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 Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 6:21 pm
Yay for epilouges!
And I love my poll option. I've always wanted one dedicated to me.
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Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 3:26 am
xD
All you have to do is ask and I'll dedicate them to you.
Did you like the ending? Or should I make an alternate?
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Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 1:46 pm
Ebony Beauty I have an ending, but I haven't posted it yet. sad Sorry for the confusion. Tei, it's not. But I wanted someone to die in this story, but then I'd start crying. sad I know that feeling.
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Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 1:50 pm
Tei, it's a sad feeling. emo
I'll post the epilogue now.
I saw your home yesterday in the towns! It was cool! 4laugh
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Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 1:52 pm
YAY FOR EPILOGUES!
And I like the ending. 3nodding I don't think it needs an alternate, unless you want it too.
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Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 1:55 pm
I think that that epilouge wrapped up everything nicely, Ebony. I personally suck at epilouges, they always just turn out badly.
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Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 2:01 pm
Ebony Beauty Tei, it's a sad feeling. emo I'll post the epilogue now. I saw your home yesterday in the towns! It was cool! 4laugh Now, you are going to think this is random, but it actually has something to do with what you're talking about. In Health class we were talking about defense mechanisms. We watched a movie called Speak. During the movie art class got a budget cut and the teacher, Mr. Freeman, was upset, so he did a painting. Mr. Freeman: [describing his painting] It's night in Venice. This is the color of an accountant's soul - a love rejected. This, I once grew mold on an orange this color when I was living in Boston. And these are various members of the school board. You see, if somethings eating at you you gotta find a way to use it.
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Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 2:14 pm
GMC, thanks. heart
I doubt yours turn out as bad as they do. Writers are their worse critics.
Like with my story right now.. I think its not very good, but one of the better things I've written in a LONG long time.
Tei, I don't get it. sad
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 3:24 am
emo
I hope everyone who wanted to read it got the chance to before the thread dies.
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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 10:10 am
Do you guys think that I should put this story in the school newspaper?
As like.. installments? The first part first and then the next part and then so on. Kinda like how I did it with you guys?
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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 10:35 am
Ebony Beauty Do you guys think that I should put this story in the school newspaper? As like.. installments? The first part first and then the next part and then so on. Kinda like how I did it with you guys? yeah totaly I really like that story ALOT! hahaha it's really well done congrats.
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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 10:47 am
Alex_Trieze Ebony Beauty Do you guys think that I should put this story in the school newspaper? As like.. installments? The first part first and then the next part and then so on. Kinda like how I did it with you guys? yeah totaly I really like that story ALOT! hahaha it's really well done congrats. Thanks Alex. I'm not sure if I should.. They probably wouldn't get it.
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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 10:53 am
Ebony Beauty Alex_Trieze Ebony Beauty Do you guys think that I should put this story in the school newspaper? As like.. installments? The first part first and then the next part and then so on. Kinda like how I did it with you guys? yeah totaly I really like that story ALOT! hahaha it's really well done congrats. Thanks Alex. I'm not sure if I should.. They probably wouldn't get it. What's not to get it's a story about a family and their coming together after being apart and the love that they share. It's seems pretty straight forward to me. Confidence my dear sweet girl is what it's all about.
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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 10:58 am
Alex_Trieze Ebony Beauty Alex_Trieze Ebony Beauty Do you guys think that I should put this story in the school newspaper? As like.. installments? The first part first and then the next part and then so on. Kinda like how I did it with you guys? yeah totaly I really like that story ALOT! hahaha it's really well done congrats. Thanks Alex. I'm not sure if I should.. They probably wouldn't get it. What's not to get it's a story about a family and their coming together after being apart and the love that they share. It's seems pretty straight forward to me. Confidence my dear sweet girl is what it's all about. Yeah, I like the story and all, but other people that I go to school with. I'm not sure if they will criticize it. It would hurt if they did.
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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 11:31 am
Ebony Beauty Alex_Trieze Ebony Beauty Alex_Trieze Ebony Beauty Do you guys think that I should put this story in the school newspaper? As like.. installments? The first part first and then the next part and then so on. Kinda like how I did it with you guys? yeah totaly I really like that story ALOT! hahaha it's really well done congrats. Thanks Alex. I'm not sure if I should.. They probably wouldn't get it. What's not to get it's a story about a family and their coming together after being apart and the love that they share. It's seems pretty straight forward to me. Confidence my dear sweet girl is what it's all about. Yeah, I like the story and all, but other people that I go to school with. I'm not sure if they will criticize it. It would hurt if they did. I guess I could see how your ego would take a bit a ding, but you won't ever know if your writing is any good unless you let other people see it and tell you what they like and dislike about it. You could always post as an anonymous (sp) writer.
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