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What's your favorite type of thing to write?
Poetry (Their short simple enough)
35%
 35%  [ 7 ]
Songs (I just got that beat ya know?)XD
15%
 15%  [ 3 ]
Short Stories
15%
 15%  [ 3 ]
Plays (Oh Romeo, oh quiet with the Shakespeare)
0%
 0%  [ 0 ]
Novels
15%
 15%  [ 3 ]
Other
20%
 20%  [ 4 ]
Total Votes : 20


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PostPosted: Fri Aug 06, 2004 2:34 am


Jinsei
Change is good, yes. ^^ Well, most kinds of change are, anyway...


I don't think anyone expected me to change so much. xd
PostPosted: Fri Aug 06, 2004 2:37 am


In what ways? -tilts head curiously- 3nodding

I'm gonna hit the sack now...^^ I'll be back in the morning. Or maybe around 2 your time, because I have to do my crap and work in the mornings.. -.-;; Anywho, oyasumi! heart

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 06, 2004 2:39 am


Jinsei
In what ways? -tilts head curiously- 3nodding

I'm gonna hit the sack now...^^ I'll be back in the morning. Or maybe around 2 your time, because I have to do my crap and work in the mornings.. -.-;; Anywho, oyasumi! heart


Gnight. And enjoy your rest.
PostPosted: Thu Aug 12, 2004 4:17 pm


I have a new...poem/song. I don't really know what to call this one...it'd be one hell of a short song though...so I'll call it a poem.

Falling

Just as the music fades
You’re shadowed in the horizon
Yelling and screaming
How things won’t work
Because I won’t change
I thought acceptance
Meant that the other person
Accepted you without change

So we’re falling,
It’s growing dark
Where love roamed
Now anger and lies consume.
Falling down
Deeper into darkness
And we can’t get out.

The rain is pouring
Left a note on your porch
Hope you’ll come
If you still care
I know you’ll come
Otherwise this darkness has won.

So now I’m falling,
It’s growing dark
Where love roamed
Now sadness lays next to my pillow
Falling down,
You can save me
I can’t get out on my own.

Fleeting steps
Guess you cared enough
To ensure that I wasn’t gone.
You actually knew
That I had left you.
I wasn’t going to stand
And stain your perfect life.

My body shakes,
And warm arms wrap me.
Suddenly I feel warm
Has the falling stopped?
I open my eyes
Only to realize
That the falling
Is never going to stop.

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2004 12:59 am


That was lovely. Beautiful. Amazing. It'd be an excellent song. eek
PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2004 7:38 am


Jinsei
That was lovely. Beautiful. Amazing. It'd be an excellent song. eek


redface Thanks. You flatter me way too much. That's what something looks like after five minutes believe it or not. I usually don't do any revising to my poems unless it's spelling, because i tend to screw the beat up anyways.

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2004 1:04 pm


I only deliver compliments where they are due. wink xd

I revise poems over and over. I like writing short stories more, though. sweatdrop
PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2004 1:41 pm


Jinsei
I only deliver compliments where they are due. wink xd

I revise poems over and over. I like writing short stories more, though. sweatdrop


ah thanks sweatdrop . Off topic though I'm looking to buy a Gackt cd, any suggestions on which one?

I revise short stories of mine a lot...

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2004 1:50 pm


It'd be best to ask Inai or her mom, probably. 3nodding Sadly I only have one CD, Crescent. Which is awesome, by the way. I recommend it. I would have bought more, but I spent my money on some Dir en Grey instead. gonk

Still, better to ask an expert. wink
PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2004 1:54 pm


Jinsei
It'd be best to ask Inai or her mom, probably. 3nodding Sadly I only have one CD, Crescent. Which is awesome, by the way. I recommend it. I would have bought more, but I spent my money on some Dir en Grey instead. gonk

Still, better to ask an expert. wink


k. She was on earlier, but I forgot to ask her. *groans* Thanks though. Crescent and Rebirth is what I was looking at. 3nodding

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2004 1:57 pm


In that case, the next Gackt CD I buy shall be Rebirth. blaugh Well...that or Moon. Because Moon looked good, too. xd
PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2004 2:03 pm


Jinsei
In that case, the next Gackt CD I buy shall be Rebirth. blaugh Well...that or Moon. Because Moon looked good, too. xd


Moon looked good too...mom's having a stroke when I mentioned that I wanted to buy something off the internet again. She had one after I ordered my backpack and my WHR dvds in the same week. lol.

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2004 2:05 pm


Lol, OK. sweatdrop xd

You know something, I still haven't gotten those DeG CDs I ordered off of Ebay. Perhaps it's because they're sleeping at the post office and we have to go pick up the mail from over the vacation? sweatdrop They better be there! scream xd
PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2004 2:07 pm


Jinsei
Lol, OK. sweatdrop xd

You know something, I still haven't gotten those DeG CDs I ordered off of Ebay. Perhaps it's because they're sleeping at the post office and we have to go pick up the mail from over the vacation? sweatdrop They better be there! scream xd


Ah maybe?

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2004 2:15 pm


crying xd
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