, I can add them too).
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 8:44 am
One of my much darker songs.
Toxicated Rx
It's been all my life
that the end has been in sight
I don't want to defend
myself against the knife
whiskey on my breath
drunk in pain and meth
intoxicated until I die (dreams die)(a)
intoxicated until I die (seams untied)(b)
intoxicated until I die (end in sight)(c)
intoxicated until I die (WHY?!?)(d)
taken in by a motherless b*****d
woken by a hunger inside
raped by your love
punished until I'm numb
swallowed in a sea of rejected cyanide
drank myself insane
medicated by cocaine (life lied)(e)
medicated by cocaine (you ******** lied)(f)
medicated by cocaine (life lied)(g)
medicated by cocaine (lied lied)(h)
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 8:14 pm
Angels of the night.
Long to take flight.
To the streets of our hearts.
Wings of darkness make their mark.
Wearing masks of their saviors betrayal.
Eyes of coal.
Their lost wandering souls
Waiting upon hand and knee
To something they never wanted to see
Where is your god now? where is his gentle cradle?
They were cast aside.
and forced to hide.
Longing to live in paradise
Where they could no longer feel the vice.
That was placed upn their mind.
So they weep.
Knowing they could never sleep.
Hoping to be saved
But all ending up betrayed.
Now knowing their god was never kind.
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 8:55 pm
I found the Prelude of a larger song that I wrote for Lazuli Kitten months ago. (back when she was Lazulioneal) xp
lifes a wonderful
beautiful
song to sing
a page turning book
to read
gave me no dirty look
your text reads of joy
mine of a boy
who sequels in your love
trilogies in our family of hearts
and continues as a saga as we live on
and here's your song
of how beautiful life is
and cheers to our life
tears of love and joy
brought into my eyes
maybe i'm wrong
about who i am
maybe this song
will proove to you
who i am
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 9:37 pm
Playground
These days it seems
That nothing is going as planned.
Family diying
Babies crying
All is in a haze.
I can't seem to find my way
Back to how life is ment to be.
Why can't things just be like they used to;
Back when I cried because I cut my finger open
Not when I cry for loosing my loved ones.
I wish I could just be little again
Back when death didn't affect me as much;
When I didn't even know what it meant,
Meant for someone to die.
Someone dies and I feel the pain,
I feel it because I know now,
I know what it means when they die.
When they die they can never come back;
They can never hold me like they used to,
Never hug and embrace me when I'm scared.
Why can't I just be litte again,
When the world was my happy little playground.
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 2:40 pm
Ooh... All these poems make me sad. gonk So I will post this oh-so-original poem and it goes like this:
Roses are red.
Violets are blue.
Sugar is sweet
And so are you!
Go me! I am the QUEEN of Originality. Oh yeah. cool
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2005 10:18 pm
Mikaila Storm Ooh... All these poems make me sad. gonk So I will post this oh-so-original poem and it goes like this:
Roses are red.
Violets are blue.
Sugar is sweet
And so are you!
Go me! I am the QUEEN of Originality. Oh yeah. cool
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Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2005 11:05 am
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Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2005 10:59 pm
When it was over
I told you why
You didn't want to believe me
Even though you knew it was true
You always used me
Tried to take advantage of me
The worst part was
I actuallt let you
Now that I finaly see
You try to apoligise
But you know what
I wont execpt it
No more will I be aboused
I wont stand for it
You had a nice run
But now it's over
You ask me again why it's over
Thats simple, It's not me it's you.
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Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2005 11:17 am
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Posted: Sat Jul 09, 2005 12:55 am
Brink
Every day I try
I try so hard.
But today I stoped trying
I just don't care anymore
You pushed me to this point
Where I just give up
You've made me cold
I just don't care anymore
After everything you've done
You expect to come back
As if nothing ever happened, but
I just don't care anymore
You see these tears
They're from the pain you've caused
I've cried so much and now
I just don't care anymore
If you get killed
I know I'll cry
But you've made it where
I just don't care anymore
So now I leave you alone
And noone else will be there
You've drivven them all away and
I just don't care anymore
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